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Reviewer: Maximista (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 5: Sexy poses & Sexless eons
I actually liked the exchange with Adrian. Edward's a guy and Bella's given him no reason for him to like her yet...plus it kinda sounds like she looks like Bella and I'm sure that's no coincidence ;) Ahh I loved the bonding with Edward, Emmett and the cereal...poor Jasper, he needs to get in on the action. As usual, great chapter!
Author's Response: LOL @ pitying Jasper! I'll make Edward feed him some goldfish crackers, just for you! :D
Reviewer: iliveforthis (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 5: Sexy poses & Sexless eons
sigh, and the misunderstanding continues... :[
edward's not actually gonna 'get it on' with his lab teacher right?
Author's Response: I guess you'll just have to keep reading to see. :P
Reviewer: LovelyLamb (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 5: Sexy poses & Sexless eons
Oooooooh, how I love me some good verbal Edward/Bella fighting! It´s so much more fun when they don´t fall hopelessly in love with each other the second they meet.
Keep those chapters coming!!!
And that scene with Edward, Emmett and the cereal? - Hilarious!
Author's Response: I'm tryin'. I thoroughly enjoy Emmett in the next chapter, so I'm excited to post it!
Reviewer: peachykeenbean17 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 5: Sexy poses & Sexless eons
I continue to look forward to new chapters of this to come out! keep up the good work!
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 04:27 AM · On: Chapter 4: Attempted Murder & DDR
Lol... Loving it! :D More please?
Reviewer: riotrolla9 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 1: Tutors & 31's.
i love this :D
freakin hilarious and AWESOOOOME!
Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 4: Attempted Murder & DDR
oy vey. i can feel the hate radiating out of the computer lol..great story
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 4: Attempted Murder & DDR
She really needs to stop being a fucking bitch!!
Reviewer: riotrolla9 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 1: Tutors & 31's.
i love this :D
freakin hilarious and AWESOOOOME!
Reviewer: BRANDY_D (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 4: Attempted Murder & DDR
I am totally loving your story so far....I haven't read anything like it before and trust me....I have read a shitload of TFF....
Keep up the good work.
Update soon!
~Brandy
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 4: Attempted Murder & DDR
oh, sint hate a passionate feeling? i luv it. update soon please;
Reviewer: lovelikethemovies (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 4: Attempted Murder & DDR
I know that Bella made some awful misjudgements, but honestly, I seriously think Edward needs to be hit by an 18-wheeler.
Reviewer: lisa89 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 4: Attempted Murder & DDR
Oh dear, Bella's a bit of an ass. It's quite entertaining to watch them fight, but I hope they resolve it soon. They're very much in need of some sexy times. :)
I can totally relate to Bella though, it sucks when you realize you're wrong, and then have to work yourself up to an apology. And it sucks even more when the person you have to apologize to is also being an ass.
Anyway, great chapter, can't wait to see how the tutoring session goes!
Reviewer: aprilbaby19 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 4: Attempted Murder & DDR
Really good chapter. I love the confrontational Bella and Edward...its almost like they are so pissed at each other and have such passion and emotion tied up in that i cant wait to see it released when they realize they love each other and Just have to have each other.
Cant wait to read the next chapter.
Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 4: Attempted Murder & DDR
OMC! This has got to be my favorite chapter by far! I laughed like a loon the entire time. But my favorite line was "Despising someone unfairly was extremely exhausting." I have no idea why that hit me as so freaking funny, but it just did. Seeing the two of them butt heads is highly entertaining!
Thanks so much for writing this!!!!
Author's Response: LOL! My friend Hannah actually told me she laughed at that line, too! I didn't actually mean it to be funny, but I'm glad at least some people got a kick out of it, haha. :)
Reviewer: Maximista (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 4: Attempted Murder & DDR
Bella is crazy! She has some seeeerious resentment issues but I find it absolutely hilarious! I can't wait to see what it is that will make Edward start liking the bipolar one. I can see why he thinks she's a total nut because when it comes to him, well...she just is.
Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 3: Igor & a party at the DC
Alright, I can see why this is one of your favorite chapters! It's been a while since I've laughed so hard, and I am really getting a kick out of the whole "six degrees of separation" thing you have goning on.
Edward's plan for Alice to take Jasper shopping is brillant! Maybe they will actually get together! :)
I'm looking forward to reading more!
Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 2: Bitches & Bear Hugs
I LOVE Rosalie! She's perfect! And Bella thinking about Edward as sex on legs, then finding out exactly who he is...yeah, I was laughing out loud at that!
Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 1: Tutors & 31's.
I love where this story is going...how Alice came to be friends with Edward and sister to Emmett. I can't wait to read more! I actually searched for this story after the recommendation on Now and Forever.
Keep up the fantastic work!
Reviewer: i would like to be renesmee (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 4: Attempted Murder & DDR
Next chapter , please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: lisa54aa (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 4: Attempted Murder & DDR
Ahhhh, why did you have to end it there? Bella does exhibit a bit of a bi-polar personality. I hope that this gets reigned in somewhat. Also, can she be a tad less clumsy? I love, love, love the storyline and can't wait to see why and when Edward decides he wants to pursue her. Hopefully you will be able to update soon.
Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 3: Igor & a party at the DC
Ok, so NOT a good start to a relationship, but freakin' funny to read! Really like your sense of humor, this is one of the funniest fics I've come across.
Professor—” “—Muh—Mm...Mook-ass-yuck" - HAHAHAHAHA!!
Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 2: Bitches & Bear Hugs
The evening is going to be either really funny or just bloody awkward! Bella seems to have quite a temper, I feel for whoever is on the receiving end of her anger. Hopefully they will be able to sort out the misunderstandings before too much shit hits the fan!
Reviewer: tooblu96 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 4: Attempted Murder & DDR
WOW! My emotions were all over the place with this chapter. First of all, what's up Bella's butt? She is extrememly judgmental. She owes Edward a huge apology. I can't even find fault with him calling her bipolar because...frankly...she is! She has exactly what's coming to her, and honestly, she needs to get over herself, and admit she was wrong. If I was Edward, I really wouldn't want to hear her half-a$$ed explanations either. You're a great writer! I love it when I read something that gets me all in a tizzy! LOL!
Reviewer: chicabonita51983 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 4: Attempted Murder & DDR
Hahahaha. I was laughing through all of Bella's and Edward's interactions. It's great.
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