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Reviews For Breaking Bella
Reviewer: babbling_brooke (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 9: Mama's & Ex's

Awe Man, I was hoping for some E&B interaction...He needs to put her bitch ass in her place, I have never "not" wanted E&B together like I don't in this story, she is unworthy.... Anyway, great chapter though... throwing the Tanya in - I don't usually like the Jacob/Tanya complications but Bella is so undeserving of Edward that I am rooting for anyone other than her (even if that means the teacher, at least she is nice to Edward), so if that was your intention than well done, even when it's just Bella and her thoughts she is self centered and judgmental... Now, The Emmett staredown to Jasper was Effing Hilarious, so funny, the visual in my head is a crack up, You have really written these characters well (even with my obvious distaste for this Bella) I love the stronger version of Angela, I adore all the boys and Rosalie is awesome... More Alice to come I assume and I can't wait for that...



Author's Response:

LOLOL.  I love how you perceive Bella in this story.  I especially love the fact that that's basically the way I perceived her the entire Twilight series, INCLUDING the fact that she was completely unworthy of Edward. hahaha thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: meimei42 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 9: Mama's & Ex's

Love this story!  I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 9: Mama's & Ex's

your really dragging this out.............



Author's Response:

Yes and no.  As I said to another reviewer, you have to remember that thus far, only 6 days have lapsed.  They can't suddenly stop hating each other out of nowhere and fall in love after that short of time period.  That's ridiculous, and it'd be so unrealistic I might as well just stop writing the story all together if I did that. :)

Reviewer: lionandthelamb80 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 9: Mama's & Ex's

omg how funny! , more please

Reviewer: crazy4cullen (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 9: Mama's & Ex's

ooo nice....it'll be fun to see them both getting jealous of the other's friend/ex/whatever...

 

update soon!

Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 9: Mama's & Ex's

I feel like my week is spent lookin forward to your updates and you never fail to deliver an awesome chapter. I need to make an account on the forum just so I can visit your thread. I took a break from my own Statistics homework (gag me please) to read this update and I'm super glad that I did. Bella needs to take it easy on poor 'ole Edward... on second thought I really love them at each others throats, it makes the tension much more funny and interesting. Can't wait to read how the interaction during the study session will go. This is really long, I'm sorry. In short - you're awesome, your story is excellent, and I love you.



Author's Response:

Ugh, I feel you on the Stats homework; I have the worst teacher in my history of Stats attempts and he's just zooming through all of these chapters, so yay me!  I had like, 6 sections of homework to do over Spring Break and it took me half the friggin week to do it.  God help me if I did it all wrong. o.O

I'm super psyched to know that you aren't disappointed in any of the chapters!  There's a couple of people that I go straight to searching the reviews for when I post a new chapter, and you're one of them!  I always want to know what you guys think, or if there's any ideas you have for the following chapter(s). :)

Thanks, as always, for reviewing, and I love you too! 

Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 4: Attempted Murder & DDR

She's really not very rational at all in this. It's really freakin funny. I love it.

Reviewer: veggiegirl0601 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 1: Tutors & 31's.

I just found your story and read the whole thing through.  What can I say?  You had me laughing out loud multiple times each chapter and I absolutely love pretty much everything about this story.  I think you're pretty awesome.  Bella's definitely frustrating the crap out of me, poor Edward lol.  But I love it all.  I look forward to the next chapter, I'll probably be checking in like a pathetic loser every day to see if you've updated.  xoxo



Author's Response:

Yay!  I always love getting new readers. :)  I'm glad to know you like it that much, and while it secretly makes my ego giddy and inflated to think of you checking to see if I've updated that much, I'll just save you the time and tell you that my normal posting day is Sunday.  This past week was a little off from the outtake, but it's back on schedule now, and I'm writing chapter 10 as we speak!

Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 3: Igor & a party at the DC

HA this is going to be hillarious! I've tried to post several times. Sorry this is the first one to actually make it. Silly internet. I love the mis information they have going on about each other.

Reviewer: jdhsmomth (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 9: Mama's & Ex's

I like this story, but it's kinda slow. Sorry. I guess I am anxious to see them together!  I don't like that Edward hates Bella.  I want him to feel something for her. Adrian and Tanya need to go away! Oh, and so does Jake! Yes I am definitly Team Edward. Ha! I really got upset when I realized I had just read the last update.  I wanted to get to the good stuff. Can't wait for the next update. Thanks for a great read!



