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Reviewer: Teddy (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 2
No Edward ;(
He'd better be jealous as hell the next chapter hahaha
Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 2
Not a Jake fan. Call me when he's gone.
Reviewer: cupcake4711 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 2
Hehe Bella and Jake are so cute together, it almost makes me forget about Edward... almost..... also you get bonus points for liking Japanese soap operas
Reviewer: CaitlinWWA (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 2
that was great I love jacob in this story! hes so sweet! lol
Reviewer: Wishingforlove (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 2
okay, normally I'm not a big Jake fan, but really - he's just being too cute and you've managed not to tip him over that very delicate border of irritating. Bravo! I might *possibly* still like this fic even if she chose him over Edward, and that's a BIG step for me ;D
Reviewer: beanbean (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 2
well, I can't say that I'm a fan of Bella being Jake's little slave girl, or maid, bidding girl maybe.... or of the implacations made by Angela....
if you are planning a jake hook-up I think that may be the last chapter I read... cause I just can't handel it.... if he makes Edward a lil jealous thats fine... but Bella's truly off-limits.... makes my skin crawl just thinking of it...
Author's Response: It'll all be explained in the next post. I have to say that's a little ridiculous, though, that you'd stop reading just because of a J/B hookup that won't even happen. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: valieelovesspinkiee (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 2
Great update! Can't wait for more!! =)
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 2
awww...they're so cute. I think it's going to get interesting again - my prediction is an altercation of sorts between E and J... Just a hunch. post soon so I can see if I'm right!
Reviewer: Burrberry Bugsy (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 2
What the hell, I tried to review on FF.net, but they said I already reviewed the chapter. So thank goodness for you posting here as well! I honestly LOVED the chapter. Even though I'm Team Edward, I love Jacob as a person. So I'm glad that you've made him lovable in this story as well. I'm excited that you're posting something again on Sunday! Thanks for the update, can't wait for another!
Reviewer: lonewolfskid (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 2
I adore the fact that Bella has the hots for Jacobs bod here. Seriously, it would suck out loud for dwardo to be into someone else while Bellas all lonesone. Plus, how excellent will it be for him to see her with another guy. It allows for some competition and jealousy. good stuff. Besides, a hottie mchot hot jake does me in every time.
Reviewer: CandaceC (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 2
Hey! I haven't had the chance to update until now but am loving the pace and everything about this story. For Part 1, I love how close Edward and Bella are becoming. I feel great relationships evolve from being good friends first so this progression is nice to see. I love all of the interactions you have between these two characters!
Part 2 was nice. I liked the introduction of Jake. Though i am not a huge fan of him in the books, I find I can tolerate and even like him in fanfiction when he is being just a friend to Bella. I hope that they continue to be best friends and he doesn't pursue anything more. Also, it wouldn't hurt to have him make Edward jealous. That is a chapter i would like to see LOL.
Keep up the great work and I look forward to the update on Sunday or whenever you have it up again.
Reviewer: justaskalice (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 2
hmmmm... I don't hate it. But I'm highly suspicious of this Jake character! Haha. I love the grocery shopping thing, what a horrible thing to do to an old man. Totally a Rose move :)
Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 2
You said that we weren't going to like this chapter? I like it, as long as it's only a friendly relationship between the dog and Bella! Lol, I hope it doesn't get disgusting with those two, and by disgusting I mean they actually get it on. Haha Update soon!
Reviewer: iliveforthis (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 2
aww :]
they're so comfortable around each other:D
Reviewer: Britt01 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 2
Awww, they're so cute together. I like me a good Jake. I'm feelin that Edward isn't going to be liking him so much.
Reviewer: bronzeandgold (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 2
Thank you so much for the grocery store trip! It cracked me up and reminded me of my college days at Florida State. The midnight trips to the 24 hour Albertson's were always hysterically fun. Imagine 6 people crammed in a small car, drunk after clubbing and wandering through a store trying to remember what we needed!
Reviewer: Wishingforlove (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 1
hmmmm, a little flirty banter... I can already tell it's gonna be HOT when these two get together eventually!
Reviewer: veggiegirl0601 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 1
Awesome chapter! I love Edward and Bella's progressing relationship. I'm excited for the next chapter! Ok, time to look at your other story now. xoxo
Reviewer: riotrolla9 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 1
GAAAHH!!! UPDATE!!! THIS STORY IS BEAST!!
Reviewer: msrsEdwardbrooks (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 1
ooohhh I like edward in this ch he is funny and another thing I thought this ch was the shieezz lol
xoxo-msrsEdwardbrooks
Reviewer: lionslamb1901 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 1
Awww Edward's so cute. Ish. Haha (: "full name usage". Made me LOL.
Reviewer: JackleenHadley (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 1
i love the easy banter between Edward and Bella!
Reviewer: lynnarro (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 1
I really really like this chapter...it went by way too fast though lol....good job my girl<3
Reviewer: themoose-within (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 1
HI. so I just found this story, and wasted my time reading it all instead of reviewing my bio notes. Vascular tissues just aren't as cool as a nice Eddie/Bellie drama.
The myspace box thing there is pretty amusing though, I like. Never seen anything like it before, although - psh - how behind the times are they that they use MYSPACE? Facebook all the way. Ahah, sorry. Couldn't resist.
I really like your character addition of Adrian. Mixin things up a little. I spent so many chapters trying to figure out who she reminded me of, and I finally thought of it. That "new teacher" chick from Gossip Girl? Yeah? You watch it? I mean, she wouldn't really be new anymore since I haven't watched in forever and don't really plan to, but she just really made me think of her.
Author's Response: Haha oh no! Hopefully it was a good waste of time. :) Thanks for reviewing and I hope you enjoy the rest of the chapters!
Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 1
I just found this story and it's great! I love all their myspace names!! I'm from SF, so I smile everytime I see a reference. I live in LA now, so I definitely miss home. There is no such thing as a Safeway in LA..unbelievable. Offtopic sorry. But, I love your writing! I love the humor and I'm glad to see that Bella and Edward are only more friendly terms. Update soon!
Author's Response: Tell me about it! I think Safeway is only in Nor-Cal and above, 'cos we don't have Safeway here in the valley, either. Sigh. I'm glad you're hopping on the train, though, and enjoying the ride. :)
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