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Reviewer: iliveforthis (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 1
wow. ahaha bella's so much more relaxed and confident, lols
Reviewer: mandilm14 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 1
I love his picture on there. I'm glad they are finally getting along, even though when they don't its hilarious.
Reviewer: lily_zen (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 11: Leg kicks & TexaAAAAAAS
I absolutely love the slow progression of Bella and Edward's relationship, even though the anticipation is killing me. Still, it's marvelous, and I hope you update soon.
Reviewer: Bundycal (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 11: Leg kicks & TexaAAAAAAS
Glad they are finally getting along, but have to say I don't like Adrian at all hopefully she isn't around much longer.
Reviewer: Bundycal (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 11: Leg kicks & TexaAAAAAAS
Glad they are finally getting along, but have to say I don't like Adrian at all hopefully she isn't around much longer.
Reviewer: Kelly (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 11: Leg kicks & TexaAAAAAAS
I've finally caught up with your story. I love it. I loved Edward slamming the door in Bella's face, because he is just so cocky like that. But at least he humbled and saw the er of his ways. :) HA! Can't wait for more....in Forks!
Reviewer: Tsherm (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 11: Leg kicks & TexaAAAAAAS
ok... I want more... Let's get a little ***** in the next one... ??
Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 11: Leg kicks & TexaAAAAAAS
I thought this was a good chapter, other than the fact that I really don't like this Adrian person! lol :)
I'm happy that E&B are finally getting over their differences! Looking forward to next chapter! :)
Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 10: Busty & the Burro
funny. That was REALLY funny. He just fucking EXPLAINED HIMSELF and he jusr slams the fucking door in his face!!!!!!
Reviewer: Purplestars (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 11: Leg kicks & TexaAAAAAAS
it was really nice of Bella to help Ed with the homework. Glad that they both apologized. Baby steps, baby steps. I like their conversations, and the awkardness. Adrian. Hm. Well, she's there for a reason, drama. Is fine if Ed likes her, but I'm curious to find out how it will play out when he starts having "feelings" for Bella. How will Adrian react to the lack of flirting from his part? That's the question.
Reviewer: Maximista (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 11: Leg kicks & TexaAAAAAAS
TWO WEEKS?!?! The fack, ya sloot! Screw a kick to the leg, if I had them, this...would be the equivalent to a kick in the balls!
Heh, okay, I had to voice it.
Gah, he waved to Jasper! And more than once! All this teasing...I don't think I can take it!
And Adrian? Adrian is a sneaky skank! I like it! TEAM ADRIAN. Kidding. About the latter, not about liking sneaky skanks. Except when they withhold chapters for two weeks. I know, I know, queue business. Right. PS- all that worry for effin nothing, which makes you even more of a hag. Hag, hag, hag! Another stellar chapter, bb. Thank you for redeeming crying Bella. I cannot wait until they get nekkid.
Author's Response: I knowww, I know. But it'll be good for us, the distance--I hope... :( hahaha <3
LMAO. Do I need to write an E/J one shot JUST for you? You are so obsessed with their potential all-consuming luff that I think I just might to placate you! EEP!!! I JUST HAD THE BEST EFFING IDEA EVARRRR! Pre-Spring Break goodbye partayyyy at the dorm; I musn't say any more! Oh yeah, bb.
Reviewer: Bluenoserbaby (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 11: Leg kicks & TexaAAAAAAS
Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: Bluenoserbaby (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 11: Leg kicks & TexaAAAAAAS
Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: yanxxx (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 11: Leg kicks & TexaAAAAAAS
Glad that B and E get along. I'm kinda relieved that B kicked his leg, she's spunky! I liked that. I don't really want B to turn into a lovesick fool. But maybe a lovesick fool that kicks ass would be cool. LOL.
Still don't like Adrian. haha. well, can't please everybody.
Reviewer: Camba (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 11: Leg kicks & TexaAAAAAAS
I really enjoyed reading the story, i hope you will continue...
Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 11: Leg kicks & TexaAAAAAAS
I'm glad you got so many wonderful reviews on your last chapter, it was definitely deserved. You have this amazing way of writing Edward, I love the personality you created for him and this chapter showcased that. I didn't expect Edward to be toying with Bella when he slammed the door in her face, that took me by surprise. I like Bella and Adrian both... this can't be good. I'm eager to see how this triangle (assuming there is one) will play out.
I'll be reading your new story, by the way! <3
Reviewer: Belledward (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 11: Leg kicks & TexaAAAAAAS
mmm I don't like the bitch of a teacher. But I AMMMM curious to see how you're gonna play it out. Is she a whore that does that to other students besides Edward? Is she gonna sex it up with Edward and then throw him away? What? I just want their story to be done and over with, no matter how good or bad or ugly it is. I want it to move along!
Edward's whole I-made-Bella-cry thing was so great. Not that he made her cry, but that little "joke" that ran through his head. Crazy man. Totally cute. I'm glad they're civil now and working on a friendship together.
OOooh I can't wait to see how their spring breaks tie in with each otherrr!!! Hopefully no sexing with Jake (*GAG*) and no Edward sexing with others (*CRINGE*). Get them together soon and leave us little bread crumbles even if we're still far from home! Please update soon. LOOOOVE this story.
Reviewer: Creative_Thinker (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:03 AM · On: Chapter 11: Leg kicks & TexaAAAAAAS
At least they aren't arguing anymore. Well, not in this chapter.
So, it sounds like you've got a trick or two up your sleeve, and I don't think it might have been what I predicted earlier in previous chapters.
Gotta admit, you're hooking me in with that thin line on the rod. Looking forward to your next Chapter.
By the way, is he going to do the teacher?? That wouldn't be bad and I'm a bit curious about it.
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 11: Leg kicks & TexaAAAAAAS
no, he cant date the fucken teacher!! noo
Reviewer: Turtle Love (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 11: Leg kicks & TexaAAAAAAS
I just got caught up on this story and it's AWESOME! Bella and Edward's sexual tension is absolutely CRAZY! I have a feeling there may be a few roadblocks though...Adrian, Tanya, Jake...YIKES!
I can't wait to read more of this story, it's GRRRREAT!!!
Reviewer: valieelovesspinkiee (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 11: Leg kicks & TexaAAAAAAS
Yay! LOVE this story!! =P Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: Doomed Youth (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 11: Leg kicks & TexaAAAAAAS
AHH
lovelovelovelovelovelovelove.
and.. NOO!
i check this story every day to make sure you haven't updated without me knowing.
i'm going to die waiting for a chapter of this story for 2 weeks.
grrr.
i eat you.
I WANT MORE!
Reviewer: absmw1618 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 11: Leg kicks & TexaAAAAAAS
i love this story, great job :)
Reviewer: babbling_brooke (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 11: Leg kicks & TexaAAAAAAS
Bella deserved the door slam anyway but still I dont want Edward to be a dick like Bella was being a bitch so I am happy they are on "friends" terms now, Bella was exceptable in this chapter, she could have gone all exorsist after his slamming the door in her face joke, but instead she cried and Edward felt bad.... Edward telling her about acting gay in front of Jessica was comedy...
Edward and his teacher Adrian is getting a little creeptacular, I mean if she has been approached by the Dean you would think she would take the mature road and treat her student like her student, I cant blame Edward for pursuing her but I still wish he was using better judgement in regards to starting a teacher/student fling...
WTH was up with Alice? was she trying to catch a glimpse of Bella or something LOL!
Reviewer: veggiegirl0601 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 11: Leg kicks & TexaAAAAAAS
Gosh I'm so glad it wasn't left at him slamming the door in her face! Yay! Now he just needs to stop flirting with Adrian but I'm not going to worry too much over that. Spring break Bella and Edward are going to have to hang out. I am worried about Jacob. God knows I love him but I hate it when he gets in the way of Bella and Edward's relationship or potential relationship. Alice seemed to be up to something. I was so excited to see this updated! I can't wait to read your other story, I'm sure I'll love it! xoxo
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