Poignant story.  I feel so bad for Edward. As usual, Bella is selfish and thinks only about what happened to her, when he left her.  She is not thinking about what he

Yes, he left without saying goodbye but as usual she blows everything out of poportion.  And yes, Edward the vampire who smelt blood tried to kill her, I don't see why his vampire family should be so hard on him.  And because they pressured him to go to the party, any how, they set up the whole thing. And I get so tired of their self righteous attitude at times, and thoughts of poor, depressed, loony Edward.

Update soon.

Very good story !

can't wait t'ill the next chapter

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ahh love your story update soon umm how you characterized rachel it sounds like bellas look is that her mother and i hope bella starts to talk to him again i know she is scared for her heart but you have to take a risk for love right/ so im waiting for your update hope its soon love it also love how jasper is stronger in this story and how you played the characters [: -yuriinsane

Great chapter. Poor Edward. I felt really bad for him when Bella changed her mind. I'm still trying to figure out what links Rachel to Bella. Are they related? Hmm...
Can't wait to read more.

Im sorry... but your Bella is going ABOVE and BEYOND bitter, angry, and unforgiving. If she EVER loved Edward... she would have wanted what was best for him. And that was being with the Cullens, being a vampire. She should be happy that he is alive and "healthy." THATS what love is. Not only loving someone if it benifits you. She is acting like a petulant child. She needs to remember that "An eye for an eye makes the world blind". People make mistakes... she needs to get the fuck over it. She isn't perfect either... and Edward had a HELL of a LOT of obstacles to over come. He hasn't had an easy life or undead life. How about a little compassion? All I can think is, "Hell, I am soo sorry you had a couple of bad years Bella. A couple of years with a father who loves you, a nice house, everything you could ever want or need for EXCEPT Edward". EDWARD on the other hand... his whole life was shit. My sympathy does NOT go to Bella in this senario.

wow you a pretty good writer I wasn't sure i was going to like the story but the more i read the more i got into it!  I look forward to seeing what happends  next  hope there is a update soon!

why didnt edward go and see bella? did he completely forget who she was? completely forget his old life? It's not fair that he leaves her and then wants her to be friends just like that. She needs time to heal again. Seeing him just opened up a big scar thatnever fully healed, and now is bleeding again. But I cant wait to read more !

Interesting vampire exchange...more plz

Not what I was expecting at all.  I think that Edward really does love Bella but I don't think that he knows how to communicate very well in either his human past or his vampire present.  It's going to get tricky as he tries to woo her again.  Guess I'll have to keep reading.  :)

Oh HELL NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!IF YOU HAVE EDWARD LIKE RACHEL......I STOP READING.........................

 

HOWEVER.....I AM TOTALLY ON BOARD WITH " I WOULD SEDUCE BELLA"!!!!!!!!!

oh...Bella's just lying to herself, right?  She can't resist him :)

Ugh. I need more conversation between them!
Post soon! :)