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Reviewer: petite_femme (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 01:13 PM · On: First Sight
I love this! I think it's so cute and hilarious, and yet it captures pieces of the characters that are only hinted at in the actual books. Great job so far!
Author's Response: That's really fantastic to hear - thank you so much! I hope you continue to enjoy the story :)
Reviewer: Twitterpatted (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 01:01 PM · On: First Sight
I so LOVE this story. Please keep the quick updates.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and rewiewing! I'm glad you're enjoying it :)
Reviewer: childrenwith4legs (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 12:07 PM · On: First Sight
Ahhh, as much as I hate different POV with the same scene, this one was worth it.
Another great chapter
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad to hear I made a good decision to share EPOV with this one. He was demanding :)
Reviewer: noel presh (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 10:51 AM · On: First Sight
I'm thoroughly enjoying this story! It's sweet and fun and I can't wait to see what's in store. Bella as a gamer cracks me up...too great!
Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying it :) And there will be more gamer fun later on...
Reviewer: christykq (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 10:07 AM · On: First Sight
Oh wow, someone's got it bad for little Ms. Swan and I love to see Edward swoon with a simple smile from Bella in his direction. Great story. Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens with Edward and Emmett's conversation or, for that matter, Jasper and Bella's conversation once they are alone. Hmm... this is going to be fun. Update quickly.
Author's Response: Hehe, I'm a sucker for an Edward who swoons at little things from Bella too! Chapter 8 will include the conversations you mentioned, so...hope you enjoy it :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: AndieLand (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 09:27 AM · On: First Sight
I think the best part of this entire chapter is Emmett's e-mail address. HotLoveMonkey? So classic! The Edward POV was quite awesome too, lolol. Keep up the good work :)
Author's Response: Emmett's email address definitely made me giggle. I'm glad you liked it! And the next chapter will start out with a bit more Edward and Emmett...thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Clancy67 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 08:53 AM · On: First Sight
Freakin' awesome chapter! Edward's inner dialogue is incredibly funny. I really enjoyed seeing the 'non-date' from his POV.
Its really sad that Bella's trauma is so deep that Edward can't act on his attraction to her. Its going to be really hard on him to know how to behave around her, if she ever wants more from him, she'll have to take the first steps, but can she? I'm interested to see how their relationship progresses.
Thanks so much for the great story, I really enjoy reading it!
Author's Response: I'm afraid that, yes, it will be tough for them. But just keep in mind that this is Bella and Edward...things get tough for them, but we all know how it turns out ;)
Thank you so much for the compliments and for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: beausoir (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 07:46 AM · On: First Sight
Love this story. Glad you listened to Edward and let him tell his side. A little worried about Bella's past trauma, I love these two and think they've been through enough. Let them have a little love and comfort soon, please?
Author's Response: Edward can be very forceful when he wants to be. /swoon
Bella and Edward will take awhile to work through things, but as I've said before, I'm a happily ever after kind of girl at heart.
Reviewer: OCD_indeed (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 06:20 AM · On: First Sight
*FOR THOSE OF YOU READING THE REVIEWS... GIVE HER SOME LOVE OVER ON THE BOARDS. A THREAD IS UP:
http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=2742
I'm with you on the whole multiple POV's with the same chapter. It drives me nuts when authors do that.
BUT... you are one of the few who manages to keep it interesting. I really wanted to read E's POV on the whole night but didn't want a play-by-play of the same chapter.
For lack of a better saying... (cut me some slack, it's Sunday morning) I am quoting Paula Abdul, "You made it your own." hahaha! What I mean is that it didn't feel like I was reading the same chapter again, it was different. Just from even the way you started it out with the ending of the evening/morning and then flashing back.
Sooo... Emmett thinks Edward got lucky doesn't he?
;)
Great chapter!
Author's Response: You are awesome, OCD - thank you! And Emmett...well, Emmett always has his own ideas. Suffice to say, he knows Edward well ;) And the next chapter will start with Edward and Emmett, so we'll find out exactly what Emmett thinks...
