damn he slammed the door in her face...wtf.....okay im ready for more please...what happens next...?

Author's Response:

You'll find out when I post on Sunday... :)

Hmm...I'd make you a banner if I had any idea how, but I'm clueless about it.  :P

I found the nick names of Bella and the guys very amusing.  Only friends can really get away with calling each other names like that.  The professor was seriously creepy.  I'm hoping there will more explaining Edward's response to Bella's apology.  I'm very interested in finding out what caused Rose's response to where Bella was going for spring break.  I think I have an idea what it is.  :D

Author's Response:

Haha I finally got somebody to make one for me!  Thanks for the offer, anyhow :)

I don't even know where the hell that idea came from.  When I wrote both conversations with Renee and Jake, I had been up for over 24 hours, running on 3 hours of sleep prior to that as it was.  I was in such a weird trance, I didn't even know what the hell I was typing.  I'm glad it was amusing though haha

I don't think Edward should've slammed the door in her face when she was obviously trying to make things less tense between them, espesially since it was obviously hard for her to do so... I guess now the ball's on his side to make things better;)

I don't remember if it was said in the earlier chapters, but is Edward going to Forks over the brake? If he is I bet you make them sit together on the plane or something! haha, that would make one tense flight! or maybe they'd finally get their heads out of their asses! Okay, I'm gonna stop guessing things that are probably hugely off course... :)  

I like the new banner:)

Hope next update will be soon! :D

Author's Response:

Lol, yes, Edward is going to Forks for Spring Break, and no, he will not be sitting next to Bella. ;)

great story, i love it. cant wait for more

damn you for this cliffie woman!!! i need to know what's gona happen next asap, and what the deuce he's thinking!!!!!!!!!!

My goodness...this is driving me nuts.  When is all of the confusion/misunderstanding going to end.  It's maddening!  Good story.

No, you didn't come across bitchy. It's all good. Just didn't want you to think it was an all out attsck; it wasn't. We've just got a case of nutty Bella and crazy Edward. Those two alone can make a reader go nuts, especially when they keep going at it like kids and not talking like adults. Makes you  want to reach in the computer and smack them both upside the head and say, "Stop being babies! Talk already."

Better yet, sit them both down and make them cross notes on the level of "I like you. Do you like me? Check yes or no.'

lol

As for continuing, I'm not one to start something and not finish it, although sometimes I tire myself out from reading ALL day and it makes me want to shut down.

I'm no quitter, and your characters are starting to win me over within these last couple of chapters, except for Bella. She needs Ritalin or something....

Author's Response:

LOL I know.  They frustrate the hell out of me.  I just know most 20 year olds are still immature little shits, so even though I never actually intended on them being the way they are, I guess it's still kind of fitting.

HAR HAR @ the notes!  Those still crack me up when I think about them.  I wonder if people still do that!

Check yes or no.

haha

Please tell me nobody is in his bedroom.  I'll make you a banner if you tell me nobody is in the bedroom.

OK?

'Cause I have crazy intuitive stuff going on that's tell me someone is in the bedroom and that's why he closed the door in her face.

I'm really hoping he's just at the end of his rope with her, because of all the crap she's put him through.

But...oh hell...I can't shake it.

Author's Response:

LMFAO!!  No, nobody's in his bedroom!

hahahahahahah, omg.  Thank you so much.  I am in such a shit mood and that instantly made it a bit brighter.

Omg her rant was hilarious, i always do that when im nervous and maybe edward shut the door in her face so that he could finally laugh and not do it in front of her, thats probably how i would act.

can't wait till you update

 

ahhh. you can't end it there!!!

Your response well taken. The review you responded to was my very first review, before the others, so it wasn't a mean to insult you; that was just my honest opinion. Sorry it pissed you off.

With that being said, thanks for clearing up what I didn't understand with your response, as I was going just by the summary. However, after reading Rosalie's side, I now get what the title itself means, and why you chose to go the route you did. It was all building up to the 'plan', which makes sense of what you've previously written.

Now, I see that you've added a new chapter, so let me get to that and I will get back at you some other time.

Author's Response:

There's no need to apologize; it's your opinion and you're entitled to it.  I hope I didn't come across too bitchy because I really was trying not to, lol.

As I said, after this next chapter (11) things will start moving forward a bit quicker.  Thanks for still sticking to it and reading, though.  And thanks for reviewing. :)

Edward had every right to slam the door in her face, she is lucky he even gave her the op to speak her piece.... She has been nothing but a judgmental Shrew who never gave him the time of day let alone the benefit of the doubt...even after she was made aware that her initial impression of him was based off a mis-understanding she continued to be a bitch who verbally attacked him at any given chance, Even when he was doing the right thing she assumed and accused the worst w/out so much as an apology...(even her inner dialogue is selfish)... It isn't just with Edward, when Rosalie called for a friend (after her teacher inappropriately suggested sexual acts to Rose) Bella only gave her a laugh and then shrugged it off (Selfish, Shrew)... This Edward has continued to take her jabs with no knowledge as to why she would be so hateful, But Bella decides she wants to clear her conscious and give some half ass hollered explanation to her side of the story followed up by a weak ass "sorry" and expects it to be all sunshine and roses... whatever!

Edward said it best: "Peace out. Keep the shirt."

She should have to work at her redemption, You cant treat somebody like shit repeatedly and then do a complete 180 and expect them to follow you, she would seem like a multiple personality to me if I where Edward and I would worry for my personal safety when in her presence LOL!

I love the story, I love the characters (Bella and myself don't really dig each other but where working through our differences)... I am glad he didn't just bend to her whim cos that would have been messed up... She has yet to show any side of herself that would be worthy of the friends who surround her with the exception of her phone calls with Jacob... Whereas Edward has been a worthy friend to all and even showed respect to a drunken Bella who was throwing herself at him...

She has a way to go in my eyes to even be deemed as a good person, let alone Edward's soul mate...

OMG I have never left this long of a review before LMAO! I guess I had some strong feelings on the matter....

Author's Response:

LMAO!  I love how strongly you feel about your dislike towards Bella!  It's just so funny to me, because initially, I never meant to make my characters the way they are; it just sort of happened!  My reviewers have so many different insights to things; things that I don't even realize until I read what they're talking about and I'm like, "...wow!  They're totally right!  I need to figure out a way to make that okay."

umm, is it too late for me to kill him before he becomes important to Bella, because that was rather shitty of him. i'm just like Bella and i would be fucking pissed because she put herself out there to try and apologize and boom! a fucking door in the face. he better be ready for the consequences. great chapter by the way.

Author's Response:

LOL, aw, come on!  I guarantee you won't be mad next chapter when you find out why he did it!  And then you'll feel bad for having ill feelings towards him, cos it wasn't even his fault to begin with! hahah