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Reviewer: piperann_25 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Pizza and Boys

Holy shit hell yes I loved that bella just punched mike

Author's Response:

It just had to be done.

Alice.x

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found

i wonder what jasper will tell alice!

update soon pleease!!!!



Author's Response:

He'll tell her the truth of course. Haha.

Will do.

Alice.x

Reviewer: TeamAlice (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found

OH! Oreo! Can I have  a mint one? yummmmmm 



Author's Response:

Of course you can. =D

Alice.x

Reviewer: smilingrightnow7 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found

A lot. I hate you a lot for leaving it there.

*makes a puoty face*

Update soon and maybe i'll forgive you.

Or maybe not, I dunno, that was just plain cruel and unusaul punishment right there.

~:-)



Author's Response:

Haha, hopefully you'll forgive me once I write and post the next chapter.

Alice.x

Reviewer: CeeClearwater (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found

OMg can i request some "fun times" between  the couples please? i know that sounds gross but i wanna see the relationships blossom and get more "interesting"

 

*chugs milkshake* thank you

 

i request peanut butter cookies next time



Author's Response:

Lol, you made me giggle, thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: themoose-within (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found

YES. I called that it was Maria.... so I'll appease myself and pretend it was a hard thing to guess.

Have I mentioned how Angela makes me laugh? I'm glad she has a role in the story that doesn't involve...un-Angela like behavior

As you can see, the noise did not infact kill me. I am still alive, with a bruise on my forehead, but that's another story...

Mmmmm, oreo milkshake... I might have to drive up to the store JUST to make one now. Who knew reading fanfiction was an expense?

 



Author's Response:

*Applauds*

I couldn't leave her out of the story, but I just didn't see her in the Boot Camp.

Might I just say, yay for not being killed by strange noises.

Lol.

Alice.x

Reviewer: Heatherina (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found

How did you know that I wanted to? Are you truly an Alice lol?

Another great chapter, they just keep getting better and better.

Let us not out Bella's 'Yes I can' theory to test, yeah? Let them make out like monkeys lol.

Update soon.



Author's Response:

lol, I'm all knowing. :P

Yes, I'm really an Alice.

Ah, this Bella has no willpower, she'll never last.

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: msrsEdwardbrooks (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found

I love this story so much I need th see the next ch.

xoxo-msrsEdwardbrooks



Author's Response:

Thank you.

I shouldn't be too long with the next chapter.

Alice.x

Reviewer: MrsCullen_887 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found

ohhh damn suspense much lmao i like it though



Author's Response:

Lol, :P

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: Blood donor (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found

I like Oreo Milkshakes almost as much as i like this story!

But i do have to pout a little for making it a cliffie!

Have i mentioned that i love this story?

:D

 



Author's Response:

You might have mentioned it. Lol.

Thank you muchly.

Alice.x

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found

lol great chapter oooh whats jacob gonna do hmmm lol “It’s a shame really, he’s a pretty big guy, it has to be a reasonable size.” oooh and maria i hope they dont like murder jasper with a spork or anything lol



Author's Response:

Haha, no, Jasper will not be killed. I don't think I could ever bring myself to write that.

Alice.x

Reviewer: Fnarks (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found

*happy sigh* this story is the scrumtious ice cream sunday to my draging rainy day.



Author's Response:

Lol

Thanking you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: doowee (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found

please update sooooooooooooooon!!!!!!!

Reviewer: vivian_swan (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found

Ohh darny I want more, as usual! Yay im so glad to learn that Jake is no competition, or i hope he won't. He he



Author's Response:

Well I've never been the greatest Jacob fan so I can tell you now ... he shall be no competition. :P

Alice.x

Reviewer: ashkan00dle (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found

I sincerely love this story. I love how they're all badasses lol. Keep 'um comin'.  And let's get some Bella and Edward time, hmm? Bootcamp sounds like as good a place as any.



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Alice.x

Reviewer: vampirelust7 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found

Maria, hmmm? Not getting a visual on that one. I love the relationships and defiant Bella. She's so hilarious!

Reviewer: RandomBlonde (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found

I hate you a lot. But im going to drown my sorrow in the Oreo Milkshake. So...update? Soon? Because i'll hate you even more if you dont!

lol

~RandomBlonde



Author's Response:

Do you still hate me even after the oreo milkshake? lol

Alice.x

Reviewer: edward08 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found

OH ITS GETTING GOOD

Reviewer: Midnight Belle (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found

another great chapter

Reviewer: margaretthedevil (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found

I was so hoping that Maria wouldn't be in this story. Hate her always will! ARGH! >_< Lol



Author's Response:

Don't worry, I hate her too, but I just had to have her in the story.

Alice.x

Reviewer: Edward_Bella_Nessie (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found

O

M

G

!!!!!!!!!!!!

WTF?!?!??!?!!?!?

UPDATE SOON!!



Author's Response:

Lmao.

Shall do.

Alice.x

Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found

I cant bring myself to hate you for leaving it there. you invented this story ;). i love it, please update soon. oreo milshake? never had one.



Author's Response:

Haha, thank you.

Ooo, you must have one sometime, they are so good, yet I can never finish them because they fill you up really quickly.

Alice.x

Reviewer: funkymunky2511 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found

ahh omg who is maria? buzkill

Reviewer: beetlejuicelover (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Lost and Found

Lol I don't hate you but I'd really love it and you if you update soon.  :) You had me laughing almost through the whole chapter. Just what I need to help me feel better. Still kinda sick.

Think I can snag two milkshakes? You know to make up for the lack of food I took last chapter? lol jk Oh yay..I lost two whole pounds. =P Its better then gaining it though.



Author's Response:

Will you be able to manage two milkshakes? If so enjoy. :P

Feel better soon.

Alice.x

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Defiance

hey omg this is soo good and like lol times like a million its so funny love it and its funny how the make out sessions always get stopped =]



Author's Response:

Thank you, glad it's making you laugh.

Alice.

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