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Reviewer: veggiegirl0601 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 09:32 PM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
Haha LOVED this! Thanks so much! xoxo
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 08:07 PM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
LOL, I second Jaspers last thought! Ignorance is bliss!
Reviewer: delilah818 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 07:55 PM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
Freakin Tanya " I'm still in love with him". I mean I guess I understand it is hard to get over but she better not mess this plan up because I will be as pissed as Rosalie! hahah Keep up the excellent writing..I love it! :)
Reviewer: devilsgenie (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 07:52 PM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
two words only.... LOVED IT!
...too bad Tanya still didn't get her ass beat tho... that woulda been even better!
Reviewer: klim (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 7: Stink Bombs & Fishnet Thongs
lol. so i guess he's not rich? good chapter. =)
Reviewer: klim (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 6: Vagina's & 2Pac
lol. action soon please?
Reviewer: klim (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 5: Sexy poses & Sexless eons
cute. angsty edward and bella. i like it.
Reviewer: PasQ (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 07:02 PM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
LOL Clearly Jasper is the wisest one here... :P
Loved their interaction and how they solved everything...so glad we got that out of the way!! ;)
Though I missed B/E interaction, I think it played quite nicely actually. So glad you're back!! Can't wait for next chapter!!
Thanx
Author's Response: Hahaha, clearly. :P
I'm glad you liked it! And don't worry, there will be more E/B interaction in the next few chapters. :)
Reviewer: klim (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 4: Attempted Murder & DDR
uh oh. =S
Reviewer: SubtlePen (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
i loved this chapter - the revolving brief POVs was perfect for this scene!
Author's Response: Thanks! I was hoping everybody would like it, even though it lacked the funnies most of the others did haha :)
Reviewer: klim (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 3: Igor & a party at the DC
oh man, wait til tutoring starts edward. lol. funny!
Reviewer: klim (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 2: Bitches & Bear Hugs
great start!
Reviewer: iyaaan (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 06:02 PM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
update soon please!:)
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 05:00 PM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
I flipping LOVE this story! And I was SO wondering what was going on in the bathroom...this wasn't near as exciting as I'd hoped it had been though :) I can't WAIT for e and b to get a little closer to hooking up though...I like that it's moving slow - I'm just impatient!
Author's Response: Can't please everybody, I suppose. It was something, at least.
Reviewer: daniellemariecullen (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
omg i knew that Tanta was still in love with Edward!!!! ughhh lol he is such a ladies man! lmao
im glad the rose and alice put her in her place though!!! GO ROSE AND ALICE!! lol
cant wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: lovestinksyaya (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
laughs.... that's absolutely amazing
Reviewer: Tookie83 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 03:19 PM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
i LOVED this... even though it was short it was awesome
Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
great chapter for a shorty,but wat about edward,bella and jacobs views at lunch?
Oh and i really really want adrian gone!!!
Author's Response: Um...the lunch was in Edward's point of view. And Jake and Bella weren't really too concerned, so I didn't feel like delving into their minds.
Adrian has a purpose. It'll start to surface soon. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
=] CAUGHT UP!!
I happened to spend all day reading this story!
Reviewer: Doomed Youth (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 01:14 PM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
ahh.
thank you, so so much.
loved it, as always.
...lol.. the ad by google says '5 Edward deals from the low price of $6.93.'
sorry, just thought i'd share.
updaaateeeee sooooooooooooooooon.
Author's Response: HAHAHAH!! I love when that shit happens! They're always the funniest ads.
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
HEHE loved it! Very nice, but I must say I didn't love any of it as much as I loved Rosalie! I was bouncing in my seat and giggling when she was counting lol! Fucking great! Grrrr silly Tanya. Anyway I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
im loving this story....please update soon
cyndi
cyndilu32@yahoo.com
Reviewer: angmclure (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 12:31 PM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
Thank you, I wanted to know what went down in the bathroom. I wishing and praying that you get the next chapter done soon seeing as I can't wait for it and chapter 15. Thanks for the entertaining story.
Reviewer: crf720 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 11:49 AM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
interesting seeing everyon'e POV...i'm interested to see how long it takes edward OR bella to figure it out!
Reviewer: nmommy02 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 11:36 AM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
Oh that was nice, I knew you would come out with something like this. Okay I have a confession....I think about this story all the time!!! Just yesturday in the shower...no funny stuff....my mind was wandering as I was shampooing my hair and I was thinking over the last effects of the chapter and Edward holding Bella's hand. And then their cloths you described, I think they probably resemble your style? I was just comparing them to the other stories that I read.
You don't need to responde back to my reviews...I don't even know where I would find the response.
Keep up the good work!!! And oh I would love it if it another chapter came out every 3 days!!! Oh that would make me so happy!!! For get school right???
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