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Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
Damnit girl lol! A cliffy....just what I wanted :) It's okay I love it, and I love you for this amazingly long chappy! I freakin love all of Bella and Edward's little bonding time. That he came down to help her study and keep her company hehe. He is totally into her lol and so now what the hell is he doing at her house lmfao?
As for Jake....I see where their friendship is, and that they really aren't romantically involved, but don't you love how the possibility of another man moving into your girls life (even if she is just your very bestest friend) can set off some alarms for you....make you think. Hmmmm *ponders* not that it's like that....just sayin. I can see how Jake gets all protective lol. And damn I cannot believe Rose ratter her out like that hehe. I think I'd be punchin my friend in the ovaries as well.
I can't wait till spring break! Hell I can't wait for chapter 15! Awesome! lol!
Reviewer: Delphius2004 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
I can't wait to see what happens in Forks. I know your going to make it interesting for us. Thanks for the timely update too!
Reviewer: wandering-home (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
Heyyyy! Cliffy endings are not nice and I consider this ending one. =( Nice chapter though.
Can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: sarasparks (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
As always, the recent chapter was a lot of fun! I am enjoying all the characters, which is saying a lot since there are very few Jakes that I like. Yours happens to be a Jake I enjoy having around as more than a point of conflict.
I'm looking forward to seeing how the time in Forks goes. Thanks again for all the great banter between the characters, and taking the time to share the story with everyone!
Reviewer: LadyMC (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
Okay...you have me REALLY curious about chapter 15! Not only is this the 2nd time you've mentioned being excited abut it but now I'm dying to know what Edward is doing out of breath at B's door! Is it already written? Will we possibly be getting it early? PLEASE! Okay sorry, I'm done with the shameless begging! :)
Loved the chapter as usual! I'm pretty certain Jake is interested in more than a platonic relationship with Bella...but that's one-sided, right? Bella seems to be sure she only likes him as a friend but I hope when things start moving along with Edward Jake doesn't try to get between them! I trust you though so I am going to sit back and enjoy the ride....Update Soon! I'm going to make my nominees for the Eddie and Bellies and I will be sure to nominate you. Your story rocks and it should be on the ballot! See ya next time!
Author's Response: Hahaha sorry to disappoint, but no, the chapter is not written yet. I mean, there's different parts of it written, and I know you all are going to LOVE it, but I'm just excited all around to type out and connect all the ideas I have for it! Eep, I can't wait. :D
Reviewer: Fleuri-anne (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
Woooohooo yay for Edward tutoring and standing in front of the door all unexpected! I am now super excited about chap 15 even though I have now idea what's going to happen! Oh well, knowing this story and your writing style it will undoubtedly be fuckawesome!!! PLEASE post soon!! :D
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 1: Tutors & 31's.
so why is edward out of breath and at bella's door?? you have to update soon and give everyone answers!!
Reviewer: ieatfiction (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
i love this story! the relationship between Bella and Edward has and is developing perfectly. I wonder what is going on with Edward?!
Great chapter and I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: MeghanT91 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
you should have a mid-week post! (: haha
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
Ah man, a cliffie?!! Hope you are going to post next chappie soon. It is always so fun to see this "dance between the two of them. It's really pretty funny.
Continue to be drawn to this story. Only wish the updates were faster ('cause I'm greedy that way).
Reviewer: xtothey (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
I'M SO excited for anything that gets some lovin going on between these 2!!!!! I think Bella's girly parts are about to explode from all of the sexual tension!!!!
I wonder what Eddie is up to, showing up all out of breath???
Reviewer: lisa89 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
Now I'm excited for chapter 15! Great update, love some strip Twister.
Reviewer: devilsgenie (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
What'd i ever do to you to diserve this cliffie?! Shoot!
anyway.... i am addicted to this story and really really really wanna know what happens next. i mean what the hell is Edward doing at her place and why was he outta breath?? grrr... alright. i'll wait if i must.
btw i too nominated you under best comedy... because let's face it, you make me laugh my ass off with this story :)
Reviewer: lisamichelle17 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
What can I say, I loved this chapter. Jake is growing on me. Edward is growing on me more. I love your Bella. She is strong, fiesty and funny :-) I am dying of curiosity with the cliffy you left us with at the end of the chapter. I believe that you mentioned that Edward was supposed to meet Adrian on tuesday. Makes me wonder if something happened at the meeting. I can't wait to hear ;-) Also, I am happy Bella took Jake through the Castro district. I still remember the first time I went there and coming from a small town I was definately thrown for a loop but then I got used to it.
Reviewer: MarathonKeyGirl (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
That's...that's....THAT'S LIKE A MINI-CLIFFY, HOW DARE YOU!
Reviewer: La Jodi (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
Do these two even know they like each other? Seriously, they don't seem to see it yet. Personally I'm about ready gto throw them in a room, lock the door and throw away the key for a week or so and let them figure it out.
As always I love the banter between the characters, it's so fun to read. I like that Bella isn't one of those immediately smitten types and that she is so herself around Edward.
I hope that this is an Edward and Bella story....
Author's Response: They don't see it, yet, but they will. Do not fear! It is an E/B story. I just try to make things as realistic as possible, and realistically, they wouldn't just jump each other's bones and profess undying love for each other after all the shit they'd initially gone through. :)
Reviewer: Teddy (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
Ooooooooooooooh cliffie!
I wonder what Edward wants... Please update soon!
Reviewer: EmmaLynn (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
awww! a cliffie!?? you better update real sooon!!!!!!!
Reviewer: jennmo (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2009 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
can't wait to find out what happens next...hurry up!!! PLEASE
Reviewer: Scorpiosue1102 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
Ooooo, Tuesday was Adrian night. You are soooo good. I am so stoked for the next chapter :)
Sue
Reviewer: mrsn (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
Great chapter, but I adore this story and have loved all the chapters! :) Lots of good stuff here too....the bathroom interrogation, Bella's realization that Edward is a good guy. They are both jealous though and it's a little bit adorable! :) As much as I would love to have Edward stopping over to declaring his undying love, I don't think that is it a lot....more along the lines of needing stats help maybe?!!? But spring break should be fun!! :)
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
That was great. I love strip Twister!
Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
I loved the E/B interaction during this chapter. I usually read over at Ff, so I was surprised to see the chat pics in the story. Do you do that every time? You've got me so hyped for the next chapter since you've been talking about it since before the outtake. I seriously can't wait!
Author's Response: I do post the comment pics every time. FF doesn't let me do it, so I have to type them out, but Twilighted is awesome and allows them to show up so I do post them. :) I'm glad you're hyped up, too! I hope it doesn't disappoint. :s
Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
Oh BTW, loved the outtake. Sorry I forgot to say. It was important to the story. Good job.
Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
OK, I wait for wnat seems like forever for an update, and I get a chapter of mostly the dog! UGH!
Edward is jealous and so is Bella. So let's get going! Aren't we due for a lip lock?
Author's Response: You had to wait for a week...the normal wait time for any other chapter. I posted an outtake last week. Sorry it wasn't good enough for you.
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