YES to using public transportation and all things city! Guh.

I feel for Tanya. I really do. Surrounded by three gorgeous men and she can't touch one of them. So sad.

I fear for the half-breed e-bebes. Because while they won't be mutant half-breed fail bebes, I have a feeling they're going to be aloof, stand-offish bitches that are completely unapproachable and thus gaining similar reactions as a mutant half-breed would. But at least they'll be pretty. OR WORSE! The combined stand-offnish (stand-offedness?) of their e-parents will make them...NEEDY. ew.

Do I even need to say whose POV I'd like to see next? And the thoughts in it that would centre around a certain roommate and rainbow coloured goldfish crackers? Yeah, didn't think so. But he's not even in on the plan so it won't even be useful. Sigh. Emmett then - he's lol worthy.

Ugh. Half of this isn't even about your story. I mean god forbid I actually review it right? Here - Rosalie owns my soul and Birkenstocks, I'm with Alice, lez or not, it's just...no.

<3

Author's Response:

lmfao. I...don't even have a coherent thought right now, I'm laughing so hard.  clingy AND unapproachable?!  BLASPHEMY!  We cannot allow this to happen.

Your special POV will come in the form of Civil War smut dominance, don't you worry.

You are utterly ridiculous and I love you for it!

Jake only really irritates me when he gets pushy and obstructive. Your Jake is fine, really. Funny, smart-ass, but willing to take Bella at her word when she says no. More like Jake in Twilight and BD. Jake in New Moon (post were-conversion) and in Eclipse annoy me to no end.

 

Your outtake is awesome, and I'm really enjoying the story you've got going so far. It's a comedy of misunderstandings, and wonderfully funny. Thanks for your hard work! I look forward to your next post.

I loved APOV! Coffee breath included. Credit card from the sky sounds SO Alice. And I love how she's very confident in B and E's future together...

I knew she was looking for B!!!  Edward's future wife. lol.

I love Rosalie, looking out for B and E's developing relationship and making sure nothing gets in the way. And how she made Edward jealous. Go girl!

I'm thinking I'd love EmPOV. Since Emmett is way fun.

 

Author's Response:

I'm thinking I agree on Emmett's POV.  I just have to find a good spot to plug it in. lol that's gonna be such a fun one to write.

Please, don't stop writing because of some Jake hate. This story is really good. Thanks for the outtake. Alice is so awesome. Hm, so Tanya's in. I'm kind of anxious about that. I hope she doesn't do anything er, funny with Edward while she's there. She didn't seem like a bad girl, though. I think she gets that Ed is OFF LIMITS TO HER. LOL. About the next POV, I was thinking Jasper, I don't know what he thinks about this B/E thing, but reading the reviews, I think Tanya's will be the most appropriate.

PS: You've got a lot of people who loves this fic, don't quit it, please.

Don't worry! I LOVE the existence of Jake! Him and Bella seem like great friends and they seem to love eachother, but Bella atleast only in a friendly way. Thanks for the Alice POV, it was interesting seeing what is going on in her head! :D

Are we going to Forks soon?!!

Sweeeeet.

I really do think that you have Jacob pegged! I enjoyed him ! screw the haters! I was literally on edge at the end going yesss alone time..but then wait no..more Edward! lol

 

Hmmm...Not too sure about the POV.  Maybe Jake's?  I continue to love this story!  Readers are greedy and want more please...

I HAVE AN IDEA OF WHAT YOU NEXT CHAPTER TITLE SHOULD BE HOPE U LIKE 

The accidental kiss

 

by the way this is the best story i have read on this website

I have been MIA from the computer for awhile because of finals.. so I'm glad to finally be back and seeing an update from you! I enjoyed this chapter, I'm starting to see some feelings that aren't hate and kill kill kill develop between Edward and Bella, which makes me ten kinds of giddy. You did a fantastic job with this chapter. I'll be sure to checkour your new sory, as well. I hope you're doing well yourself, by the way.

Author's Response:

I've noticed!  I was like, "wtf, where's Niki?" haha how'd finals go.  I'm sure you did great! :)

(So far) I actually really love the way you've written Jacob into this story!

You can really feel the strong bond of friendship and love between him and Bella; and their playfulness towards each other makes me laugh and say "awwwe!" instead of me wanting to claw my eyeballs out. :)

Also, Rose's POV (outtake) rocked! She's so kickass; especially the way you've written her slightly OOC. And all of the interactions between E, EM, & J are freakin' HILARIOUS!

But.. the way Edward charms his way with the ladies is just wrong, lol. He's just too yummy for his own good. ;p

Keep up the great work! I can't wait to read more! :)

 

Yay! I can review now..

I love the chapter. I adore B and J's closeness, especially how open and comfortable they are with each other. They have a connection very reminiscent of S.Meyer's own B and J.

It was a light, happy and funny chapter. :D

Well done Tiff!