Author's Response:

It might be slow, but it's real.  I mean, you have to keep in mind that all of these chapters are within the time span of 6 days; they're not going to hate each other then miraculously fall in love already, it's completely unrealistic.  I can't stand stories like that.  Jake isn't a threat in this story, so don't hate him!  Haha thanks for the review

Reviewer: espeinaz (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 9: Mama's & Ex's

I have been wanting to read your story for quite some time but real life often gets in the way (school, family, work, etc.) and today was the day I read all the way to what you have here.  It is a great story with A LOT of detail. 

I don't know where you are from or where you currently live, but my favorite thing thus far is that you are using actual locations and the descriptions are perfect, especially using the BART, the MUNI, the freeway references, the shopping areas.  Then, when Bella and Ben meet for the first time and they realize that they are both from Phx, I was pleasantly surprised that you used actual high school names from here in the valley. Even more surprising that you had your description of Arcadia being a bit ritzy and South Mountain being um.....less than desirable?? 

I really am enjoying the banter, I think so far it is great and I can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

I currently live and am from California--the central valley, to be specific.  I lived in San Francisco for two years, though, and went to SFSU for both those years, so it's an area I'm familiar with.  I just did research as far as AZ was concerned, and I was a little worried that maybe I actually hadn't gotten it right, so I'm glad to hear that I did!

Thanks for the review, and I'm glad to have entertained a new reader!

Reviewer: Wishingforlove (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 9: Mama's & Ex's

Wow, I just read the whole story today (even though there were other things I really should have been doing) and I really loved it! I'm adding you to my fav's and look forward to another update!!

Reviewer: karentwilighted (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 9: Mama's & Ex's

Wow she is a psycho bitch. Not even an apology after she realizes he hadn't done anything but walk her home? Instead she gets pissed? She'd have a lot to make up for if she's gonna come close to deserving him.

Reviewer: lrynmjv (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 9: Mama's & Ex's

So I started reading Breaking Bella today and I love it!!!   I know Edward and Bella are eventually going to hook up, but I love the situations you put them in, with Bella being a bitch and Edward being an ass.  I think it is so much better than some of the stories where they are perfect and nice to each other and all of that!  I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: vampirelust7 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 8: Sex Changes & Eiffel 65

Wow! I think this chick really is Bi-Polar! It also seems Edward can't do nothing right, at least by her.  Psycho!

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 9: Mama's & Ex's

Bella needs to be a little nicer to Edward and he needs to see how she really is. Basically, they need to get their crap straightened out.

Awesome chapter! Please update soon?

Reviewer: tneb1234 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 9: Mama's & Ex's

we need more!!

Reviewer: msrsEdwardbrooks (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 9: Mama's & Ex's

1 word WOW intesting. 1 ? is jacob going to be there when tayna comes

xoxo- msrsEdwardbrooks

Reviewer: beanbean (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 9: Mama's & Ex's

Oh my... those two need to get over themselves and just have a little talk.... cause they are gonna make themselves and all their friends miserable.....

not to mention that their situation is only gonna get more and more complicated with the arrivals of Jake and Tanya.... talk about throwing gasoline onto an already raging fire....

I mean adding jealousy to their total denial and 'angry passion' and you may have a total necular explousion and who knows if anyone will survive....

hope that there is something more coming soonish!

Reviewer: cupcake4711 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 04:39 PM · On: Outtake 1: The Mission

brilliant! 

Reviewer: vampirelust7 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 5: Sexy poses & Sexless eons

Cullen/match-maker? huh?  I have nothing about the other two.  They are being ridiculous and they really need to get over it already.  Act like adults, but this Bella and Edward we're talking about so I guess there has to be a cretain level of drama. Fine... bring it on!

Reviewer: Doomed Youth (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 9: Mama's & Ex's

fgjdfg!!!

Tanya... urghhhhhhhhh!

did i mention i love you, and all your talentedness?

updateeeeeeee sooooooooooooon!!!

Reviewer: vampirelust7 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 4: Attempted Murder & DDR

oh God, these two are relentless!  I hope they get their shit together soon, but I do think I like this bad-mouthed Bella. She's great!

Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 9: Mama's & Ex's

I LOVE IT, 1000 TIMES LOVE IT. please, you HAVE to update soon. i love this fanfic.

Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 9: Mama's & Ex's

man, I hope Bella's going to apologize - she seriously needs to.

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