Whew! That was a close with the strip game of Twister haha, for a minute I actually thought she was actually gonna hook up with Jake! Rosalie has perfect timing ;)! I loved this chapter, but it's left me begging for the next one!! What a cliffhanger! What is that Edward up to....

vat happened? lol

Haha poor boys, they're just going with the flow though I love it. Lol good chapter.

Ack!  I read this whole thing from the beginning in one day, and I can't believe where it stops!

 

You're an amazing writer....

 

I love the characterizations....very multi-dimentional, but they stay true to their essence.

 

Hurry, hurry...write faster, dammit!

Well I think if you are so excited about chapter 15 you should post it tomorrow!!! PlEASEE!! Aweome as always! I love your details

Author's Response:

Haha well maybe I would if it was written. :P  I guess you'll just have to wait until next Sunday.

Please tell me Edwards FINALLY realized he likes Bella! ;) OOOHHH, maybe Tanya couldn't take it any more and tried to come on to poor Eddie Boy and he bolted? He, he....seriously please don't leave us with that cliffy for too long!

Oh hey there cliffhanger. Awesome.

And no doubt that he would like being called 'sir' ...the inner 20th c. self does not lie.

Bella 'locking' him in and being proud of herself is probs my fave part. I laughed. A lot.

Author's Response:

I laughed for dayz after I wrote that part, 'cos I kept re-reading it and it kept getting more & more funny each time.  I wanted to put it in the chapter title, but it just didn't go with anything.  Sigh.

How was church this hungover morning? :P xxx<3

So good!  So, so good! 

First of all, I love Rose!  She is great.  She is bitchy but such a fierce friend.  She is the kind of friend who would always have your back!  I like that she can be playful and bitchy at the same moment. 

Second, I like Bella and Jake's friendship.  They are very close and it is easy to see why anyone would think there was more going on with them.  Why was he upset about Edward?  Does he have feeling (more than friends) for Bella?  I don't think so but ....

Lastly. I can never get enough of Edward and Bella together in this story.  I thought their interactions when she was working were adorable.  I love that he had to come down to see her instead of just IMing her.  I loved that Bella could laugh at herself.  I like that they joke and flirt with each other.  Too sweet that he quizzed her.

UGH!  Damn cliffie.  What happened?  Why is he there?  He is supposed to be with the "lab rat".  Please let Edward realize that Adrian is vile and he likes Bella.  Is that too much to ask?!  :);)

Can't wait to see what happens next!!!

Author's Response:

lmao all over '...Adrian is vile...' hahaha, that was great.

You'll see in a few chapters why Jake is upset.  He really does not want her in any other way than as a best friend, and she doesn't want him in any other way than a best friend, either.  I had a best friend I was WAY more affectionate with than B/J...granted, he was gay, but still. We used to make out and shit like that, so that's proof that you can be that physically affenctionate with a friend when there's no sexual attraction or want to further a relationship.

Glad you liked it, and I'm super excited to write chapter 15.  Thanks for reviewing! <3

..... Wow. OMG. Fucking SUCK cock twice for that cliffie.

I'm really upset now! Edward at Bella's at 8PM? OOoooooh. Can I just like fastfoward until you update this story? PLEASE update sooo very soon!

This chapter reminded me a lot of New Moon, in that it was a lot of Jake and Bella and me trying to skim through to get to Edward's part LOL Seriously. I like Taylor, but Jake isn't my favoritest character, like Tanya - as you might understand why ;] - so I was a little anxious. With Jake and Tanya around, you know there's bound to be some shit blowing up between Edward and Bella - always busting my balls. Grr. LOL but it's nothing personal or against your writing, because I effing heart this story big time. Please update soon!

please, pretty please, update soon...i'm begging for more B&E interaction, can't wait to find out why E showed up like that...

Ohhhh you're so so evil!!! How can you leave us hanging like this??!?!?

First I was kinda bummed cos there was all this Bella/Jacob interaction and no Edward!! but then...it was nice to see that, to see how much they love eachother as friends :D And it is possible, totally!

And then...we get some B/E moments...which are precious :D neither one of them show much lusty/lovey emotions towards the other, which is great! they're still evaluating if they have some romance potencial ;) Awesome, love the UST, although it's not even UST yet LOL It's still awesome.

Wonder what's going on in Edward's head...he seems...mmm interested but...mmmmm....not totally there. And wonder what Edward's doing in Bella's apartment like it's the end of the world...

Loved this chapter!! :D Can't wait for more!! Pleeeeaseeee more!!!

Thanx

 

NO, CLIFFIE!  But, I loved the tension between Edward and Bella.  I'm so ready for them to get it on.

Fab job.  I'm following you on Twitter because I like your story that much.

Wow. Why is Edward there?? Hmm...and haha to the studying at work thing! Loved it! :] I'm following Peter now, too! Can't wait for more :]