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Reviewer: JaspersBrand (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 3: Igor & a party at the DC
These two kids are hilarious! A friend recomended the story, so I'm just now catching up. Love it so far!
Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 15: Cockblocks & Perfect spots
I laughed all through this chapter. You have such a way with incorporating comedy, it's brilliant. I loved Rosalie's little speech telling off the RA, that was fabulous. I'm not going to lie... I totally squealed when I was reading Edward and Bella playfully flirting in his bed. You're such a tease! But I love it. Can't wait for your next installment.
Reviewer: MinisculeRaindropOfSilence (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 15: Cockblocks & Perfect spots
Good chapter? More like PHENOMENAL CHAPTER! Not just because of the length, but the fact that it was all EPOV made it even better :)
Jeez, another cliffhanger? How dare you. I'm now sitting here trying to guess who the guy was.
And, I'm not too peeved about "Whorian". I understand that she is just a play thing. And somehow vital to the story. I just skimmed over the "moment" she and Edward had until Rose started calling ;)
I loved the drunk-drag dancing. It made my day.
Update soon! It makes me as happy as Buzzward rubbing the special spot!
-MRoS
Reviewer: erhea (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 15: Cockblocks & Perfect spots
OK...
Please update sooner....
pretty please.
love your story
Reviewer: ande (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 15: Cockblocks & Perfect spots
I love this chapter and I didn't even mind Adrian, but I'm very glad they didn't go all the way.
Reviewer: lovestinksyaya (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 15: Cockblocks & Perfect spots
Ahh I think the bed scene is my favorite Edward Bella scene ever
Reviewer: fletchmartin (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 15: Cockblocks & Perfect spots
Wow! Super long chapter! I loved it! I laughed so many times, but I think my favorites were Edward's "gay" act in front of Jessica, Rosalie's dream dialing (that was hilarious) and Bella's reaction to Jacob's 10A seat. Can't wait for the hext update!
Reviewer: lynnarro (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 15: Cockblocks & Perfect spots
this chapter had me pulling some heart muscles...some of the things were really funny...I settled down to read it thinking it would be awhile but once again I zoomed through it...I know I keep saying this over and over but I really really REALLY love this story
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 15: Cockblocks & Perfect spots
So, I left a friggin kick ass review the other day and my computer was effing up and lost it.
I will try again .... well Edward had a very interesting day on Tuesday. Mid-terms.. classmate.. oreo milkshake.. modeling gig.. "studying" with Adrian *gag*.. cockblocked (heehee).. "saving" Bella.. hanging with Bella.. studying with Bella.. walking Bella home.. tingly hugging Bella!
While i dislike this "thing" with Adrian -- there were a few things that I found intersting. He left immediately to help Bella. As much as he thinks he wants Adrian *gag* he doesn't even give it a second thought to go to Bella even though Jake is there. I keep thinking that if I got the chance to finally be with Rob and someone called me to tell me that my friend needed me, there is no way in hell I'm leaving! What Edward's decision says to me is that he may want the labrat but he truly cares about Bella.
The cockblock was great but Rose's excuse was hilarous ...."dream dialing" and "8% of americans" --- LMAO!
I just love Edward and Bella moments and long for more of them together. I often wonder how they are going to realize that they have feeling for each other and then act on it.
It was a great chapter! Well done!! Can't wait for Sunday! :)
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 04:26 PM · On: Outtake 1: The Mission
can't wait to see smooh Edward put the moves on Bella.
Reviewer: Krugness (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 15: Cockblocks & Perfect spots
Hmmm. We haven't met James yet have we? Just a guess it might be him. :) I loved the mental image of both Edward and Jake sitting there with their mouths hanging open. lol Rosalie and her sleep dialing was very funny. The fact that Edward caught them was even funnier. I can't wait for the chapters of them in Forks. :)
Reviewer: eridani (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 05:07 AM · On: Chapter 15: Cockblocks & Perfect spots
Awesome! I loved Rosalie's intervention; it made me laugh. Also thought the scene after Bella climbs into bed with Edward was really great and totally made up for Edward's stupidity with Adrian. Only 'useful' thing that I can think of to say, is that I was a little confused at the very beginning of this chapter by the suddenleap back in time to earlier in Edward's day and it took me a little while to figure it out. But it's entirely possible that was just due to my own cluelessness, rather than your lack of writing cues. You'd best be on to that next chapter, because I can't wait!
Reviewer: Dramatic (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 15: Cockblocks & Perfect spots
Oh you evil evil girl! Whos the new hottie sitting next to Bella? I'm dying to know! This story is a bit frustrating at times, only because Edward and Bella are so clueless, but you always manage to make me laugh! :) I just cant wait till Edward and Bella finally get together! Keep up the good work! I cant wait for the next chapter! :)
-Erin
Reviewer: Belledward (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 15: Cockblocks & Perfect spots
Hmm... James?
