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Reviewer: twibrarian88 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

As usual brilliant.

 

I promise not to hound you, because I have a feeling it will be worth it!

Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

i love it.....u r hilarious......keep it coming

Reviewer: jasleenkaytina (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

OMG, I would totally be your biffle! Maybe then I could convince you to throw me a bone, since BB's UST is driving me mad, woman! ;)

Okay, so this chapter had me bustin' up laughing so many times! And props to the revelation of Dr. Fuck Me, E & B's friendly/flirty banter during lunch, that cocky bastard with his damn tongue, and use of the very Peter-Facinelli-inspired-word: DILF.

I wish you tons of luck on your final and, as always, I can't wait for your next update!



Author's Response:

Hahahaha clearly I used the DILF reference in honor of him & you!  & you're right; as a biffle, you'd totally get a bone. bahaha ;)

Reviewer: msrebarose (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

Love this chapter. I think because there's no "helping" from the team, its all happening naturally.Thanks

Reviewer: tiderider (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

thanks great writing, one of my favorite stories, always happy to see your updates

 

Reviewer: Livie (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

Damn these chapters just keep getting better and better! I laughed at the whole damn thing! Lookin forward to the epic chappy in a few weeks!!!!

Reviewer: msrsEdwardbrooks (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

i couldn't stop laughing my ass off they r so crazy

i cant wait 2 read the other ch. take all the time u need i kno it is going 2 be awsome

xoxo-msrsEdwardbrooks

Reviewer: jules cullen (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

Aww. I hope something finally happens on the road trip! I love these two. :)

Reviewer: PoorJacobBlack (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

i laughed the whole way through this chapter

Reviewer: keola (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

this chapter made me laugh like hell-really good and really funny!

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

Great chapter!

Bella is whacked, smelling Edward's dad! But, she's great.

I can't believe Edward told his dad, lol. But, at least he took it well.

Please update soon?

Reviewer: Lola84 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

Sweet. BPOV of meeting the parents was totally win. I can't wait for this Epic chapter of which you speak...

Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

this was such a funny chapter. I cannot believe Edward told his parents her nickname for Carlisle! Twice! And then she got caught telling Edard that she would marry him if he looked like his dad when he was older. The she got caught sniffing him and later wanting a threesome with his parents. You are positively wicked (in a good way). i am totally loving your story. Good luck with finals and update when you can. I want it to kick ass! (like Bella)

Reviewer: wowza (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

“Okay, but I'd still get the better end of the stick. I'd get your mom, and you...would be gettin' it up the ass from Phil,” she shrugged. “But whatever floats your boat.” - BEST line EVER!

 

 

=)

Reviewer: Draicun (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

Good stuff!  Really enjoyed how light and humerous this chapter was.  Love the story. 

I know you said it was going to be a while before the next update... but then you tell us that they're finally going to hookup - in the same sentence?  Come on!  That's mean  :)



Author's Response:

Noooo, I never said that. :)  I'm glad you liked the chapter though. lol

Reviewer: lisambb (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

I'm really liking the direction this is going.  Who knew spring break at home could be so entertaining.

Reviewer: jfcx3 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

Ahh. A few weeks for another fix? <3333

Reviewer: bacmel79 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

I'm gonna have to wait weeks for what happens next? I think I might cry. I might cry a lot. =(

Loved this chapter though! Laughed my ass off and I can't believe that E&B haven't figured out that they are perfect for each other yet. I do think his parents have though!

Reviewer: chicabonita51983 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

So is it normal that I almost had a panic attack when you said it would be a few weeks before the next post?  Because seriously, I freaked out when this story wasn't updated yesterday. 

Thanks for providing procrastination from studying pharmacology  :-P

Reviewer: newtothis (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

waiting for the "good stuff!"

great job building the tension... can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Teddy (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

I'll TRY to get through the upcoming weeks without going insane with curiosity about The Trip. But you are asking A LOT :) 

Reviewer: crimson marie (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 18: Dirty deeds & Dr. Fuck Me

soon.  :D  There.  Even.  <3 you, my Cha!

Reviewer: crimson marie (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 1: Tutors & 31's.

your window with my own keytar

Reviewer: crimson marie (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 18: Dirty deeds & Dr. Fuck Me

scale

Reviewer: crimson marie (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 18: Dirty deeds & Dr. Fuck Me

will

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