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Reviewer: grabadietcoke (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 09:36 PM · On: Unkindly Kind

Seriously - could you write a better best friend than Jasper in your story? He is SUCH a good character!

Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 12:50 AM · On: Unkindly Kind

AWE A breakthrough! I love the family bonding.

I have to ask...where is the bastard? (who hurt bella)

Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 11:52 PM · On: Unkindly Kind

So enjoyed the update - thank you! I love the progress Bella is making and how supportive & sweet Edward is. Really enjoyed Jasper's POV too and what he notices has changed for the better too. (and especially when the conversation gets embarrassing for him!)

Reviewer: Shonla (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 09:23 PM · On: Unkindly Kind

great chapter! i feel like i need to go back and review.

Reviewer: kycee (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 07:25 PM · On: Unkindly Kind

Thanks for the update.  I loved what Edward left for Bella.  He is so sweet.  I also loved Jazz telling Jacob how it is.  Perfect. 

Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 04:47 PM · On: Unkindly Kind

So glad to see you back!  I confess that I read the chap on FF because I heard a rumour that you'd updated!  But, I will review here:

I'm still loving your Edward and Bella.  Your story is one of the first AH that I tried almost a year ago, and it got me hooked!  So proud of Bella for making progress...and J/B's relationship is so great.

Great chapter!

Reviewer: kalanthia (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 03:00 PM · On: Unkindly Kind

Great chapter! I love the deep feeling and your captivating writing style.

Jasper is the best friend ever. I'm jealous of Bella ;)

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 02:49 PM · On: Unkindly Kind

Great chapter - no worries about the wait. We're all still here! I love that she's so frustrated and so unsure about being frustrated. :) Great story - thanks for sticking with!

Reviewer: littlelarinda (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 02:34 PM · On: Unkindly Kind

Yeah I am so glad this is continuing. Thanks for writing I love it

Reviewer: CrazyLittleWriter (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 12:39 PM · On: Unkindly Kind

A stunning chapter.  You are a very talented writer and have managed to include so many different emotions in this that reflect the characters perfectly.  Thanks so much for updating and I am looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: aciepey (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 11:51 AM · On: Overgrown Barbie Dolls

I'm so glad i finally started thisstory! i already read your stuff with naelany, so i knew this would be lovely as well.

I like the mystery around Bella's past, and the way Alice is clicking with her, not demanding too many answers. The relationshiip between B and Jasper is sweet.  Well done!

On to the rest! I'lltry to slow my rolland remember to review!!  When it'sgoo, tho,i just want to devour the story!

:)

Patty

Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 10:11 AM · On: Unkindly Kind

Great chapter.

Reviewer: booklover08 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 09:35 AM · On: Unkindly Kind

I really appreciated that in this chapter we got Jasper's view of what happened when Bella was raped and how profoundly he was hurt by the accusation that she had somehow made too much of it, or shouldn't have chosen Edward to be in love with...and how Bella sharing with him, having the time to actually spend time to reconnect with each other, is bringing him to have even more respect for Edward.  Also loved that he was willing to beat the tar out of Jacob, but held back on the principle of the thing.... this was such a good chapter and I am glad to see you back on the horse, so to speak!!  ;)

Reviewer: Soccer1023 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 06:57 AM · On: Unkindly Kind

What a great chapter.  Youdid a great job of kinda recapping the events of this story for me!  It has been a little while and I had forgotten a lot of the story but I didn[t have to reread because you did such a good job of bringingthings back to my mind.  Thanks.

Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 05:45 AM · On: Unkindly Kind

It was such a great surprise to get the email of your update. Thanks! I'm so glad you haven't given up on this unique and moving story. Edward is such a patient and wonderful guy and Bella is lucky to have him. Jazz too. Jake is a douche! LOL. Glad to see Bella keeps on getting stronger and hope poor Edward doesn't have to wait too long to, you know. LOL.

Reviewer: eanmkm1961 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 05:08 AM · On: Unkindly Kind

I,m so glad this story is back.  Thank you for making it long, lots of progress going on here.  Hope we can get to read more soon.

