YAY progress! I’m so happy! =)

Y'know I can't help it, I just want Edward to be stupidified by our Bella already! Bella needs to be the one that he can't stop thinking about! pls! lol

And like I said before that Adrian needs to "get outta here!"

Love the fic and was sooo very happy to see it updated this morning!

Melsie!

OH MY GOD! I just found this story and I'm already loving it because I'm from the Bay Area myself! Not San Francisco, though I go there often, but San Jose. I'm enjoying this a lot so far, and since there's many more chapters to go, I'll read on!

Great chapter!  I am very glad that Bella and Edward talked things out and came to an impasse of sorts.  At least now they can be civil to each other.  I'm going to be honest I don't like the Adrian chick.  I was hopeful that she would have been pissed about Edward's brush off in the bar, but unfortunately she's too dense to realize he did it.  Damn her, giving him an out like that.  I wanted him to have to explain his draw to Bella, eventhough that was probably not going to happen not matter what.  They are both chalking their little interlude up to being inebriated.  Whatever they have to tell themselves to get through the day. 

The plot is moving along quite nicely.  I like that Bella's character is evolving and that we get to see more of her layers peeled back with each chapter.  This post she showed Edward a very humanistic, emotional side of herself.  I think he thought she was lacking in that regard, but her apology and subsequent hurt feelings proved to him otherwise. 

I was stoked about Alice's little visit.  I have a sneaking suspicion of what she was up to, visiting unexpectedly and tagging along to hang out with Edward's non-working co-worker.  The girl is smooth, or he happens to just be clueless.  Anyway, I am very excited to see what happens next.  I am eagerly anticipating spring break in Forks.  Bella and Edward in the same town, with none of the other crew from school around.  I just hope that Adrian doesn't decide to rear her ugly head in town.  That would not be good, or maybe it would.  Only you know the answer.  Take care and please, please update again soon if you can.

I love Chester French :D

I'm looking forward to 'Back to You', but fingers crossed that we'll still get a chapter of this story next week.. I'm too addicted ;P

I'm glad that Edward wasn't serious about slamming the door in her face.. But I do anticipate that there could possibly be a little drama concering him not noticing who's at work... uh uh... haha.. Can't wait for the next chapter to be up :D

Im really glad he forgave her and they are getting along. However Adrian needs to find someone new to flirt with.

The 'asking, no, screaming' totally reminded me of Chicago.

OMG! LOVED how he reacted to Bella's breakdown after he slammed the door in her face. Loved how they talked and are now getting along better. I wish Adrian would leave him the hale alone. Looked like Rose was contacting Alice about Bella's plans to go to Forks. It would be hilarious if Edward Bella and Jake ended up sitting next to one another on the flight. Cannot wait for Edward to have an "a-ha" moment and realize just how much he likes bella!! Looking forward to more!

awwww im so glad that they made up!!!!!! cant wait to see what happens while alice is there!!!!!!!! :)

You are geting greedy with the review thing..that's o.k., 'cause I like this chapter too.  I am curious to see how things are going to develop w/Edward and Bella, especially since Adrian has popped up.  Also, wondering what's going to happen to Edward over Spring Break.

Looking forward to finding out soon...

So post already!!!    Please?

aww no hook wow. sooo is edward and bella going to be in forks at the same time and going to run in to eachother. i hope that hapens in the next chapter or something that will keep me on the edg of my seat.

xoxo- msrsEdwardbrooks

hahahhahahaha .

this was hilarious in such a weird way ,

PS; what the FUCK is forum ?!

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