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Reviewer: montepython4life (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 12:46 PM · On: Jealous Guy

awww!!! first off, I just have to say how absolutely ADORABLE edward and bella are together!! I get all giddy every time I read about them in :)

I can definitely see where both Edward and Jasper are coming from though. Obviously Edward will be jealous if his girlfriend (I guess you can call her that) is living with another man, and she trusts him completely. I'm surprised he had the guts to just straight up ask Jasper if he was in love with her! But it is understandable. When you're in love, your world kind of focusses on that person, and you can overanalyze every situation. Like the fact that it is obvious that Jasper is not IN love with Bella, because they have been friends for so long and he is dating Alice. I'm glad Edward has heard the truth from Jasper. Now he can hopefully move past his insecurities and put all his energy into helping Bella recover.

That was interesting how Jasper felt jealous though. Even with Alice! It must be very disorienting for him. He has been the only one that Bella has ever trusted and confided in for years, and now suddenly she is a lot more trusting of everyone around her...I guess Jasper just doesnt feel as needed as he did before. However, I hope he will realize quickly that Edward is NEVER going to hurt Bella. In order to make Bella happy, he is going to have to take some risks with Edward, because Bella would be crushed if she realized he didn't trust Edward.

Anyway, great update, can't wait for more!!!



Author's Response:

*smiles* I'm so glad you love Edward and Bella's time together :)

This Edward tends to be blunt with most people...he does censor himself around Bella a bit, but really only in response to his gentlemanly nature.  Edward's insecurities are long-ingrained, so it's going to take him some time.  He's not told anyone he loves them since Tanya...and he still hasn't actually told Bella, though he's let her know how important she is to him.

Disorienting is a great word to describe how Jasper feels right now.  Edward is throwing the one constant in his life in upheaval, and he's confused by how he feels about that.  What you said about Bella being crushed if she realized he didn't trust Edward is exactly what Jasper meant by how easy it would be to turn her away from him.  Really, all he would have to say to make her question everything is that he doesn't trust Edward.  I'm not saying Bella would leave Edward, but it would definitely stall things...

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)

Reviewer: dyenessa (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 12:16 PM · On: Of Popcorn and Tom Servo

I am SO loving this story!!!  WOW, MST3K, and mid-90s music?  Always a winning combination.  :)

One thing though:  How did Bella know Edward's last name?  I don't think Alice and Edward's last name was ever mentioned in the story... or did I miss it?

I know there's so much more to read, but I'm really liking the story thus far!



Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying it :)  And obviously, I agree about the winning combination.

No, the last name hadn't been specifically mentioned in the story, but Alice has been dating Jasper for over a month, and she's constantly over.  Bella definitely knows her last name by now.

I appreciate you reviewing as you go along :) I love reading what people think.

Reviewer: dyenessa (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Overgrown Barbie Dolls

OK.... another WoW girl...? that's HAWT!!!  LOL



Author's Response:

*grins* Absolutely...I'm an MT (warrior) and a raid leader :P  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: SassyGeminiMom (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 04:53 AM · On: Jealous Guy

Aw, guys being guys.  Why is it so cute and endearing and romantic when you read it on paper, but when something like that happens in real life, men are jerks?? :)

So, I may need you to update.....every day.  Otherwise I'm going to have to supplement the dowtime with therapy for my addiction.



Author's Response:

You know, I'm glad you mentioned this.  That chapter would have been totally different if it had been from Bella's POV.  It's a little more endearing when we can see into their heads and see why they're being macho jerks.

I would definitely update every day if my job and family would let me :)  I love writing - and especially writing this story.  And I appreciate your sweet and cute compliment (though I hope JOotG doesn't end you in therapy :P).  Thank you!

Reviewer: edward-bella70 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 01:18 AM · On: Jealous Guy

This story is really awesome!



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you!

Reviewer: coookies_n_cream (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 11:27 PM · On: Jealous Guy

(sigh...) Emo Jasper and Edward are so adorable.  A touching chapter.  I can't wait for Edward and Bella to get cozier with one another.



Author's Response:

*grins* So happy you liked my emo boys.  Bella and Edward are getting there...each chapter brings them a little closer.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: alternate universe (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 10:47 PM · On: Jealous Guy

awwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Jealous Guy

*melt* so cute!



Author's Response:

hehe, Thanks!

Reviewer: Rinna (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Jealous Guy

Awww....sweet ending, can't wait for next chapter!!



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: Telulah (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Jealous Guy

I LOVED the ending to this chapter.  It actually made me smile to myself!  I can't wait to read the next chapter.  =)



Author's Response:

That's awesome!  I'm glad I could make you smile :)  Thank you so much!

Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Jealous Guy

I liked that this was an all guys chapter! Love this story!!! Your awesome!! Can't wait for the date!!!



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you so much!  I'm glad you enjoyed the guy time :)  The date is up next.

Reviewer: Catie Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 06:23 PM · On: Jealous Guy

Awwww how sweet! i love this story so so so much and i can not wait for the next chapter. so write on!



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you so much :)

Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Jealous Guy

Is it just me or was the Edward/Jasper confrontation pretty hot? :)

I love new chapters, please keep them coming :)

 



Author's Response:

Haha, I have to admit that I thought it was a little bit hot too :P  No worries - working on the next chapter now.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: edward-bella70 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Tentative Touches

The tension between these two is agonizing. I hope it moves along a little faster. Good story!



