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Reviewer: bookluver (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 16: Airplane hunks & Store chumps
love this story
Reviewer: owlpostagain (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 16: Airplane hunks & Store chumps
dun dun dunnnnn mike newton, that little fucker. fabby fab, can't wait for the next chapter when edward DAMN WELL better save the day. and ooooo jaceee. sounds like sex on a stick.
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 29, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 1
HAHHHAH!!! I think the whole myspace ordeal was hilarious. Carlsile ISSS supa-fine-sexy-licious AFTERALL, but i loved the 'yoooooooou dis-gust me' part. HA!
Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 16: Airplane hunks & Store chumps
and you leave it there! please tell me edward comes to the rescue,and SOMETHING happens this weekend!!!! please !
Reviewer: jemimag (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 16: Airplane hunks & Store chumps
great as always!!
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 29, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 11: Leg kicks & TexaAAAAAAS
I love the length ofmthe chapters. *sighs*
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 29, 2009 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 10: Busty & the Burro
Oh hell no. HELL to the no. He did NOT just slam the door in her face. HALE NO!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 29, 2009 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 9: Mama's & Ex's
Haha. GO TO HELL TANYA!! Sry, but all the stories I read, Tanya is the hag bitch slut whore, all of them. Whatevs.
Reviewer: lynnarro (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 16: Airplane hunks & Store chumps
you are really funneeeeeeeeeeee with the Horace thing...and I ♥♥♥ the jealousy bit from Edward...AND great ending...leaving us all groaning about Mike Newton hahahaha...great chapter as usual!!!
Reviewer: twlightobsessed (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 16: Airplane hunks & Store chumps
I'm really enjoying where your taking this story. I really like you bringing Jace into the picture. Gives Edward some real competition for Bella's affection. Don't get me wrong I'm rooting for Edward in the long run but I always love the drama and butterflies that come with Jelousy and competition especially when it's equal in some ways. I am loving the start of it anyway. Can't wait to see what you come up with for us next.
Reviewer: forever_twilighted (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 16: Airplane hunks & Store chumps
Ooohh noes!! There's no more! I just started reading this last night, and holy hell woman. I nearly woke my kids up I was laughing so hard. I've also received strange looks here at work. :x I'll forgive you if you update soon. -Beams.- This is fabulous. I've never been big on AH, but damn. This is great. Rosalie is insane and I LOVE it. keep it up, this is awesome!
Reviewer: erhea (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 16: Airplane hunks & Store chumps
ok..
so, do please get jace together with bella
pretty please
yeah, uhmmm, update soon, love the chapter, you are fantastic
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 16: Airplane hunks & Store chumps
Where the hell IS Edward? I'm going to have to go back a few chapters because I can't remember the metion of Mike Newton, so I 'll have to backtrack. Once again that was a great chapter and I love this story.
Reviewer: Crimson_and_clover (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 16: Airplane hunks & Store chumps
OMG. I love this story!! I only just recently read this story and now i'm hooked! I'm seriously addicted and keep checking for updates (you're writing is that fab). :) It makes me laugh loads and I think I may have just recently got laugh lines ;).
I love Jace -totally adorable- , but I keep waiting for Edward and Bella to just get it on already! I do truely adore the UST though...Can't deny that :P
Will wait for more with baited breath (but I love my oxygen so I may just wait with lots of anticipation :P )
Alice-- (Crimson_and_clover)
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 16: Airplane hunks & Store chumps
Great chapter.
Reviewer: RightKindOfWrong (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 16: Airplane hunks & Store chumps
Love the chapter! Cant wait to read more! Please update soon
:)
Reviewer: veggiegirl0601 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 16: Airplane hunks & Store chumps
YES! An update! I actually saw this at like 3:40 am and had to stop in the middle of it to go to bed. How lame is that? I really would have finished it first but I literally couldn't keep my eyes open and unfortunately I started a new summer class this morning. But it was so awesome to come back from class and finish! Yay! So Jace is definitely hot, but you're killing me here with all of the provided distractions for Bella and Edward. When will the misery end?! Actually it's not miserable at all hehe. But anyways, I love how Edward was in such a bad mood after the flight because of Bella flirting. Jealousy! So I'm hoping Edward will come to Bella's rescue with Mike (haha Mike!). Love ya mucho lady! Xoxo
Author's Response: Hahaha, yes, how dare sleep get in the way! ;) Ugh, summer school. I feel you. I have the WORST summer school hours ever. And you'll just have to see what happens concerning Mike... :D
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 16: Airplane hunks & Store chumps
LOL :D
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 16: Airplane hunks & Store chumps
ugh!! where was edward?? i hope he and bella give mike a show. haha..and that jace.. sounds totally hot! haha.. i hope he would help in the sense that it would make edward realize his feelings for bella a little bit sooner. but jace would be a huge problem for the rosalie and alice's plans if ever he did pursue bella and ask her out. hmmmm... this is all getting very interesting. please update soon! =)
Reviewer: breaking my face (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 16: Airplane hunks & Store chumps
One update a week is not enough of a fix for my addiction to this story, I LOVE it.
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 16: Airplane hunks & Store chumps
I need to know what happens now!!! She meets Mike Newton! Where's Edward? I hope Jace just helps Bella get Edward sooner. Update soon please...its summer!
Reviewer: JaspersBrand (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 16: Airplane hunks & Store chumps
So, no James, but Jace sounds just as hot! Can't tell if he's really into her & will call, or if he's just a charmer, like Edward! And both her little idiot friends seemed a little jealous! Edward even had a mini huffy fit on the way back to forks. So great!
So funny he calls her so soon after they get back. eds can't live without Bells & he doesn't even know it. And then the texts from jace the next day! But I see her luck fails b/c she runs into Newton, of all people! I know Eds won't like that one bit!
I have to say, it sucks being caught up on a story! Now I have to wait a freakin week to find out what happens! It's torture. Still loving the story. I'm glad it's taking so long for the plan to work! Makes for a longer, more interesting story! I love your verison of the characters too! Still the same with a small twist. I wish it was next Sunday already!
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 16: Airplane hunks & Store chumps
Great chapter- loved Jace and his texting ways. Funny how Bella always seems to be drawn to Edward..even if it's only a ride to the store. Somehow I think Edward is going to find Mike Newton hitting on Bella and make some sort of a move which will tip the balance of their relationship...Guess next chapter will tell the story on that.
I am really wishing the next chapter was already up to read. I can't help it, I am a greedy bitch when it comes to this story. Please put me out of my greedy misery soon...
Reviewer: PoorJacobBlack (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 1: Tutors & 31's.
hahahahahaha still love the story
Reviewer: Sophia (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 16: Airplane hunks & Store chumps
WEE HOO WEEE HOO WEE HOO (if you hadn't guessed , that's the sound of sirens ..... lame i know .)
UPDATE MOTHER FUCKER !
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