Is James in this story yet? I forget...
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Adrian drama: *SIGH* Boys will be boys. BUT, I love Rosalie! Haha I'm super glad they got him outta that mess. And it's so sweet that him and Bella are getting so close now! And they cuddled! And he has his marked spot on her! The cutest thing ever. My favorite part about this chapter = ]
Everything feels natural. Everyone is getting along, especially Edward and Jake and Edward and Bella and the group as a whole. The relationship between Edward and Bella doesn't seem rushed or drawn out at all - it's all very natural and gradual. I love it! I love how he's so concerned about her that he'd drop Adrian for her... *sigh* they so want each other lol
Thank you so much x100! You made me laugh so much! And then I just didn't know what to do with myself when Bella and Edward fell asleep together! Oh! I was like... going crazy!
And a special thanks for making this a super long chapter. I like them like this = ] My chapters used to always be this long too, and it was exhausting to write, so thank you. I completely understand the time and dedication in putting a long ass chapter together. But I really appreciate the hard work! It's demanding, but I think it also pays off = ] Such wonderful work! This story is definitely one of my favorites!
Author's Response: James was mentioned briefly in the beginning (Gold fish incident) but I didn't want to make him a prominent character in the story. This new guy is not a canon character, so no, it's not James. ;)
Thank you for understanding what goes into writing these suckers! I know people just get excited and they hate having to wait, and that's probably my fault since I don't write ahead, but how can I when the chapters are so freakin' long all the time? Seriously, it's a very, very rare occasion that a chapter is under 15 pages. Most of my readers don't write, so they don't understand how completely exhausting, time consuming, and at times very difficult it is to get chapters out, and have them be good. Contrary to popular belief, this stuff doesn't always just pour out of me on it's own; sometimes it has to be forced in order to flow.
Anyway, now that my rant is done...haha, yeah, I just really appreciate having somebody who understands instead of demands an update right after I posted one and says I make them wait too long. haha. <3
Reviewer: simplicity (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 15: Cockblocks & Perfect spots
Classic! Loved the plot to interrupt Edward!! Loved that he didn't have any issues with Bella too, and I am super anxious to see how things go from here! Thanks for the super sweet (in their own your Bella and Edward way of course) cuddle scene in this one!
Reviewer: hobardi (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 15: Cockblocks & Perfect spots
Ooh! Very promising! It would be GREAT for Bella to for once have some hottie be interested in her! And with the guys stuck there, too... Please let us know what will happen next! Lovely chapter.
Reviewer: beanbean (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 15: Cockblocks & Perfect spots
I"m not sure what you were worried about with this post.... nothing really proceeded with/between Edward and homewrecker...
I will say that I'm surprised that neither of the guys offered up their seat to Bella so that she wasn't sitting alone.... cause I bet they are/were wishing that they had now!
looking forward to the plane ride and what will come to pass in forks!
Author's Response: I wasn't necessarily worried, but I had to warn everybody because if I hadn't have, people would have shit bricks when they unsuspectingly got smacked in the face with the Adrian/Edward thing.
LOL. Well, you'll see about that in the next chapter. muahaha. Thanks for the review <3
Reviewer: letsgetGRAPHIC (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 15: Cockblocks & Perfect spots
Wonderful. I'm amazed and I don't hate it for the Adrian part.
Reviewer: Maximista (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 15: Cockblocks & Perfect spots
I feel like i should've taken notes as I was reading to make this easier. Eh well.
1. Because...it needs to be #1 - Feather. Boas. I...had to stop for a couple of minutes to recover from laughing so hard. And that was just the first mention of it. And then...the actual use of them. I severely hope that...if 'Dan' ever contacts you/your counterpart you end up sending him this chapter so he can take notes on the proper utilization of the collected boas from your profession.
2. Business cards. Lamesauce. At least his encounter seemed legit.
3. Don't you mean...Absolut Vodka? Do tell me you were referring to Smith. Hot.
4. Loooove how Jake could have easily made sure Bella was okay and yet he gives up the sexin and goes a runnin' to her. That was win.
5. Normally, I would be sympathetic towards Emmett for being left out in the E/J lovin'...since that probs my fault for harassing you so much about it, but...he SLEPT in Jasper's room. He. Should. Not. Be. Complaining. That's more than what Edward can say...at this point.
6. Must harass you more.
7. Speaking of, a renewal of vows is in order since divorce is most certainly not an option. Don't you leave me!
8. Ah crap...I forgot what else I wanted to comment on...
9. Oooh yes. Excuse me, but I'm taking a moment to say farewell to Tanya: You will be missed. By only me, probably. But...that's at least one more than you would've had.