Reviewer: Bobberley (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 02:46 AM · On: Of Popcorn and Tom Servo
Really enjoying this story! Thanks (Short & sweet, but I'm a reader, not a writer) x
Author's Response: Thank you so muchf or reading and reviewing! I really hope you continue to enjoy the story :)
Reviewer: braillelights (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 02:41 AM · On: Of Popcorn and Tom Servo
AMAZINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!
give me more. so addicted.
Author's Response: Wow, what a review! Thanks so much :)
Reviewer: Nox (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 01:05 AM · On: Of Popcorn and Tom Servo
lol... just... yeah... this stuff is hysterical great job. Is it bad that i think the fact that she has a phobia of girlie shoes kinda amusing? lol sorry i just can't help it, it's ironic is all
Author's Response: *grin* No, I think it's amusing too, except when I'm in Bella's head :) Trust me, though, there's a reason... Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 10:41 PM · On: Of Popcorn and Tom Servo
Eeee! So cute!
Author's Response: *giggle* Thank you :)
Reviewer: lexiecullen17 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Of Popcorn and Tom Servo
they're so clumsily adorable. ok, im hooked. keep it coming :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! Chapter 7 will be up soon :)
Reviewer: ThreeAM (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Of Popcorn and Tom Servo
This story is great so far! I'm really glad I started reading it. Your characterizations are all wonderful, and the mystery surrounding Bella's past is really intriguing. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you for the great review - and for picking my story up :) Not too much longer until the next installment, I promise.
Reviewer: missloonylovegood (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Of Popcorn and Tom Servo
I have no idea what Bella is making Edward watch... But it sounds funny. ^.^ And Jasper is so whipped. XD *dies* Update!
Author's Response: If you get a chance, check out MST3K - it's worth it; I promise! And thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)
Reviewer: christykq (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Of Popcorn and Tom Servo
Wohoo! I think someone is smitten with little Ms. Swan. I don't watch MST3K but I understand it's addictive so I hope B+E make a date to watch more eps together.
Great story. Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. Update quickly.
Author's Response: :) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! An update will be coming soon.
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Of Popcorn and Tom Servo
Awww she's so cute and insecure. This is an interesting dynamic you're setting up here. I've often wondered in life for people who've had a traumatic event, when they do find love, how do they deal? It must be so hard. I guess we'll see how Bella will handle that. The characters are so well fleshed out, and there's lots going on. Great writing so far! You already know this, but I'll tell you one more time...I LOVE THIS STORY! Update soon!
Author's Response: You are two sweet! As far as the love thing goes...that will definitely be developing, and I hope you find the way it does interesting. Thank you for the compliments!
Reviewer: Twitterpatted (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Of Popcorn and Tom Servo
OK so Jasper's shirt from middle school must be really threadbare and mostly see-through after so many year of wear....plus Bella in a BLUE BRA!
Author's Response: How did you guess? :)
Reviewer: Greenever (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Of Popcorn and Tom Servo
I totally enjoyed this....keep writing!
Author's Response: *smile* Thank you! Writing is one of my favorite things...and this story has me totally absorbed.
Reviewer: SecretlyObsessed (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 05:58 PM · On: Of Popcorn and Tom Servo
Really cute story! I'm looking forward to more of it. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you continue to like it as you read!
Reviewer: Melsie (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Of Popcorn and Tom Servo
Loved it! I adore your Bella, as a fellow WoW player (blame the hubby he got me hooked lol) I thought that was a awesome touch!!
Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the WoW bit :) I'm completely addicted to it as well!
Reviewer: rinna629 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Of Popcorn and Tom Servo
Great story, can't wait to see where you take Edward and Bella.....
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I hope you continue to enjoy the story as Edward and Bella get to know each other a bit better.
Reviewer: Tsumi (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Of Popcorn and Tom Servo
aww bellas so cute! i really appreciate how quickly you get out your chapters! this is awesome I hope theres more EPOV in the future =D
Author's Response: Edward demands to be heard from time to time, so there will absolutely be more EPOV as we go.
Reviewer: lynne3 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 04:09 PM · On: Overgrown Barbie Dolls
LOL, I wonder if she's gonna fight alice on who she sits by on Friday once she see's "asexual Edward?"
Author's Response: hehe, well, she does have an interesting reaction to Edward, to say the least...
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