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Reviewer: princess bella edward (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2012 12:38 AM · On: "One-Shot"
That last line topped off an exceptionally hilarious one shot. I don't know why, but I have recently found myself enjoying this pairing. And that is saying A LOT considering my hatred of Jacob Black. I'm almost at Rosalie levels. Well, In Character Rose, because god knows Stephenie would never in a million years write this couple.
Thank you for writing and sharing this with us all!
Reviewer: VampireNits (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 12:58 AM · On: "One-Shot"
LOL! pretty cool, hot and smexy! I really loved it!
Reviewer: memomo (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 02:54 PM · On: "One-Shot"
lol this was great! I found the perfect song for it, Crazy Bitch by Buckcherry. "Hey! You're crazy bitch. But you fuck so good I'm on top of it. When I dream I'm doing you all night, scratches all down my back to keep me right on." I might be really behind, finding this song to go with this, but hell, I'm still going to play it on repeat. *sticks out tongue* I'm proud and turned on, so deal with it!
Reviewer: R1R1H2 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 12:22 PM · On: "One-Shot"
The day that jacob and rosalie do have sex with each other will send the world into an apocalypse. Theres no way they really stand each other long enough to do that. But all in all it is a great story. I only wonder why edward didn't explode in fury beacuse of there thoughts or smell the dog all over her. Now that would have made for a great ending.
2 thumbs up!
Reviewer: onePushyFox (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 02:08 PM · On: "One-Shot"
This is just fantastic!!! I love that they hate each other but that emotion wound up intensifying their sex. Great job!
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 05:16 PM · On: "One-Shot"
Well, other than Emmett would wonder why Rose smelled like sex and dog, it worked for me. Kinda wish you would have gone into more detail with the buildup when they felt the urge to quit fighting and start sexin'. It felt rushed and kinda glossed over. I totally could see an AU where the tension came to a head and they let it out "physically." Jake can't deny that he's physically attracted to Rosalie at several points in the story. Liked that you touched on the difference between their body temps. Would think that would be an unexpected turnon for them.
Liked it, just wish it hadn't been so rushed. Totally believe that they'd go right back to being annoyed with eachother. Thanks for the different scene.
Reviewer: saliri (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 09:57 AM · On: "One-Shot"
mwuahahaa.. :D that was GREAATT
sooo much fun.. hehehe
and the blonde jokes were hilarious (well the one at the end obviously was the best :))
Reviewer: izzi_love (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 04:58 AM · On: "One-Shot"
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.
I loved it.
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Reviewer: bondgirl (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 11:12 AM · On: "One-Shot"
Haha...I loved it! I really like the Rose/Jake idea. And the way you have written it is sort of believable also. Though I wish you'd lengthened out the sex scene more and how they became so attracted to each other because it seems a little random in your story, but otherwise, really really good ! :)
Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2009 02:38 PM · On: "One-Shot"
I know I'm in the minority here, but I love the thought of Jake and Rose together! The banter between the two is always funny, and then you add in the extreme hostility toward one another. You just know that if they ever hooked up it would be one of the hottest things ever! You totally brought that out! This was fantastic! I think it was perfect as a one shot, but I hope sometime you consider writing another one with Jake & Rose!
Reviewer: stupidlamb79 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 11:49 PM · On: "One-Shot"
lol..i usually hate jacob and dont really care about rose but these two i loved! i too wondered if emmett knew what happened but i saw you already answered that question. great story, i know its a one shot but hopfully you will decide to add another.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
I don't really care about Rose that much either but the pairing was just too hilarious not to try out.
I appreciate you reviewing. :)
~Mystic
Reviewer: lovely_penguin (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 07:35 AM · On: "One-Shot"
It started with a blonde joke... it ended with a blonde joke. The hot rough sex in the middle was just fantastic! Pairing Jake and Rose was a fantastic idea! I just loved it.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it.
~Mystic
Reviewer: zephyersky (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2009 12:42 AM · On: "One-Shot"
I think you should write more. Those 2 are so explosive together. Great idea.
Author's Response: Thanks!
I don't know, I think this is good as just a one-shot, but who knows, I might add more in the future. :)
~Mystic
Reviewer: Spoiledash3139 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 03:00 PM · On: "One-Shot"
I liked how they started arguing, then it went to complete passionate sex, then back to hating eachother... sometimes just like a normal realtionship, haha great short read!
Author's Response: Hehe, yup, gotta love hot angry sex. :P
Thanks for the review, I appreciate it!
~Mystic
Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 01:50 PM · On: "One-Shot"
That was funny i really liked it alot
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
~Mystic
Reviewer: RubyRed (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 11:28 AM · On: "One-Shot"
That last bit with Emmett was a bit woah! I'm shocked & stunned. Does he know or is he just oblivious? You can't hurt Emmett, Mystic!!
Excuse me whilst I go collect myself
*wanders off, muttering*
Author's Response: Hahaha. You didn't like the ending?!
The ending is the best part!
But no, Emmett didn't know. He just thought they had a little spat.
And the blonde joke, well, he was just being funny, he had no idea that Rose cheated on him.
Lmao. I love your reaction to this.
~Mystic
Reviewer: SpiderMonkey (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 10:20 AM · On: "One-Shot"
very intresting...i like it!
Author's Response: Thanks!
~Mystic
Reviewer: JMCullen (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 06:41 AM · On: "One-Shot"
Well, then. Lol. I'm speechless. That was too hot for words! Great job!
Author's Response: Haha, thanks!
I'm pleased it made you speechless. :)
~Mystic
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