Loved this chapter so much because it had lots of Edward and Bella time.  That makes me happy!!! :)

I really do like the way their friendship is continuing to grow.  They both have such great personalities and senses of humor.  I love their convos and banter.  Also like the twinge of jealousy going on. 

Looking forward to Jacob's visit and spring break!

(oh and the whold Adrian is still grossing me out!!!!! ICK!)

YAYYYYYYYYYY. I LURVE IT!

 

Really, I like Bella and Edward's sort-of-friendship that they have going on, and the underlying sexual tension is very fun, and (of course) their denial of the tension and attraction.

 

Looking forward to part two!

I loved this chapter.  Although Bella wasn't very nice with her faking earlier.  I would be so pissed if I was Edward!

That was a fun read!  I like their rapport.  I am looking forward to reading the next half of your marathon chapter!

It's so fun that they are actually getting along now :)

 

please tell me Jake is not going to ruin this?!?!?!

 

can't wait to read more

Believe it or not, I have been a part of this for a very long time, and have never commented before. You are a great, and I mean great writer. I love your story and wish for you to give me quicker updates.. heck I wish you would update everyday, lol. You always make Sundays great.

 

Author's Response:

Thanks for being a reader, and double thank you for taking the time to review! :)  LOL  If I updated every day you all would get like...a one page chapter.  I'm not quite quick-witted enough to punch out a chapter so quickly.  I barely finish ONE within a week haha <3

Tiffany -

Please please post the second half, already.  I so cannot wait to see Jake!  Is Eddie going to be jealous?  Btw, I almost peed my pants when I read the part about her almost touching herself to the dad-pic... that shit's golden!!

Awesome first half... :D

- Loran

 

Author's Response:

Hahah!  She's toats gonna tease him about his hot dad for the rest of the story, too!  I'm going through the second half right now, though I'm not sure when I'll post it.  Depends on how many reviews I get... :D <3

Oh the gnome. It will forever not know what it could have potentially had that night.

I think I just about died when I saw the pic you used for Edward's comments...and The Offspring reference..ahh I'm still laughing. I can hear the song in my head. I...can't stop laughing. omg

And can we just take a moment and appreciate just how agreeable the point made on Daddy Carlisle being self-touchable is...srsly.

K, and this? “I doubt he's the only one, Bella.” My eyes flashed up to his face, and he looked just as shocked as I felt that he'd said that. This, I love.

<3

hahaha i loved it :)  i love the myspace conversation.  absolutely delightful.  although, i'm not sure how i feel about the introduction of tanya--she's really the homewrecker.  psha.

Bella's back to being bitch huh? Edward's being nice and caring and she's being a bitch. I don't know why I want them together. He's too good for her. I'm beginning to think in this case she belongs with the dog.

I do believe this may be your best chapter to date.  I really felt like the writing was exceptionally strong in this one, for various reasons.  First of all, the relationship between Edward and Bella really evolved exponentially.  They are actually becoming friends, although I do feel somehow that I missed out on some of the progress they have made.  Maybe I need to go back and re-read the previous chapter.  Him caring enough to bring her dinner and worry about her getting home safely is very endearing.  Although he does send some mixed signals when he says things about kissing her and then telling her he would never actually do it.  I think he is confused himself, at the easiness they have found with each other. 

You handed out some surprises within this chapter.  I thought for sure he wouldn't discover that Bella was spring-breaking in Forks, too, until they were actually in Forks.  I like the way you have written that whole scenario better, eventhough I can't figure out what's going to happen in Forks now that the element of surprise has been removed. 

I have a feeling that Jake's visit is going to be very interesting.  For some reason, I kind of get an inkling that maybe he likes Bella a little more than just as friends, but she's oblivious.  I may be way off base, but it's just a hunch.  Perhaps jealous Edward will rear his head.  I loves me some jealous Edward.  Oh, but I forgot that Edward has a visitor coming too, right?  Maybe we will see jealous Bella as well.  Spring break and the weeks leading up to it will be very interesting.  I can't wait to read all about it.  Keep up the great work.  Take care.

sweet jeebus in a juicebox...  that pic of RP 'pretty fly' is hys-fucking-terical. 

it made me lol so hard i peed a little.

love awkward pseudo flirting EdWizzle.

Is Jake gonna make a move on Bella while he's visiting?  Maybe if he does, Edward will get jealous and will realize how much he wants her!  I just don't want Bella to get confused feelings about Jake...they're JUST friends (I hope)!

When are Alice and Bella going to meet?

I can't wait to read more!