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Reviewer: tazzded (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 01:43 PM · On: The Aftermath
Awesome story! I'm so glad that Bella shared her story with Edward. I hope there's more to this very well written fic.
Reviewer: AmandaMCullen (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 08:04 AM · On: The Aftermath
I LOVEDDDDD this chapter! ahh! and not just because I'm a huge fan of Jasper haha:) It was incredible to see how each of the most affected characters saw and dealt with the situation at hand. I was so enthralled! Thank you for this amazing story and keep up the good work!:)
Reviewer: alternate universe (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 07:03 AM · On: The Aftermath
awwww yay!
Reviewer: Naymee (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 02:59 AM · On: The Aftermath
YIPEE! You don't know how happy this chapter has made me. Brilliant. I love Jasper. He's just wonderful.
Well done. Please don't stop yet...
Reviewer: JennyBenny (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 01:02 AM · On: The Aftermath
I'd just like to take this moment to say that Beths is the cure to anything that ails you after mid-night. Good call.
Reviewer: SubtlePen (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 10:31 PM · On: The Aftermath
perfect, perfect, perfect. i am so proud of you - i hope that doesn't sound condescending - for how you handled Jasper - perfectly rounded, well thought out, just lovely. thank you for doing such a sensitive job with such a delicate and wrenching subject. really loving this story.
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 10:19 PM · On: The Aftermath
Great chapter! I loved Jaspers POV. I am ready to see Edward and Bella move forward more :)
Reviewer: melizzymoo (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 09:23 PM · On: The Aftermath
thank you for the chapter. it was wonderful. =] i almost miss their nerdiness. i hope it's brought back when the pack gets there! i can't even imagine the hilarity that will ensue.
Reviewer: jajo (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 05:27 PM · On: The Aftermath
Perfect. Thank for giving us Jasper's POV.
Reviewer: spuntinsel (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 04:29 PM · On: The Aftermath
this was such an amazing chapter for so many reasons.
namely, i loved seeing jasper go through all of the emotions to do with letting Bella go a bit. the jealousy, the rejection, totally normal and real to go through when you go from being best friends to having to share your friend with their partner.
and i also loved how edward thanked jasper. i think that was good for him to acknowledge everything jas has done for bella and let jasper know that he's appreciated. i think it mean a lot coming from the guy he feels has replaced him.
much love.
Reviewer: shyhorse (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 02:28 PM · On: The Aftermath
wow - that was *seriously good* - i mean really really great chapter. nice character study of jasper. you write really well in general, but i have to say even expecting a good chapter i was impressed. you have a really good handle on thought processes and feelings - it's all very convincing and genuine, which a lot of fanfics aren't. so well done! thank you for a great chapter - i effing love this story :)
Reviewer: zephyersky (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 01:26 PM · On: The Aftermath
This is such a great story. You are doing an amazing job with it. I look forward to every new chapter. I can't wait to meet the rest of the guys and see how they react to Edward.
Reviewer: Alyxandria (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 01:10 PM · On: The Aftermath
Awesome to see things from a third perspective - especially Jasper's. FANTASTIC chapter. :)
-Alyx
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 12:25 PM · On: The Aftermath
hey the next chap shpould be good with all the guys l likedthe ending where they appologised ti each other and i thought it was really cool how he said to jasper like you were great with her etc =]
Reviewer: 321go (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 11:20 AM · On: The Aftermath
Yay go jasper, bout time. I can't wait to see what the other guys will think of Edward or Emmett. Is the Emnbry/Rosalie story platonic or more? Thank you for the chapter.
Reviewer: Sawatari_Makoto (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 10:00 AM · On: The Aftermath
I loved this chapter! I am so very happy for Bella and Edward, and I am glad that Jasper is finally begging to trust Edward :) I am looking forward to the next chapter and hope it is out soon! xD As always, thanks for writing this amazing story! :D
Reviewer: Cosmos (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 09:47 AM · On: The Aftermath
Wow great chapter. I must cofess I was a little disapointed when I realised this chapter was the same scene in a third POV but silly me, showing JPOV was a pivotal moment in the plot and we really got to understand J and Bs relationship.
Then I realized that I was gloating a bit that I knew how to handle Bella and Edward didn't. I am such a fucking ass.
