aww i love the end of the chapter

update sooon!

Just read the whole thing and am in love. I still keep laughing about the donky. He he.

Love you characterizations and that you have long posts. I would much rather have long meaty posts like yours and wait, than short posts that have no flow.

BTW, people who can not accept that characters in an AU and new should either shut up about their bias or stop reading AU. You make Jake how ever you want him, girl. If this wasn't a BE story, you would have said. Sheesh. People. Don't let them fuck with your muse.

Liz

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I always love seeing reviews from new readers. :)

I've been a pretty loyal poster since the story got validated!  I post every Sunday, and two times I've even posted on Wednesdays as well.  This week may be the first that I have to delay the post because I just have not had the drive or creativeness to write the damn chapter, so I'm sort of sorry that you picked this in-between-posting time to read! LOL

Thank you!  I'm glad you understand as much.  I'm like, "I said it's a canon pairing story, just chill out!"  Even if I did have Bella and Jake hook up, it shouldn't matter if E & B get together in the end!  That's how I see it, at least.

This was adorable! Thanks so much for writing, and I cannot wait to get the next chapter.

As far as outtake POVs go... I think Jasper's could be really interesting. An Emmett outtake would be interesting too. If you wanted to switch back to a team Bella member, though, Angela would be perfect.

thanks again, I'm really loving it!

guess who, boo! lol aarron has yet to catch you on your period.

Author's Response:

I hardly see how that's relevant to any of the fifteen chapters you read, dumbshit.  Shun!

ok 2 answer u'r ? i think it should b in edward's pov and what i think should happen is while jacob & tanya r in town every1 goes 2 dinner and E&B get jelous because they r hear with different people and they start acting weird. when bella calls edward out on it they both learn something new.

just think about this but u dont have 2 use this 1 but just think about it. oh and i like this ch

xoxo-msrsEdwardbrooks

Oooh!  I love meddling Alice :)  And don't take too long to update with the next chapter (just because some people are retarded!) - I LOVE this story and it's really starting to get interesting now.  Maybe Tanya will hook up with Jacob?  I kind of like that there's no real 'bad' characters in this story...it's just Edward and Bella that are keeping each other away at this point.  It makes it much harder to predict where the story is going and how they'll end up together.  I love the mystery and twists!

Next POV, maybe Emmett or Jasper?  Or even Jacob?  Someone who's perspective on the 'couple' we haven't seen yet would be great...

Author's Response:

Sigh.  I'm trying to write, but it's just not coming to me.  I don't know what the deal is.  Seriously, I've only written a little over a page with it.  I think I'm focusing too much on how I'm going to get ripped apart by readers when I post it. :(  Thank you for the kind words, though. :)

oh man i cant wait until edward gets REALLY jealous..little hints here and there lol....i CANNOT wait for another update!!! and maybe it should be emmett's POV for the next outtake???

AH!  No Bella and Edward interaction for the last couple of chapters is frustrating, but all part of your plan, I'm sure.

The Tanya thing is interesting, I wonder if Edward still has feelings for her. 

I love Rose, she's the best!

Can't wait to read more!

This story is keeping me going through a bit of a turbulent time in my life. Please don't be disheartened by people who get a bit too involved in the semantics of Edward/Jacob. I really think that you're writing a story that feels like it could happen, and you're letting it happen in real time, and in real terms. I'm really enjoying it, please continue!

Author's Response:

Wow, that's a pretty heavy compliment.  I'm honored.  I'm really trying to pound out this chapter but it's not coming.  I don't know what's going on.  At the very least, even if I can't get it out by this week, it'll be posted next week, and if that's the case I'll try to make it extra long.  Thanks so much. :)

aww cute...       Wat outtakes???

aweee. jalice time is so cute. and oooooh, my wish was fullfilled... eddie is jealous, lalalalala... now if onlyyou can update soon and have a jealous bella too, ill be having the time of my life! ILOVEIT

I love Rosalie's antics!  haha.  I forgot to mention before, Amoeba Music is awesome, but I can never find anything inside either!  And you haven't seen friday night traffic trying to get out of SF on the Bay Bridge.  I saw five red lights pass by sitting at an intersection without a single car moving.  Public transportation >> Traffic and no parking.  LoL.

So..what's an outtake?  Is it just another perspective for us cool readers?  Or is it something you wrote, but decided not to include in your story?

Hope to read more soon!

Author's Response:

LOL trust me, I have seen it!  While I lived there, I only drove when my mom drove up to visit, because she hated driving in the city.  One time was all it took on a weekend night on the bridge to vow NEVER to do that again.  We go in the mornings now haha.

Well, in my case, it's just another perspective.  I generally write them when one of the characters does something questionable, just to sort of explain their motives.  It's relevant, but not detrimental to the plot; just a little fun, character development exercise for me. :)