this was a great chapter... but i really want edward and bella to get together.. so the mystery man at the end hopefully won't be competition.

Uizh! some "skin touch"... like ita lot! Can't wait for next chapter. I totally loved this. When Edward is going to realize his feelings for Bella!? I'm willing to know! Don't make us wait too long for next chapter!

ooohhh!  The plot thickens!  Can't wait for more.

Please tell me that since Edward has found "his" spot on Bella that whorian won't add up anymore. I don't like her at all...I understand she's some kind of catalyst to make Edward realize he's meant to be with Bella but srsly? She needs to go...like yesterday...

Awesome chapter!  I love long chapters and you did not disappoint!!  This story is great and this update totally made my crap-ass Monday better.  :-)  Rose totally cracks me up!  I have to say I'm a tiny bit of a hyprocrite because with this story I'm all...get your skanky hands off a student, but with another fanfic I'm reading where Edward is the TA and Bella's the student I'm all hell ya they should be together.  Can't wait to find out who is sitting next to Bella?!?!  The guys deserve to have a total hotty sit next to her!  :-)

Author's Response:

Bwaaa.  I know what you mean.  But I gotta be realistic!  This IS a canon story, nonetheless, and they WILL get together eventually. :)

Well, since it was your validation beta's b-day, it's all good :) I guess she should be allowed to have some fun too ;)

*Bows head down in shame* Damn, I honestly didn't remember the goldfish incident/James. So I had to go back and find it ;P

I have no problem whatsoever with James not playing a bigger part. Whenever you see the name James, you just know he's going to be an evil bastard... so I like that it's an original character. Then you don't have any notion that he has to be bad. Eventhough we'll probably dislike him just like we dislike Adrian (eventhough I got to admit she's pretty cool if it wasn't for the fact that Edward wants to bone her ;P)

Thanks for responding to my comment... Made me feel all special and shit :) haha.

Uh, oh.  Are we about to see Jealous Edward?  Great chapter!

Oooooh!!! Who is she next to?? Can't wait!

this is great....keep the chapters coming

Great chapter.  Adrian is a whore, but Alice being the one who reported her (which I did not see coming) and Rose's phone call made up for her being in the chapter.  Bella smacking Edward in the eye priceless.  

And last but certainly not least.  Edward licking ice cream off a straw.  one word

YUMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM

Thanks for the heads up about Adrian. Who can blame her, it is Edward. You gotta love Alice and her cockblocking with Rosalie! That was priceless. So Bella gets to ride with a hot guy right in front of Edward. It will be good for him to get a little jealous. Possibly even better that Jacob will witness it and call him out on it?! Go spring break!

I am glad Alice stopped Edward from getting with the TA.  I also like dream dailing, that's amazing. 

I enjoyed Edward finding a spot on her tummy too, that was wonderful.  Over all this chapter was definately a homerun in my book.  I love that you have Edward and Jacob being friendly :)