10. I kinda liked Adrian's apartment. And the throwing of a person over the shoulder.
11. The entire scene in Edward's bed was fuckawesome. But...you know this. And I'm in love with it. And YOU. And there's no way she was not turned on. Girl hasn't been laid in ages.
12. Edward and Jake making fun of the potential creeps...um, rudity! But a hot boy...I like, I do. Oooh and elderly woman comments! They make my life, the two of them...combined, they do.
/end. Fan-fucking-tastic? y/y?
Author's Response: Renewal of vows just happened, wifey. They are, of course, bringing the mega lulz, and you always do. How could I ever think of leaving you? NEVAR!
LOLOLOLOL omg, dude, I would just RANDOMLY start laughing hysterically in the car when I thought about the boa part in this chapter. Which of course made me think of you and needing 'my space to be serene'. Which of course made me miss you, leading to massive amounts of broken hearts.
Hot boy is definitely good-lookin'. I just got finished writing 7 pages of interaction between B & hot boy, and I like. I like a lot. Swooooon.
I believe this review was fan-fucking-tastic x infinity. <33333
Reviewer: AmeliaJ (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 15: Cockblocks & Perfect spots
Doing the hand gestures is of SINGULAR IMPORTANCE while singing the song! It isn't a proper interpretation if you aren't flashing gang signs or making other threatening gestures while singing, regardless of the fact that you're a 24-year old white girl from Wisconsin driving around suburban Chicago in her little Pontiac G5. Or maybe that's just me... :)
I really hope you find the video. It's classic!
Author's Response: I agree! Except I'm 22, and I live in California so it's not unheard of for white people to try and act gangster. LOL
I will find it, and in the event I don't, we'll just make our own and combine them together. The song must be heard!!
Reviewer: AmeliaJ (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 15: Cockblocks & Perfect spots
Lol, I don't know anyone who has it on their ipod, other than me, but I'm surprised more people didn't catch the reference. It was an awesome choice for Emmett's ringtone. You should link the music video next chapter just to introduce everyone to the awesomeness that is Dynamite Hack "rapping" about grabbing bitches by their weaves, nappy ass or otherwise, while wearing pastel golf vests AND rewording "Blackbird" to include the phrase "Punk ass tripping in the dead of night, Homey scored a ki, He's gonna fly, punk ass, fly."
WTF, YouTube doesn't have the official video. Bitches.
Author's Response: LOLOLOL I've been listening to that song since high school, and it never gets old. Never. I still get all into it when I sing it, too. Hand gestures and all.
Fuck YouTube--I will find it!!!
Reviewer: veggiegirl0601 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 15: Cockblocks & Perfect spots
Haha I'm loving it! Thanks for posting so much, I actually could've read more but that surely doesn't surprise you. I figured something with Adrian had to happen but it made me really happy that Edward would drop potential sex just to make sure Bella was ok. And I love that he cuddled with her, it made me so happy! It serves both Jake and Edward right that Bella is going to be sitting next to some hottie, bwahaha! Can't wait until the next chapter!!!! I've been anticipating the next part for a long time now. Xoxo
Reviewer: HeidiMarie (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 15: Cockblocks & Perfect spots
Good Chapter!!
Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 15: Cockblocks & Perfect spots
Despite the Adrian thing, I loved this chapter! :D Actually, it kind of just made it better that Edward worried enough about Bella to walk away from Adrian:) I'm really curious to see who's sitting next to Bella! I can't wait to read more, so I hope you'll feel like writing chapter 16 soon... *pouts* pretty please? Update soon? =)
Reviewer: jazzylover314 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 15: Cockblocks & Perfect spots
mwuahahahahahahhaa URE DIABOLICAL! okay i LOVED your opening author's note! emma was cool (is that you? she was cute) that agent was a cougar. i like your jacob, he's not a cockblock lol. i am ashamed to say i loved adrian's apartment(my best-freind danillemariecullen would KILL me if she heard that she HATES adrian ) lol umm jasper rocks and what's with edward like whorshipping milkshakes that was so funny oh and SLEEP DIALING LMFAO where do you come up with this. i've been telling everyone that everything would fall into place when they got to forks and by-golly! i think i'm right! lol so all-in-all I LOVED IT! totally amazing! i think your becomming my favorite author (mcvampy's my fav sorry) and wow this is great stuff you got here! thank you mucho for spending all week on it for everyone(youe devoted fans that keep their computer's on all day and refresh the au-human page non-stop to see if u've updated) lol so update soon b cause i smeel some lovin' in the near-future =]
-jazzylover314
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