Author's Response:

I'm sorry you find it agonizing...I suppose it depends on your definition of "faster" :)  There is progress in each chapter forward.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: gypsysue (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Jealous Guy

awww so sweet...two jealous boys..cute...hug at the end go Bella getting some of your game back..

cant wait for more



Author's Response:

:) Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Twitterpatted (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Jealous Guy

You. So. Rock !!!  I love that Edward and Jasper had the talk.  They needed to get it out there.  Now Jasper can ask Alice to marry him without worrying about what will happen to Bella without him.  Love this story and can't wait for more. 



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you so much!  The boys definitely needed their time - otherwise, things could have turned ugly.  Luckily, they're both mature enough to realize that these things have to be screamed about...err...discussed, whatever.  And you're clever with the bit about Jasper and Alice ;)

Reviewer: metronomeradio (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Jealous Guy

I'm not sure if I've ever reviewed this story before, but since it's one I look forward to updating very much, I'm remiss if I haven't. 

This is excellent.  I think most "Bella's been abused" fics are tedious and annoying but man, not this one!  It's very genuine and her character is so amazingly likeable.  In fact, all of the characters are.  And Edward!  Oh, Edward, you're so cute and sweet and perfect for her.  But one of my favorite parts of this is the friendship between Jasper and Bella.  It's written so well and I believe it. 

Awesome work!



Author's Response:

I don't remember your name before...so this might be a first :)  Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

I'm really glad you're enjoying the story and look forward to updates.  I'm happy you find this story genuine and that you like the characters so much.  The friendship between Jasper and Bella is very special to me - it's awesome that you like it so much.

Reviewer: Nannabell (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Jealous Guy

I loved that chapter! The main boys in Bella's life are so cute when it comes to their protectiveness of her.     I can't wait to read more.  This story is incredible!



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you!  I'm so happy you liked it :)  Boys are sometimes silly, but at least their hearts are in the right place.

Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 04:26 PM · On: Jealous Guy

I absolutely loved it, it was great to get Jasper's POV, he is truly a great friend. Amazing chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: ladyrip (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 04:07 PM · On: Jealous Guy

SQUEAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I was soooo waiting for this after I read the teaser in the forum! It was just as good--no...better, actually, than I expected.  I laughed so much it's a wonder I didn't choke on my pizza! ;)

I'm so glad that Jasper and Edward were able to have their talk in such a civilized manner--ha! At least they got it out there, and they know where each other stands in relation to the girls.

I'm so proud of Bella for branching out: going shopping with Alice and hugging Edward.

Now I'm just waiting for the next two chapters to find out what actually happened to Bella five(?) years ago.....

waiting.... waiting.... waiting.... :)



Author's Response:

*grins* I'm so glad you enjoyed it :)  That's one of the tricky things about posting teasers...I never know how people will react to the rest of the chapter afterwards.

The boys were somewhat civilized *snicker*  At least they weren't rolling around on the ground like Emmett and Edward.

I'm happy you like the way the characters are developing.  There are big changes coming for all of them.

Yup, in two chapters you will find out Bella's story...the actual event was seven years ago.  The Mike Incident was five years ago :)  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: natlee (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 03:42 PM · On: Jealous Guy

that was too adorable at the end. *sigh* this fic just makes me all bubbly inside. i love reading every chapter you come out with. 

i really enjoyed the jealousy between Edward and Jasper. it was priceless. date next chapter? i sure hope so! thanks for updating and hope you do again soon!



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you so much!  I really appreciate you comments.  Yes, the next chapter is the date, and it is in BPOV.  I'll be working on it later tonight.

Reviewer: evisme217 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 03:13 PM · On: Jealous Guy

lovely! GREAT chapter. i love how Jasper and bella are super close and his protectiveness over her. so sweet that Edward admits to Alice AND Jasper that he's in love with Bella.

Here's my cliche line: can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Jasper's friendship has been the defining part of Bella's life for years now...and Jasper's beginning to realize that the reverse is true for him as well.  So all these changes are seriously affecting them on a pretty deep level, which leads to all the jealousy and things Jasper is feeling.  I'm glad you enjoyed it - and that you liked Edward's confession to both Alice and Jasper :)

Thanks so much!  Working on the next chapter tonight.

Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Jealous Guy

Awe how sweet these guys do care for Bella a lot.



Author's Response:

Yes, they do :) Thanks!

Reviewer: edward-bella70 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Of Popcorn and Tom Servo

OMG, we love Mystery Science Theater. Its freakin' hillarious! Great story so far!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I'm glad you're enjoying it :) And MST3K is total win.

Reviewer: ejdisme (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 10:16 AM · On: Jealous Guy

Awww just stop it, that is too adroable!

Jasper is being such a great friend to Bella, and Edward sticking up and protecting his woman liek that, its adorable.

I really love these characters. You're doing such a wonderful job. I'm definitely falling in love with this story.



Author's Response:

So happy you enjoyed it!  I'm glad you liked both boys - they really are fantastic, even if they go stupid sometimes. I appreciate your comments, and it's fantastic to hear you say you're falling in love with this story :)

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