bella wasnt delusional, eddie is just confused. and im going to keep saying this to myself pover 'n over again. bella is so not taking his reaction in a good way. anyways, i loooove this story, so update soon. and id make you a banner if i had the ability. but i dont. i can draw stick eddie and bellie if youd like :D

omg love the story and can't wait till it takes off! I can't believe he shut the door on her face...I mean there has to be an exclamation lk seriously that's so not okay! Well I hope they work it out and we all know that soon Edward will try to win Bella over so I'm not too worried! lol Anywaay U r an excellent writer and keep up the fantastic work! Update soon! :)

wtf?  what kind of response to an apology/word vomit is that? :)  I liked Renee in this chapter...I think you nailed it - especially with the donkey thing!

I think it is great. You HAVE to write more soon!!!

What's funny is that all this time I've been completely pissed off at Bella for the way she's been acting toward Edward and then she goes and apologizes and he acts like a douche!  I understand Edward not forgiving her completely right away but to not say anything (hardly) and then close the door in her face?  URGH!  But... I still love them.  It's a step.  Hopefully forwards.  Maybe Bella will try to prove her sincerity to Edward.  I hope so, better that than for her to get mad again.  I'm really happy that you updated.  The spanking thing was hilarious, although super creepy, Rose should tell someone (other than Bella obviously).  Maybe Emmett can beat him up, haha.  I look forward to the next chapter!  xoxo

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!  He slammed the DOOR!!! This is fabulous cannot wait for more sy

honey-if i knew how to make you a banner, i totally would.  i love this story because edward and bella are not drawn together from the get-go.  i love that you are making them work for it.  it is a fantastic tale you are weaving!

 

please post more soon!

Maybe I am just slow but I am having a hard time following all of the complex story lines here.  I guess Bella's feeling the need to apologize sort of came out of nowhere... unless I missed it in an earlier chapter.  I am also not sure i understand the whole Jake and Tanya thing coming in either -- seems to be confusing some things.

Bella has very few (if any) redeeming qualities right now -- but that may be part of your story line.  i am still interested in this story but maybe we need some more background.

Haha! He slams the door in her face! Hillarious!

She's nuts and he's a total asshole, but I love this crazy shit.  It was horrible of Edward to slam the door in her face, but I can't say that it's out of line with his usual awful behavior.  I can't wait to see Jake and the boys - I bet they'll be a riot!  I love the nicknames, too!!  I anxiously await the update.

I'd be interested in beta-ing your new story.  Are you looking for mostly a grammar/spelling checker, or more creative/storyline type input?  Let me know if you're interested!

The chapter was good.  I was happy to see that you had updated, because I was anxiously anticipating the tutoring session and its aftermath.  Bella has totally pissed Edward off and I don't know if he can forgive her or not.  When she questioned his integrity, after he took care of her without taking advantage of her, she lost alot of his respect.  I think that in a lot of ways, even though he may not yet realize it, she hurt his feelings by questioning his motives. 

I am proud of Bella for opening up to Edward and taking the initiative to apologize for her behaviors.  She really put herself out there, whether either of them know it yet or not, by making such a huge move, especially when she told him about being alot like her dad when it comes to expressing emotions.  She gave him a little glimpse of her true self, whether intentionally or not.  Now, how will he take that little tidbit? 

I think it's funny that Rosalie knows about both of their pending spring break trips to Forks.  Wonder what she'll do with that information.  I have a feeling she'll keep it to herself.  Imagine the surprise if they run into each other.  Hilarity is bound to ensue.

Anyway, as I said, I am so appreciative of the update.  I missed getting a chapter from you and was so excited to see an update.  I can't wait to read more.  I am now very curious as to what will happen between Bella and Edward next.  Will he be civil to her and cut it out with the cold shoulder?  Only you know the answer to that question.  Please update again soon if you can.

Okay, so the little conversations with Jake and Renee were hilarious.  You had me choking on air from laughter, lol. And omg, Rosalie and the professor! LMAO!

Now, down to the E/B business. It's good to see that Bella finally apologized, but like I said in my last review, Edward seriously needs to stop being so defensive. It's like everything Bella does is wrong. And that sucks. Just like the door he slammed in Bella's face.

He cannot be at his wit's end with her- it's HIS turn to apologize and stop being a Doucheward [haha].

I can't wait for your next update!