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Reviewer: nmommy02 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
Oh that was nice, I knew you would come out with something like this. Okay I have a confession....I think about this story all the time!!! Just yesturday in the shower...no funny stuff....my mind was wandering as I was shampooing my hair and I was thinking over the last effects of the chapter and Edward holding Bella's hand. And then their cloths you described, I think they probably resemble your style? I was just comparing them to the other stories that I read.
You don't need to responde back to my reviews...I don't even know where I would find the response.
Keep up the good work!!! And oh I would love it if it another chapter came out every 3 days!!! Oh that would make me so happy!!! For get school right???
Reviewer: SpydrMnky26 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 1
aww now that chapter made me happy!
Reviewer: absmw1618 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 01:22 PM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
great outtake, i loved it and i cant wait for the next chapter :)
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 1
love the myspace picture of Edward....lol
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 12:32 PM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
So good! I was hoping that you would write the bathroom outtake. YEAH!!
I actually felt bad for Tanya. That is huge because I am so not a fan of Tanya typically. I still think that she could hook up with Jacob though. They deserve some loving too. ;)
Alice and Rose were the best! From Alice planning on kicking her to Rose's plan to flush her head in the toilet -- too funny! LOL
Emmett -- ah, Emmett. All this going on and he still thinks about himself and getting some. And Jasper's plan to ask nothing -- funny!
SO Jasper made the phone call!!! I actually gasped! I hope that they find out about Edward's "study date" with the 'lab rat' (i love that name) before he goes.
Great outtake and can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: SpydrMnky26 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 10: Busty & the Burro
These two are pissin me off!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
great story though =)
Reviewer: hmogburn (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
Why are the girl's up Tanya's ass about getting too close to Edward... but NO ONE is paying attention to the fact that Jacob obviously wants Bella?
So... its ok for Jacob to make Edward jealous (and hurt him by having to watch J and B holding hands and cuddling and having secret conversations and sleeping in the same bed together), but its not ok for Tanya to make Bella jealous (and hurt her by having to watch T and E just sit by each other too close)? Jacob and Bella are flirting a lot more than Edward and Tanya are.
Its ok for Bella to possibly get some play with Jacob this week, but its not ok for Edward to get some play with Tanya?
Why are Edward and Tanya put on a leash while Bella and Jacob get to do whatever they want, with no restrictions. It seems like Edward and Tanya are really getting the short end of the stick.
Reviewer: lexiecullen17 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
eh...i feel a little bad for tanya, but...not really. love it, though - - can't wait for the next chapter :)
Reviewer: cullenbabygirl (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 11:57 AM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
I kind of feel bad for Tanya... but I'm still kind of pissed at her too! Great outtake; it really helps me understand what happened there and Tanya's motivation. Now... to get rid of teacher....
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 8: Sex Changes & Eiffel 65
love it...you have great talents....lol
Reviewer: iyaaan (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 10: Busty & the Burro
oh no he didn't! hahahaha.
Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 11:17 AM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
Graet insight! Switching pov's gets a litte hectic, but I seriously do not think you could have done it any other way. Thanks for the "tide us over" out take.
Reviewer: cherry (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:49 AM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
love love love thiiiiisss, love the ndifferent pov. love u much, bb!
Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 2: Bitches & Bear Hugs
Can't wait to see how their relationship develops...
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:29 AM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
Cute outake. That was fun.
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 6: Vagina's & 2Pac
lol...loving it
Reviewer: graceisgone (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 1: Tutors & 31's.
poor tanya! i know exactly how that feels. can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: beraroma (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:04 AM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
Ok, nice filler of details, but I feel like I kind of moved backward instead of forward. Can't wait to see the result of B&E's "moment." Post soon!! Thanks!!!!
Reviewer: SpydrMnky26 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 4: Attempted Murder & DDR
Ugh I can't stand Bella. I really hope she stops being a B**** soon.
I do love the story though!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: ebatcl (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 09:43 AM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
*know
Reviewer: ebatcl (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
I am going to be absolutely honest and say that I really don't want to like this story ( yeah...because I simpy dislike Adrian and the way Edward acts towards her ), but I gotta hand it over to you - you most definitelty now how to capture your readers. And no, I don't come back for Edward ( I'll once he realizes Bella's the one for him ), but for Rosalie. Your Rosalie is awesome!
Reviewer: Britt01 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 09:19 AM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
Ahhh, very glad you posted these moments - they actually clear up a lot of things from the last chapter that I was wondering about. Now I'm actually feeling kinda bad for Tanya!
Reviewer: gordonfan74 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 09:08 AM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
I liked this out-take. The alternating points of view, in short clips, were refreshing and I enjoyed them. Nice little tid bit, finding out that Jasper is the one who ratted out the TA. Alice and Rosalie are quite smooth. I give them mad props for their plotting skills.
I don't know how it happened, and I feel like a complete failure. I have faithfully followed this story, waiting with baited breath for you to post. Somehow I missed the last chapter, up until now. I have berated myself for being so negligent, but after I read the chapter I couldn't help but still feel giddy, in spite of my slip up. The chapter was freaking awesome. I loved everything about it. I have been anxiously awaiting the introductions of Jacob and Taunya to everyone and you certainly delivered. The flirty banter between Edward and Bella was priceless. Exquisitely written, really. I was a little miffed about the Adrian interruption, I will admit, but my ire quickly passed when Bella joined Edward outside the aquarium. Golden. Their interaction was spot on, and the fact that they shared a "moment" was even better. I sitll feel that the are both somewhat oblivious, although I think Edward may now have an inkling. He still doesn't know what to do with the thought though.
I can't wait to read the next chapter. You have me so stoked for the chapter after that, even more. I am excited that you are excited. It must be something else. No pressure though. I am certain no matter what you write it will be great and I will love it. Take care.
Author's Response: Don't feel like a failure! I actually had a few people tell me that they somehow missed the last update. Obviously Twilighted was fuckin' up haha. Nah, it got validated at the same time a whole SLEW of stories did, so it wasn't on the first page of the updated stories for very long. :)
I'm glad you like it! Hopefully the next chapter delivers just as well. I'm so antsy for chapter 15, though. I hope I don't end up BSing chapter 14 just so I can get to the next chapter quicker hahaha <33
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 3: Igor & a party at the DC
wow...too funny...but I'm still interested...
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 08:58 AM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
Loved it! That was great! So they had Jasper call about adrian? Is this how your going to get rid of her? I just love Alice and Rose. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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