awesome chapter!!! I love how long it is! And I am also very happy as to where Bella and Edward are going!

You are a very good writter, and if you aren't planning on being one, you should think about it! Very nice!

loved it loved it loved it...I think this is one of my favorite chapters so far...I really thought shit was going to hit the fan when Alice AND Rosalie got up from the table to go talk to Tanya...I dont like her lol...great job!!!!!

Love it!  Love it!  Love it!  All the 'unintentional flirting' was great!  Tanya?   Jury's still out. ;)   Fantastic chapter.

um i absolutely adored it.  i know all about the perils of rl, but it kills me that i'm going to have to wait so long for the next chapter!  i'm loving it :)

Thanks a lot! Great chapter! That Adrian-character is a good one, I really hate her although in reality she's done nothing all that bad... Good job! It's nice how gradually E&B are getting there, torturingly slowly, actually, ha!

Dear Wifey,

How is that you're so awesome? The all around epic in this motha of a chapter makes me want to recite Enrique Iglesias lyrics to you from beneath a balcony, Romeo & Juliet style. And while I don't have the accent, I can be quite good at imitating accents and because this will be for you, I will certainly make it sound authentic enough, whispered breathlessness included, since you don't deserve anything less than that. OR I could always buy you presents. The most extravagant and lavish dippers you've ever seen.

And those little subtle touches between E/J - pats on the back, touching the forearm, constantly defending his man, finishing each other's sentences... Meant. To. Be. (oh, I noticed). 

It's coming along wonderfully. The pace is working, you're not jumping into it too quickly but it's not slow either because you're still giving us bits of things to placate us until the inevitable togetherness of the two of them, which makes it all the more squeal worthy because...well, shit. They get so caught up in flirting with each other that they fail to notice anyone else around them all the while not realizing that it's happening or more importantly why it's happening. And that? That is why I must go and practice my Enrique-esque voice.

PS- YOU STILL OWE ME A DRUNKEN MESSAGE

Author's Response:

I'm swooning at the prospect of whispered breathlessness and faux-authentic accents.  The only thing that will make it even more complete is the feather boas.  Dreamy sigh.

Yes!  You noticed.  I put them all there just for you, 'cos I love you like that.

You will get your drunken message soon!  I promise! <333

I really enjoyed this chap! I'm happy that not only are they getting along but they're kinda flirting. Edward is oblivious to their connection, but I'm happy he's being extra attentive to Bella (and Jacob. hehe).

I was pissed at Tanya at first, but I reread and she's actually pretty cool (i manage to displace my grudges on this Tanya yesterday but i realized i hated another Tanya somewhere else.. lol). You manage to make another unliked character and make her likable. *thumbs up*

and oh yes, Emmett always stands out for me, he's effin'hilarious! :))

EPOV rules, so do you Tiff! awesome work!

 

I don't usually review but I wanted you to know how much I am enjoying your story.  It is more developed than most and I am loving the building tension between Edward and Bella.  I am not usually a big fan of Jacob but I think you have done an excellent job with him.  I don't see him as a threat to Bella and Edward, he is actually helping the cause I think!  I am a little annoyed at Adrian but I am sure that I am supposed to be.  I am hoping his little date with her is another wake up call to his feelings for Bella. You have also created believable side characters who are developed enough to be interesting but they don't detract from the story.  The gay factor with the guys is hilarious!  I don't think I have ever laughed out loud before with other fan fics!  Please keep updating this.  I can't wait to see how this plays out. 

Haha, I love Rosalie and Bella's relationship! They're awesome! i like how Bella already hates him and he hasn't even done anything! That and it wasn't his fault he didn't show up! Great job!

i really like edward in this story he's funny but i dont like his teacher adrean or what ever her name is

this is my favorite story cant wait 2 reed the next ch

xoxo-msrsEdwardbrooks

OK... I loved this chapter, It was fun having them all together like that, Tanya could have been absent and it wouldn't have broke my heart...But it evened it all out... Edward and Bella finally adding something more was long overdue, Bella went from being the ultimate bitch to a witty, funny, flirtation girl... The phone call from Adriene was FAIL, Adriene is FAIL... Bella and Edward on the dock was perfect, they just naturally went with it and look what came of it...Him listing his imperfections was really hot actually...

The only problem with this chapter (aside from Adriene) is that I want some fried shrimp like nobody's business now...

I also really enjoy Bella and Jacob, they are a tad to touchy feely, I mean what if one of them was in a relationship, would they still feel that it was appropriate to act that affectionate towards eachother. But I was so happy Jacob didn't go all jealous at the flirting between E&B...

And Alice becoming more a part of the story makes me happy...

 

I love the banter.  It makes me laugh.  And I kind of like that you didn't make Tanya a bitch.  She's so abused in the fan fic realm.

Yay!  I had no idea I missed the last three chapters so I had to catch up!  Jacob and Tanya make me nervous!  I already love both of them though!  Jacob is very hot.  In my head.  Haha!  Anyways, hopefully there will be more Bella-Edward moments in the near future.  I think Adrian and Bella need to have a throw down.  Bella would so kick ass.  Thanks for the awesomeness!  xoxo