Halleluyah - finally Jasper has an epiphany and realises that his relationship with Bella is more than brotherly affection there is some psycho stuff going on here as well in that he gets a kick out of being Bellas saviour. Finally he realises that their relationship is actually not healthy and it is stopping not just Bella but also himself from moving forward. I really think Alice has the patience of a saint to put up with all this - shes kind of the unsung hero in this story.
Also good to see both Jasper and Edward taking stock and making an effort to get on.
Really looking forward to the next chapter as I am hoping we'll finally get to meet the guys - hmmm how will Edward and Emmett cope with them.
Thanks for writing - loving your work
Reviewer: tuff-duck (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 08:54 AM · On: The Aftermath
awwwww..... jazz and edward, hahhaa.. the weird coffee drinking similarities cracked me up!!! :P can't wait for the next chapterr, , the boys from the rez.. and maybe some more emmet-rose??? ;)
i love emmet and roseeee!!!!!!!!!!! >.< cant wait for moreeeeeeeee~~~ :D
oh,, i keep forgetting to say this buuttt:: chop suey is awesumm!!!!!! whhooooottt!!!! hahahhaaaaa
Reviewer: newtothis (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 08:48 AM · On: The Aftermath
awesome chapter! i can't wait to see what happens when the "guys" come over. i also love that you can go off on a rose and emmett tangent.
post soon!
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 08:11 AM · On: The Aftermath
So here's the deal:
I'm hopelessly, utterly, completely addicted to your story.
So here's the next deal:
I would love you to update so more =D
oh and I love love love love Jasper.
Reviewer: Jenn32 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 08:07 AM · On: The Aftermath
I am glad that Jasper is coming around!!! And Rose and Emmett!!!! I am excited for more
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 08:06 AM · On: The Aftermath
WOW! Poor Jasper, I'm so glad he has finally worked through all his feelings about Edward being in the picture, and realizing that Edward is good for Bella and that Bella is really in love with him. The burdon he carried for so long was such a part of him it was like a second skin it seemed. It looks like the both Jasper and Bella were able to release the burdons they were feeling that night, and now they can move on . I'm looking forward to some sweet, loving moments with Edward and Bella. This is a great story, one of my favorites, I can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 06:08 AM · On: The Aftermath
Crapper... I had a review all written last night... and must not have hit submit.
I found Jasper's thoughts over how he protected Rosalie vs how he protected Bella so interesting. I was just having a fic discussion with someone about rape and the age of the victim (a 17 yo E rapes a 14 yo OC). And I feel that Jasper pretty much said what it was that I was trying to say when I upset over the age of the victim.
I really like what you did with Jasper during the Rose story - rather than just reiterate the conversation - he was simply a hot mess of emotions.
Emmett negotiating on the skinny - HILARIOUS.
I said something really intelligent about Jasper's realization and acceptance of Edward's love for Bella... but I can't remember what it was now. snort. But I liked how it played out.
Like him, I got a chuckle out of the idea of the guys showing up, storming Bella's room and finding a random dude in her bed. I am so looking forward to them showing up.
Loved the Aftermath.
Reviewer: Britt01 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 05:51 AM · On: The Aftermath
OMG, I have freakin tears in my eyes here. I think seeing all of this from JPOV is as emotional, or somehow maybe even more, than from BPOV or EPOV. I just want to hug the guy - what a stand up man he is. Yeah, he's sheltered Bella in a patronizing manner a bit, but overall he has been the best kind of friend there is. I'm glad that he and Edward are working things out. Seriously, this chapter has affected me like none other. Well, I mean, obviously what happened to Bella affected me, but to see how it has affected those around her, the guilt Jasper has carried, the protectiveness he's felt, how he really has kept her together and helped her become who she is today - I can't blame him at all for jealousy or feeling weird about Edward. I think anybody would be blessed with a friend like him.
I also love Rose's list to Emmett at the diner (and Jasper having to tune some of it out), and how good Alice is at understanding how Jasper is feeling. Oh god, and Emmett asking if skinny was negotiable, because he had the rest of that shit down - that is hilarious.
Yes, this chapter is absolute win. I can't think of a better way to describe it. Awesome writing.
Reviewer: justaskalice (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 05:39 AM · On: The Aftermath
Good God, I'm sick of irrationally jealous Jasper. Thank you for wrapping some of those feelings up, and at least he knows that he's being an idiot. His revelations were all very well done. I'm glad he's getting more and more self-aware about the situation.
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