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Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
OK, I wait for wnat seems like forever for an update, and I get a chapter of mostly the dog! UGH!
Edward is jealous and so is Bella. So let's get going! Aren't we due for a lip lock?
Author's Response: You had to wait for a week...the normal wait time for any other chapter. I posted an outtake last week. Sorry it wasn't good enough for you.
Reviewer: Leah_Clearwater (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
That was great! Hurry and update, I want to know what Edward wants!!
Reviewer: TayMo (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
Ooooh, what's he doing there??? Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: mac (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
It's stupid that, out of the all the goodness in this chapter, I choose to focus on the BART conversation, but it tickled me! I had nearly that exact conversation about Oakland last year when I was visiting SF. Heee!
Reviewer: Bluenoserbaby (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: YouthfulMisconceptions (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
Generic comment I know, but I love this story! PLease update soon!ant to know why Edwards at the door!!! :(
Author's Response: Hearing that people love my story is never generic! I don't appreciate it any less :) Thanks for reading & reviewing
Reviewer: Maplestyle (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
I couldn't stop laughing when they dragged Bella into the bathroom and then Rosalie pretty much ordered her to pee. To funny! I also like the fact that Edward(dispite his protests) is jealous of her and Jake. Strip twister wasn't my cup of tea however that's because I can't stand the thought of Jake and Bella together(any chance I could beg and get a Bella and Edward game though??)
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
This story is sweet torture! I feel like it's progressing agonizingly slow and yet I, hate to admit, I'm finding that I'm enjoying it! Talk about forplay! I liked that Bella is thinking about what a good guy Edward is, but I'm frustrated that she isn't thinking (or atleast admitting) about Edward romantically, yet. I'm glad that she went into how she feels no romantic feelings about Jacob, though. One down ... one to go ... Edward and Adrian. That one has had my stomache in knots. He has been thinking about Adrian for a while now and I'm nervous about them getting together. I'm looking forward to EPOV, because I'm hoping that from Edward's comment on "sharing a moment" with Bella, that he is beginning to feel something more for Bella. I loved how he spent time with her at work -- and that was flippin' hilarious how she "locked" him in the mailroom! Funny shit! They are just too cute together! Maybe something more will happen between them on spring break. They will be going to Bella Italia together, right? WITHOUT JACOB, RIGHT?!! Can you throw me a bone and let me know when the next update will be?
P.S. -- Sorry for not reviewing your outtake... I did really enjoy it because it really helped to fill in some gaps. Especially Jasper! There was a surprise! But I knew Alice was somehow involved. God forbid she doesn't involve herself! She's great and I love how Jasper is just at her mercy. I hope this review makes up for my lack of recent reviewing (*hangs head in shame*).
Kathy M.
Author's Response: LOL don't worry! Jake will not be going to Bella Italia with Edward and Bella. :P I'm planning on the next update being on Sunday. The only time there won't be a post on Sunday's is if for whatever reason, I'm not able to be near a computer to post it, or I'm just having severe difficulty writing a chapter. I don't think that'll be the case this week, though, so Sunday it is!
LOL thanks for the double-chapter review. Do not be shamed! It's all good :)
Reviewer: justaskalice (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
Oh mean! Why is Edward there? Is he going to declare his love?! Haha, yeah probably not. But I am curious. And since it sounds like you've got 15 written... :) hint hint?
Reviewer: hmogburn (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
I still don't understand why Rose threatened to kill Tanya just for flirting with Edward, yet she is encouraging Bella to sleep with Jake. And I still don't get why its ok to use Jake to make Edward jealous, but its not ok to use Tanya to make Edward jealous. Seems like Edward is getting the raw end of the deal. Double standards much?
Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
I always love your updates :) Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: miamilove (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 1: Tutors & 31's.
i love it! great story!
Reviewer: owlpostagain (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 01:18 AM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
lovely lovely lovely i'm loving it and dying for more so write write write!
by the way...and this may be the highest compliment i've ever bestowed upon a fanfiction author...i actually like your jacob. i have never, ever, in any book or story, liked jacob before. fabulous. go you.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm quite fond of my Jake, too :) I appreciate the honor haha
I've been writing away! I'm damn near done with chapter 14; probably only two or three pages left (one little section) and then I'll be putting it through the queue around 2 AM or so, so check back in tomorrow to see if it's validated!
Reviewer: twilove1 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 1: Tutors & 31's.
Enjoying it so far - thanks!
Reviewer: lynnarro (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 05:41 PM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
that was cute...now i feel bad that I was all mad at Tanya...poor thing...I had no idea:-( Rosalie is a meanie...hmph!!!
Reviewer: hpandtwilight (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 08:25 AM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
I just started reading this story yesterday and can't stop!
it's sooooo good! i love it!!
please please please update soon!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 01:05 AM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
I wondered if you were gonna put in what happened in the bathroom. I really like that you put in everybody's point of view! Great job! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: trinisoul (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
This story is fabulous...It has me in stitches. Keep up the excellent writing!
Reviewer: coco1984 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 4: Attempted Murder & DDR
I hate her.... I do hope that she f'in chills out soon.
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 13: Fairy dust & Bubble butts
I loved this chapter! Especially the whole tickling thing! That was priceless. I think it's cute that Edward and Bella spent some time together and their shameless flirting. Too cute!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 01:09 AM · On: Outtake 2: Operation: Stranded
Aww, I love Alice. She's too cute! I absolutely love the scene with her and Jasper. Too cute! For the next outtake, I would love for it to be Emmett's point of view. I love that guy. Then maybe after that, Angela's. Great outtake!
Reviewer: crazy4cullen (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
yayyyy they had a moment :P
and their chemistry really is awesome :D
Reviewer: Maximista (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
I FACKING LOVE ROSALIE!!! ...and you. Why aren't you in my life more?!?!
So Jasper was the...snitch? Gasps all around. But then it makes sense. I mean, YEAH FREAKING RIGHT he didn't really know it was about Edward and wasn't trying to sabotage the Adrian scene. The boy's in denial.
I'm highly amused at the fact that Emmett was severly disappointed that Tanya wasn't beat up. Poor Emmett. No bjs after all.
Author's Response: LOL, I love how "...and you" was in lower case. Not quite as convincing. -_- And you stopped checking your e-mails, you hag! I miss my wifey. Sigh.
I know how hard it must be for you to find this out...but it had to be! He was an unintentional snitch, if it makes it any better. Of course, he could have some alterior motives...subconsciously, of course. The one-shot is still a-comin'!
LOL. I know. It's slightly fucked up but I couldn't help it. Maybe we can just imagine that he did end up getting his bj's after all.
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 2
I don't know how many times I have to say this. I am completely enamored by your story. I love every bit of it! Freaking amazing! Great chapter!
Reviewer: Kalimando (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 1: Tutors & 31's.
I've only started reading, but I love it already!
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