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Reviews For Breaking Bella
Reviewer: SubtlePen (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 17: Speedo Ads & Midnight Plans

i just love the little dance they're doing - LOVE. IT.  srsly awesome UST, and they don't even realize it.

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Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 17: Speedo Ads & Midnight Plans

LOL!  Can't wait until they finally get together.  But I am loving the playfulness.

Reviewer: RightKindOfWrong (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 17: Speedo Ads & Midnight Plans

Love the chapter! Cant wait to read more! Looking forward to the next chapter! Amazing job so far :)

Reviewer: Dramatic (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 17: Speedo Ads & Midnight Plans

Love it! Keep up the good work!

-Erin

Reviewer: dangerkitty (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 4: Attempted Murder & DDR

I'm really horrid at sending reviews, especially when I'm caught up in a story like I am this one. BUT, having to beg for reviews myself, I figured I should turn over a new leaf.

This is great! An awesome start and I can't wait to read more. I really like the way you've written the characters, although Bella does seem a little bipolar at the moment. I'm off to read the rest!

Reviewer: Soprettytome (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 17: Speedo Ads & Midnight Plans

Jealousy meet Edward Cullen. Edward Cullen meet Jealousy. Sweet

I fear the worst for Edward's plan but this should be fun, especially with Bella's coordination.

Oh and I love you and your story if only just for making me like Bella. And for giving to Edward this 'real hot nerd' look. And for writing their playful/flirty bantering like no one else.

Reviewer: lionslamb1901 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 17: Speedo Ads & Midnight Plans

Ohgeez. This could get interesting. I totally loved that Edward pretended to be her boyfriend, and then got all weird about her going out with Jace. When is he going to realize that he likes her and vice versa? Haha. But I loveee this story :D

Reviewer: Krugness (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 17: Speedo Ads & Midnight Plans

Considering how devious Edward seems to be I can't wait to see what he has planned for Mike.  :)  Poor Bella attracting the weirdos.  lol  I'm waiting to find out what is wrong with Jace.  Emmett's comment about Rosalie's mom had me laughing.  Tha same from Edward at the grocery store parking lot seemed to effect Bella Just a little bit.  Will Edward have another opportuniy to torment her like that?  I hope so.  :)

Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 17: Speedo Ads & Midnight Plans

(pulling out my hair) AHHHH!! why do you do this to us?!?!?!?!!!!!!???!!!!!! please update sooooooooonnnn!!



Author's Response:

'cos I'm an evil bitch, naturally. :)

Reviewer: yanxxx (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 17: Speedo Ads & Midnight Plans

and oh yeah, that glassward manip. I was just sharin'. TrinityMartinez (my fellow geekward enthusiast) totally did that. GUH is right.

 

 

Reviewer: yanxxx (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 04:27 AM · On: Chapter 17: Speedo Ads & Midnight Plans

*sigh* I love ExB.

I love Edward in glasses, will he wear those often? *swoon*

so yeah, I just came here to tell yah to let E keep the glasses, pweetty pwease. Lurve yah Tiff! mwamwah. :-*

Reviewer: jasleenkaytina (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 17: Speedo Ads & Midnight Plans

I can't stress enough how obsessed I am with your story!

Ch. 17 made me do the famous 'Alice'. You know, the clapping & squealing, lol. I'm so happy that B & E's friendship is moving along smoothly! Also, thanks for giving me a little sumthin' sumthin' with the whole "coupley thing to do" stunt that Edward pulled. I've been waiting for at least a little touching to happen between them. ;)

I can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Well then I can't wait to see your reaction a few chapters from now. ;)  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: mnabbott (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 17: Speedo Ads & Midnight Plans

I love this story. I want to drink beers with it and chat.



Author's Response:

Yum!  I just cracked open a beer and started writing. baha.

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 17: Speedo Ads & Midnight Plans

LOL!!!!! Can't wait.

Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 17: Speedo Ads & Midnight Plans

HAHA! I can't wait to see what they do! And wow I'd fucking die if I saw Sexward in those frames. Bella's obviously totally right about the secret fantasy thing. They're so cute together, I can't wait 'till THEY figure it out. Can't wait for the next chapter please fucking get it out here!!!!

Reviewer: hobardi (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 17: Speedo Ads & Midnight Plans

Ah, the creep-harassed girl strikes back! Wonderful! :) A good, funny chapter! I love it that the two are getting along so well, and still without having a clue about what is right in front of them...

Reviewer: monkeymansgirl (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 17: Speedo Ads & Midnight Plans

ohhhh. i am sooo ready for the next chapter now!!!

