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Reviews For Breaking Bella
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 1: Tutors & 31's.

I really liked this chapter. This story is really good so far. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 03:29 AM · On: Chapter 4: Attempted Murder & DDR

OH MY GOD!! They are hilarious together! They fricking cannot stand eachother over a miscommunication. Here, Bella is finally trying to do the right thing and apologize and "fuckward" as she cals him, won't even listen to her. I cannot wait to see how this plays out! Great job.

Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 4: Attempted Murder & DDR

This chapter was hilarious! The cat fights between Edward and Bella had me cracking up. I can't wait to see what happens, I hope you update soon!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it!  It's been my aim to make people laugh, although apparently some people would rather have it rushed than enjoy it for what it is.  To each his own, though.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: PositivelyDazzled (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 4: Attempted Murder & DDR

This doesn't tie me over one bit... I want the next chapter NOW ;)

....

But I guess I will have to wait... :D I like angry Bella and angry Edward - so much fun ;P



Author's Response:

Haha aww.  Soon enough.  I finally started writing chapter 6, so we'll see.  The last few chapters have been about 19-20 pages long, so it's taken some time, but only as the chapter really starts to flow will I know if that'll be the case for this one.  Just the same, I'll try to get it done as soon as possible, but I don't want to rush it; I want it to be great for you guys. ;)  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Hannah81 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 02:15 AM · On: Chapter 4: Attempted Murder & DDR

AWESOME!!!!

Love this chapter :)

You're one sexy bitch and an awesome writer!!!



Author's Response:

I appreciate your enthusiasm, lovah.  Although apparently this wasn't my best chapter. lol.

Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 02:13 AM · On: Chapter 3: Igor & a party at the DC

Oh snaps, Edward does not do bipolar. That's hilarious. Bella is going to kick his ass for that comment.

Reviewer: vivian_swan (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 4: Attempted Murder & DDR

Awwww... :D not my favorite chapter... but you'll get there... I just hope they'll stop fighting in the next one:D THANKS for the update:D



Author's Response:

Barely.  I'm not the type of writer to make them hate each other, then the next day fall in love.  That's not realistic.  It'll happen when it happens.  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 2: Bitches & Bear Hugs

Uh oh.. this can't go well. I love Rosalie, she cracks me up.

Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 1: Tutors & 31's.

I'm taking Statistics right now and it's a killer. I love that you incorporated that into your story. I'm loving it so far, you've done a fabulous job.



Author's Response:

Ugh.  I feel your pain!  Stats is killing me slowly.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: The_Reader (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 01:32 AM · On: Chapter 4: Attempted Murder & DDR

Bella has her panties in a twist!

Buuuuut I don't blame her!

aha lookin' forward to that updaaate :D



Author's Response:

Hahaha.  Yes, yes she does.  I'll try to get it out as soon as I can. ;)  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 4: Attempted Murder & DDR

Hell yes! Go Bella, cant wait for more!



Author's Response:

I'm glad to hear it!  Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 4: Attempted Murder & DDR

Please update soon?



Author's Response:

Haha, I just updated, and you want more already?  Greedy, greedy, greedy. :P  But I love it!

Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 4: Attempted Murder & DDR

I like it



Author's Response:

Good.  Now I just need to make you love it. ;)  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: iliveforthis (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 4: Attempted Murder & DDR

oooh i wanna see how this plays out! :D



Author's Response:

Good!  I'm glad I'm holding your attention. haha.  Thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: Doomed Youth (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 01:24 AM · On: Chapter 3: Igor & a party at the DC

ahh!

smile!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Hannah81 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 3: Igor & a party at the DC

LMAO @ not owning Rob's dick!! hahaha

As always, this chapter rocked!! Even though I have read it before ;)

Love ya xx

Reviewer: Tsumi (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 3: Igor & a party at the DC

:S i was kind of confused that edward didnt comment on bellas physical appearance, it is a natural reaction especially in males to focus on that...and wow edward is an ass, kind of a weird first meeting but i'm enjoying this, can't wait for more =D



Author's Response:

Only if something attracts their attention.  Nothing except for the fact that she was acting crazy really attracted his attention, and at that point, he didn't care.  But he'll notice...don't worry. ;)  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Missa (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 3: Igor & a party at the DC

Oh, this is going to get interesting. As fun as it could be, hopefully they'll clear up the misunderstanding?



Author's Response:

They will...eventually. :D

Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 3: Igor & a party at the DC

oh i can only imagine bella's response. love it, updatesoon pleasee



Author's Response:

Hahaha, I'm quite fond of her response.  Then again, I might be biased. ;)  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: cinnamonfairy (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 3: Igor & a party at the DC

Love this chapter! I can't wait until Edward figures out who Bella is.

Please update soon! xxx



Author's Response:

I'll update next week. ;)  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Melsie (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 3: Igor & a party at the DC

So good! I love the hostility between them, I hope it stays for a little while! =)



Author's Response:

Oh, don't you worry about that. :D  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Cherrie (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 3: Igor & a party at the DC

oooo, drama, misunderstandings and anger, that's always good to have in a story;P



Author's Response:

I agree! ;) Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: lisa89 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 3: Igor & a party at the DC

My God, Bella's pretty angry! She loves the stink eye.

I hope they patch it up soon, and have some sweet lovin'. ;)

Author's Response:

Haha oh yeah, she's alllll over the stink eye.  They'll patch it up...in time. :P  Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: vivian_swan (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 3: Igor & a party at the DC

I like your stories...:))
Type faster please... I know creations like these dont pour out easily... but let this review inspire your brain to come up with more lines..Thanks:D



Author's Response:

Hahaha I'm trying!  My brain needs to breathe for a few days before I start typing again; the last two chapters have been so long!  I finished chapter 5 recently, so I should be starting on 6 soon.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: graceisgone (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 3: Igor & a party at the DC

hahaha i love edward!



Author's Response:

Me too! Assward is pretty sexy. :P  Thanks for the review!

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