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Reviewer: lovedforeternity (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 2: Bitches & Bear Hugs
Hurry ! I want to see how they get over this misunderstanding. Sex on legs... yep, that is Edward to a tee!
Author's Response: lol. Well, if they got over it quickly, there wouldn't be much of a story! :)
Reviewer: lisamichelle17 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 2: Bitches & Bear Hugs
Yikes. I would love to see them flirt/fight (Like egg eachother on). Rose and Emmett will notice the UST (unresolved sexual tension). They will make obvious comments about it. Then out of nowhere during one of these fights Edward or Bella will kiss.
I am sure if I am smokin crack though.
LOVE THIS STORY!
Author's Response: Hahaha. Wishful thinking, my dear. You know I can't let it happen that easy. ;)
Reviewer: aprilbaby19 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 1: Tutors & 31's.
This was a great chapter. Loved that Edward tried to tell Alice that he wasnt getting the sweater and jeans because they were too expensive...Like she wasnt going to just buy them anyways. lol. Definately looks to be an interesting story..you are not wasting your time :) Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Hahaha, right? I guess he puts too much faith in her and her "non-addiction" sometimes. ;) Thank you so much for the review!
Reviewer: blinding-rainbows (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 1: Tutors & 31's.
i'm intrigued!update soon, please!
Author's Response: Good! And I think I'm going to submit Chapter 2 tomorrow, so keep an eye out! Thanks for the review. :)
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 1: Tutors & 31's.
I'm interested so far :)
Author's Response: Good! I'll have to work extra hard to make sure I keep it interesting for the duration of the story, haha.
Thanks for reviewing. :)
Reviewer: cinnamonfairy (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 1: Tutors & 31's.
I really like it! I think its a great start and I'm looking forward to reading more of it. I love how Edward isn't perfect at everything and how you've depicted his relationship with Alice.
I'm so glad Hannah81 directed me to this in the forums! I believe her when she says its gonna be a great story!
xxx
Author's Response: Perfect Edward is pretty wussy to me. I like my men with flaws. ;) haha
I'm glad she directed you here too! Yay for more readers.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: SinAndShame (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 1: Tutors & 31's.
This has a lot of potential. I love your writing style so far.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. :) I appreciate it.
Reviewer: Doomed Youth (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 1: Tutors & 31's.
WoW!
You are definetly*?* not wasting your time!
I recommend you write more!
And i love it too much for you not to write anymore.
Author's Response: I'll be posting more soon! Thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 1: Tutors & 31's.
Well, I think you definitely are NOT wasting your time. I really enjoyed the Edward/Alice stuff, and couldn't quit laughing at them. I love fics that have the two of them so close, as I really love their canon relationship a lot, so it's always good to see it continue on even in AU/AH fics.
I can't wait to see when Edward meets his tutor, and if he gives her a hard time.
Keep it coming, definitely! :)
~Cat~
Author's Response: Thank you!
They interact soon, but the first tutoring session isn't actually for another few chapters, so keep an eye out for it. ;)
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 1: Tutors & 31's.
so far, so good!
Reviewer: lexiecullen17 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 1: Tutors & 31's.
you are absolutely not wasting your time. ...if i could get more, that'd be lovely :)
Author's Response: Soon. Very soon. :) Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: littlebit (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 1: Tutors & 31's.
I don't think you are wasting your time. Its a promising start. I can't wait to see where you take it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I appreciate you taking the time to review. :)
Reviewer: Hannah81 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 1: Tutors & 31's.
YAY! Finally babe :)
Thanks for plugging my story :) I am just about to do the same for yours on my forum :)
You know I love this story - it really is AWESOME!! You should have believed me from the start. Now get cracking on chapter 4 :)
Love ya muchly xxx
Author's Response: It's almost, almost done. I'll have it finished and in your mailbox at some point tonight. Love ya girl!
xxx
Reviewer: White Sands (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 1: Tutors & 31's.
This is a great first chapter. It was really entertaining to read and I loved getting to know Edward and Alice's characters. And I just had to say that the comment about the Joe Jeans was priceless. Especially because yesterday I tried to convince my husband to buy a pair of $158 Joes Jeans and his reaction was almost word for word as Edwards. I swear! I laughed so hard when I read that paragraph!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you found it so amusing; it's pretty much my entire take on fashion, haha. :)
Reviewer: codyaudrey (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 1: Tutors & 31's.
I'm definitely interested and if you keep writing, I'll keep reading and reviewing!
Author's Response: I will definitely keep writing. I'm almost done with chapter 4. :) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: twilightlover90 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 1: Tutors & 31's.
wow this is really good i think you should write some more. i cant wait to find out how edward and bella's relationship turns out in the end. keep up the good work
Author's Response: I can't either! Haha. :) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: lisa89 (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 1: Tutors & 31's.
I really enjoyed that, can't wait for you to bring Bella in. :)
Author's Response: She's coming in the next chapter. ;) Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: Tsumi (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 1: Tutors & 31's.
well i enjoyed this start i thought the alice bit was a bit long, i really want to see edward and bella interaction! this is a really interesting idea, especially since edwards not rich it would appear, i can hardly wait for more =D
Author's Response: Yes, it is sort of long, isn't it? I guess I felt the need to explain her background a little more for some reason. Lucky for you, there's no more long character explanations, haha. :) Thank you for the review!
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