Reviewer: valieelovesspinkiee (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 17: Speedo Ads & Midnight Plans

What's going on??? lols But! I'm really happy at close (ahem) Edward and Bella were this chapter! =)

Reviewer: riotrolla9 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 17: Speedo Ads & Midnight Plans

:D!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

please tell me they get together soon?

:(.........please?

Reviewer: veggiegirl0601 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 17: Speedo Ads & Midnight Plans

Oooh interesting.  Can't wait to see wtf Edward's up to now.  Loved the interaction between Bella and Edward!  Yay!  But why does Jace have to be involved?  It's like Edward has Adrian and now Bella has Jace.  Bah humbug!  But seriously, loved the interaction!  And Mike?  Bahaha!  Yeeah.  Loser.  Can't wait for the next chappie!  Xoxo

Reviewer: thomaslandon (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 17: Speedo Ads & Midnight Plans

Oh, Edward. Acting like he's gonna do something, the silly pussy. No but really. Wtf is he gonna do? Sneak in his home and masturbate to him sleeping, too? Bring Bella so she can watch? lol. Can't wait to find out, though.

WHERE'S THE GANGBANG WITH BELLA, ERIC, AND MIKE??? WHERE IS IT TIFFANY!??

P.S, 'Course the best coffee comes from Seattle. Best everything comes from Seattle. Got the best bands. Best computer software. Best...trees. Best beaches...full of rocks and crabs. Best...recyclers? Whatever, two oh mutha fucken six, represent! lol Love you!



Author's Response:

lmao.  You'll see, you asshole.  Stop hatin' on him.  My Edward totes is not that creepy.

Clearly the gangbang is in your head, along with the epic fic you've summarized that I'm supposed to write. lmao.  Oh, Jesus.

Nukka, please.  Yes, maybe you have the best trees, and coffee, but your beaches are not the best.  We are infamous for our beaches.  We take that one home, beezy.  Suck it. :D Love you!

Reviewer: slayerjules (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 17: Speedo Ads & Midnight Plans

Can't wait for Mike Newton to get his.....and sparks to fly between Bella and Edward. This story is so cool.

 

Reviewer: klim (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 17: Speedo Ads & Midnight Plans

im so confused right now.

Reviewer: ale_ap (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 17: Speedo Ads & Midnight Plans

Wow! awesome chapter! just like the others.

Your fic is the best of all I've read, seriously. I don't speak English very well, but I can read it. I want to my friends read your fic too, but unfortunately they don't speak English; is there some way I could know your name? Because I really wanna tell them your fic, but they need to know who is the master mind who write this fantastic history, really =D

You always make my Sundays ^^ Keep doing an excellent job.

PS: If you want I could translate your fic to Spanish and send it to you, only if you want and allow me =) And give us some kisses from Edward and Bella really! I'm dying!

Reviewer: JaspersBrand (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 17: Speedo Ads & Midnight Plans

Edwards little PDO by the trunk of his car gave me chills!  That was just hot!  I love that his mama raised him right, and that he uses it to his advantage.  He can help carry my groceries anytime!  Ah…I think Edward is jealous about the “gay ass underwear model”!  He’s even more appealing when he’s jealous, whether he admits it or not!  And I totally love his t-shirts!  My kind of guy! 


Bella’s quip about Edward in the magazine was hilarious!  And I agree with Bella…really hot nerds are, well….really hot!  I bed Edward looks good in glasses! 


Haha..Mike the psycho stalker!  Fits him to a T!  I love Bella’s reaction at the thought of him asking her out!  I think its hilarious Mike asked her Dad if it was okay, KNOWING she was with Edward.  Boy has a death wish.  OMG.  I can’t WAIT to see what Edward is up to with the ski mask!  Not sure it’s a good idea to take Bella along though!  She might trip on something and screw up his plan.  Of course, them out, late, alone under the stars…could be promising?!  Okay, maybe too soon, loving the story to much for them to get that close, yet!  Great update!



Author's Response:

Eep!  Yay!  Sigh, it's totes lip-biting worthy, in'nit?  And clearly he's jealous.  He's just not willing to admit it, consciously or subconsciously, so he blames it on the first thing he can think of--sexual frustration.

Sigh.  My girl yanxxx did a manip of Glassward. GUH.  So sexy.  In fact, I must show you.

YUM!

LOL, actually, she doesn't trip and fall.  He gets into mishap and she saves his ass.  I'm quite fond of the whole thing.  sigh.  Thanks for the review!

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