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Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2012 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 35 - A New Place to Stay
Well that was a new one but still pretty fun :)
Reviewer: rorowes (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2012 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Letter's From Home
Reviewer: vampgurl777 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 35 - A New Place to Stay
OMG!!!!!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!! besides the extras, is there a sequil??? i REALLY loved it!!!!!
luvz u always, bri
~GODBLESS~
Reviewer: vampgurl777 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2011 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 20 - Letter's From Home
hmmmmmm... i REALLY want snickers ice cream, so if i send a review evey ch, will u give me some??? lol, u have 2 promise!!! lol, i luved it. but eddies parents sound like they're always constipated. lol,
luvz u always, bri
~GODBLESS~
Reviewer: SophieMason23 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 35 - A New Place to Stay
i LOVED your story LOVED it :)
I read it non stop today! when i should have been doing my homework lol
Ill deffinatly check out any other stories you have done soon
Reviewer: shanno716 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 35 - A New Place to Stay
great story, had me really laughing.
Reviewer: lynard69 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 19 - A Quiet Night In
I am so loving this littly ditty! I like seeing the naughty characters. I know it is wrong and not proper, but that makes it all so much better. We all need a little escape from reality and this story takes me there.
Author's Response: I'm glad, I'm happy that people are still finding this story and reading it.
I'm glad you can escape with my story.
Alice.x
Reviewer: orangesongwriter (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 35 - A New Place to Stay
I hope you make a sequel where in they finally decide to actually work and live life well! great stroy!
Author's Response: I have no plans for a sequel, I'll add to the extras at some point, and I might put in one about their life after.
I'm glad you liked the story.
Alice.x
Reviewer: bluemoon255 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 35 - A New Place to Stay
loved it! pls write more fics like this with happy stuff. I almost quit reading after a couple of depressing fics. ur fic brought me back to fics. thank u
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed this story and that it kept you reading.
Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Samantha Rennay (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 1 - They Don't Know What's Hit Them
I very much liked it. I fuckin love when the girls are bad asses lol:P
Reviewer: lou_twilightmad (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Sinful Teasing
LOVE LOVE LOVE. Okaii so i thought the way stephenie meyer described the couples being together was great but the way you described them together was so much better!!! I think i may have even squealed at the end when edward said 'Miss Swan, i do believe you are in trouble'. Once again LOVE LOVE LOVE this story.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
Alice.x
Reviewer: lou_twilightmad (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 1 - They Don't Know What's Hit Them
I congratulate you for the greatest 1st chapter EVER! You are an amazing writer and cannot wait to read the rest of this story :)
Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 28 - A Family Reunion
"holy-shit-what-the-crap-is-Maria-doing-there"....exactly what i was thinking! oh my!
Author's Response: Haha, glad I got the effect I was looking for.
Thank you for all your reviews, I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Alice.x
Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 19 - A Quiet Night In
so close....
Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Boys will be Boys
hmmm...i love pancakes....so why do i have a feeling that Lauren is going to do something stupid to get back at the girls....
Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Sinful Teasing
Bella a tease...funny!
Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Road Trip
so im wondering if you didnt give the guards name yet on purpose...is it cause it will come up later or cause they are not important....
Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Behind Bars
with the girls having anger/authority issues i can only imagine the trouble they will be getting into.
Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Drunken Adventures
omg!!! that was too funny...
Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 1 - They Don't Know What's Hit Them
great 1st chapter...
Reviewer: razsgirl (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 1 - They Don't Know What's Hit Them
wicked!!!!!!!!!!! :D
Reviewer: concievably eternity (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 23 - Better Accommodation
You are shitting me?
This is NC-17 and there isn't going to be a lemon. That is pretty awful.
Seriously?
Seriously?
Arghghghhhh. I kind of hate you.
23 chapters in and there is going to be no lemons. I find this out now.
I love this story and lemons would have been brilliant. Like totally make this amazing. Why no lemons?
Anyway moving on...
I really loved this story. A little point to make on spelling though. Mussels are shellfish and muscles are the things under our skin, just for future reference.
God I sounded like a bitch but that is what happens when I am denied my smut. Sorry if I have offended you, I only rant when I am passionate and I love this story so I am passionate about it.
God sorry, I just re-read it and I sound like an asshole, well I mean it in the best possible way.
Author's Response: I had it as NC17 just in case, I've actually changed it to an R rating now. I did that a few days ago by someone reminding me.
I just didn't want to write any; I don't think the story need them.
I'm glad you loved the story and I don't think you sounded like a bitch. Thanks for pointing out the spelling, I'll try and find the mistakes and change them at some point.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Nikkycoly (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 01:24 AM · On: Chapter 24 - A Brother's Advice
I am still mad at you for no lemons, who does that lol other than that its very entertaining. Hummph no lemons on a NC17 *mumbles under her breath* lol
Author's Response: Haha, I'm sorry, please don't be mad at me. I had it as NC17 just in case I changed my mind, you've actually reminded me that I needed to change it to R.
=D
I'm glad the story entertained you anyway.
Thank you.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Randi1857 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 35 - A New Place to Stay
I am not happy that the story has ended, but I a happy that it was very, very good!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked the story.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Ingenuity15 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 35 - A New Place to Stay
Amazing job on this story, even if there weren't any lemons ;P haha.
I'd love to see you write more stories like this; I really could get used to badass versions of our favorite Twilight characters :]
Keep on writing and once again wonderful job.
~Ingenuity15
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed this story.
If you haven't already read it, you could check out my other story 'The Family', they are pretty badass in that one too.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Alice.x
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