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Reviews For Breaking Bella
Reviewer: ipunchedawerewolfintheface (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 7: Stink Bombs & Fishnet Thongs

Hahaha you win ten million points for mentioning It's Gonna Be Me!!! I was also 12 when that song came out and was convinced I was going to marry Justin. *sigh* Life was so simple back then.

Reviewer: karentwilighted (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 01:07 AM · On: Chapter 8: Sex Changes & Eiffel 65

Wow she really is a bitch. Everything he's said/done has been in reaction to her. He's tried to be decent - walking her home, not sleeping with her, etc - but she just jumps all over his ass. This may be one story where I'm not hoping for E/B because I think he can do better.

Author's Response:

LOL, that's hilarious considering that's exactly how I felt the ENTIRE Twilight series!

Reviewer: lynnarro (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 8: Sex Changes & Eiffel 65

have you been eating Tristans goldfish crackers??????? haha very good but I hate cliffhangers lol

Author's Response:

LOL. no! shun

Reviewer: daniellemariecullen (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 8: Sex Changes & Eiffel 65

AHHHHHH!!!!! THIS IS SO GOOD!!!!! i love it!!!

cant wait for an update!

Reviewer: Twilight_fan_girl (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 12:43 AM · On: Outtake 1: The Mission

xD Lol!!!! This is awesome! You truely are a life saver i mean honestly i'd be sat here at..3:42 and bored shitless and instead i get to laugh at the naivness of eddie and b xD You rock this is awesome, gonna read more! :D update please!!!!

you rock xox

Reviewer: vivian_swan (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 8: Sex Changes & Eiffel 65

HAHAAHAH! Drunk shenanigans! And here we go again, the rage part 2!!!!! THANK YOU FOR MAKING IT SO DAMN LONG!:D

Reviewer: gordonfan74 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 8: Sex Changes & Eiffel 65

The chapter was EXCELLENT!  Just so you know, the piggyback ride was probably one of my favorite fanfiction moments EVER!  Yes, I did say EVER!  I can't explain what it is about that sequence, but it just did it for me.  This chapter was very near perfection, as far as I'm concerned, because it was chocked full of every kind of emotion possible.  The only flaw I found is that you left us hanging.  Just when I thought they were finally finding some sort of stability, you go and pull the rug out from underneath.  You clever girl you.  You know how to keep the readers coming back for more.

Seriously though, the story is coming along beautifully.  I really felt that this chapter was a nice way to further develop Bella's character.  That we were able to learn more about her through Edward's soliloquy was a nice twist on the usual.  Also, we got a peek into what makes Edward tick.  He is a gentleman at heart, paying attention to what his momma say.  Seems that perhaps he has been so focused on being a player and having female attention he forgot to be true to himself at times. 

I could go on and on about this chapter.  The length was perfect.  The dialogue was perfect.  The banter was perfect.  Bold Bella was perfect.  Noble Edward was perfect.  Even the ending was perfect.  After all, if you had them fall into each other now the story would feel rushed and it would be over way to soon.  I just know that you have so much wonderful story to weave and I can't wait to read it all. 

Author's Response:

Gah!  Speechless, again!  I'd tell you to stop,'s feeding my creative ego, and it's much appreciated. hahah ;)  Thank you so much!!! xxx

Reviewer: lavish1 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 8: Sex Changes & Eiffel 65

I am sooo loving this!!!  But, you are evil!  How could you stop here?!

Can toootally relate to your mom..Wensday!!



Author's Response:

LOL.  Chapter 9 is coming on Sunday, but I'm serious when I say it's mega short, y'all.  haha

Reviewer: iliveforthis (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 8: Sex Changes & Eiffel 65

awwh.. just when i thought things were getting better...something always manages to screw it up.. :{

Reviewer: Sarahcini (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 8: Sex Changes & Eiffel 65

I have been listening to that song alll day!


I loved it!

Reviewer: biz8113 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 8: Sex Changes & Eiffel 65

i mean, seriously? i'm beginning to think that bella is a tad bipolar. yeah, i'd probably be pissed if i woke up with edward in my bed (well, that's not exactly true), but she needs to calm the fuck down.


love the story. keep up the fantastic work. and i hope that bella is suitably chastened the next time she sees edward. sheesh.

Reviewer: book_lover224 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 8: Sex Changes & Eiffel 65

okay wow what a chapter. i think that bella needs to stop being a total bitch i mean yeah i would freak if i were in her situation but shes allways being a bitch towards him

Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 8: Sex Changes & Eiffel 65

aw come on what the helll???????? it was just about to be good!!!!!!

Reviewer: Lola84 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 8: Sex Changes & Eiffel 65

Arrgh. I've totally done what Bella did (oops) - mortifying but totally realistic. But it was her fault! And she is kind of a bitch. :D

Reviewer: agemenu (Anonymous) · Date: April 15, 2009 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 8: Sex Changes & Eiffel 65

When are they gonna get freaky and admit they like-y them some Belward time??


:) Good story btw. I hate statistics, tho.

Reviewer: FIRE_and_ICE (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 8: Sex Changes & Eiffel 65

Ahhhh I love this story so much it's insane. The drama in this story makes the world go round, no kidding. I love your writing style, and your Emmett he rocks! So thank you for sharing your amazingly awesome story with us, it always has me laughing hysterically. So again thanks for being so awesome.  

Reviewer: ieatfiction (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 8: Sex Changes & Eiffel 65

oh man....and for a second i thought they were making progress!  great chapter....realllly funny!

Reviewer: delilah818 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 8: Sex Changes & Eiffel 65

Omg! More more more! Greatest chapter update soon!

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 8: Sex Changes & Eiffel 65

Ok im really starting to wonder if she really is bi-polar.

Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 8: Sex Changes & Eiffel 65

oh sweet crap...just when you think things are going well!  My favorite line this chapter? (besides 'I like you so much better when you're naked...of course!)

'Hangover plus head trauma; what a perfect way to start the morning.'

Loved it!  Update soon again!!

Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 8: Sex Changes & Eiffel 65

Oh, and things had been going so well...:(

Great chapter as always, really, really, looking forward to the next one! :D Hope you hurry to update! :) :) 

Reviewer: msrsEdwardbrooks (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 8: Sex Changes & Eiffel 65

omg I love this ch. more than the other one's it was kind of funny. I really want to see scrach that I really need to what haappens next.


Reviewer: absmw1618 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 8: Sex Changes & Eiffel 65

great chapter , i love this story.

Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 8: Sex Changes & Eiffel 65

HAAHAHAHHAHAHAA. i lauhed sooo hard when edward fell. i could just imagine it. I love it, please update soon

Reviewer: iKissed a Vamp3496 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 8: Sex Changes & Eiffel 65

that was an amazing chapter. It had just the right amount of smuttishness, bitchyness, and humor! Write more!

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