Reviewer: pomme_de_terre (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 04:20 AM · On: Unkindly Kind

Welcome back! Another great chapter. Her prohress and her feelings about it, are so real and vivid. Thank you for telling this story!

Reviewer: iluvwm (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 03:29 AM · On: Unkindly Kind

Lovely Chapter! Thanks so much for keeps this one going! I truly love this fic!

Reviewer: Shadman (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 02:57 AM · On: Unkindly Kind

Thanks so much for the update. I just love, love, love this story and can't get enough of the little steps of progress Edward and Bella make in every chapter.

Reviewer: sweetpea (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 01:08 AM · On: Unkindly Kind

Yay!!!!  Its' so good to see an update =)  This is honestly one of my top five all time favorites...so I may or may not have done a ridiculous happy dance when I saw that you updated. *shifty eyes*

Anyways....as always, I adored Edward! I have NO freakin' idea how he's so patient, but I'm infinitely grateful that he is. And it's so wonderful that Bella's slowly taking steps to becoming "normal" (and I don't mean that in a derogatory way!).  I couldn't help but giggle when she told Jasper that she was "frustrated". Bahaha! Poor guy....but I love that they're so comfortable in their relationship!!

I hope the next chappie won't be far away...and that all is well in RL! :D

Reviewer: Tinuviel (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2010 12:49 AM · On: Unkindly Kind

I am sooooo happy to see that you updated!!! :-D

Great chapter, though I really missed Edward... :-( ... but I LOVED the Jasper POV; Bella and Jasper's friendship is just sooo sweet and perfect and I love the interaction between them!!

Ohhh and I really liked "the talk", Jasper's struggle to shut off his protective side of his brain and trys to hel Bella with her frustration.... I thought that part was written really, really good!! Just the right amount of awkwardness and sweet Bella and Jasper interaction!

Thank you for updating, Sarah!

Reviewer: myimm0rtal (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 11:36 PM · On: Unkindly Kind

JFTR, any chapter you write for JOoTG is worth waiting for.  This installment was especially touching, and a reminder of just how much progress Bella made in her and Edward's relatively short relationship.  

I think what makes their dynamic so unique is that in spite of the trauma Bella has suffered, she finds Edward worthy of her trust and wants to conquer her setbacks to make him happy. On the same note, Edwards absolutely does have the patience of a saint to stay with her and encourage her to take the time she needs.  He genuinely cares about Bella.  They're both making a tremendous effort to meet in the middle and understand each other, and that, to me, is what makes a relationship work. 

I think this is the first time I've read a Jasper POV that's moved me to tears... I love that you could write Jasper and Bella to share a best friend relationship that genuinely reflects just how best friends really are with each other. I'm just gonna outright say it: we got an absolutely contorted version of what "friendship" was in the Saga, so I'm glad that with your creativity and insight you give the fandom an awesome picture of what it truly is to be a best friend.

Thank you, as always, for your time and talent. ;)

Reviewer: treymaine (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 11:06 PM · On: Unkindly Kind

Nice to see an update, and it was well worth it.

She really has made progress - slow but progress.

Jasper really should have just kicked Jake's ass. He's gonna cause more crap to fly later than not. Ah well at least Jasper will beat him down when that time comes.

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 10:11 PM · On: Unkindly Kind

I loved this entire chapter!

The moments with Jasper, the 'I love you' exchange...Just everything. It was a excellent chapter. =) Wonderful job!

Looking forward to your next chapter!

Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 09:53 PM · On: Unkindly Kind

Welcome back!  I hope you're ok (I know no details, so...)

Great chapter, although I wish Jasper -or ANYONE, really- had kicked Jake's ass. He's getting off waaaay to easily.  And he's going to be an on-going issue isn't he?  I really hate that mother fucker.

I did like the sleep over (and the Bee Gees!) and all the bonding, but of course I missed Edward.

Can't wait for more!

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