God how I love this story. I love this Edward and Bella. They are so comfortable with each other and can joke around with each other. They have the best relationship being that they are best friends now and will soon turn into lovers. 

I love how Edward for the second time now have held her wrist. But this time he threw in a kiss to her nose. So sweet and hot. Good creativity. I like how before she was crying and he pulled her down were she would be in his lap. Edward was holding the back of her knees and rubbing the small of her back. Then OMG he said you love me and Bella faked protested until she agreed.

I really loved all the parts with them in it,of course. Sadly, I had to scroll down passed majority of the parts with a Jack and the other guys. I just wanted to get to the good parts were B&E play around with each.

Well you go do what you have to and come back to us ASAP. We know that you will bring it and bring it hard.LOL

~Shani

 

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like the story, although I'm not too thrilled about the skipping parts. :(  Jake & the guys are amazing!  I love them to pieces.  Thanks for reviewing, and I'll bring it as hard as I can. hahaha <3

I love how fun they are with each other!  I really hope they get together soon because I'm sick of waiting for them to figure stuff out.

Author's Response:

They'll 'get it together' in their own time.

God I love this story. I'm looking forward to your next EPIC chapter.

I'll reread the whole story again by the time your chapter is up.

Good luck with everything that you have going on.

**shrieks a la Legally-blonde-esque**Road trip!!!! :D

I think it's just what they need!! And next chapter is EPIC chapter!!! **Jumping up & down!!!**

I was literally LMAO with Bella and her crush on Carlisle!!! LOL She smelled him, got him a crude :P nickname at that, and you have to give props to Esme by not breaking Bella's neck in half :P And Edward,...between jealousy and hysterics...

We got butterflies!! For the first time!!! And tongue!!! That Edward is so cheeky...Totally loved the banter...best eva!!! :D

I completely loved this sentence :“Hell, if you're as sexy as your dad when you're his age, I'll marry you.”...

And Charlie...God I love him!! :D He let Edward go...though I'm not quite sure why Edward didn't show him the OTHER leg... ;)

Awesome awesome update!! I'll wait patiently for the next EPIC update...I'm dying here already!!!

Thanx :D

Author's Response:

:D I know. I'm so excited to write it.

eep!  I know!  Although the tongue might have done well on other parts of Bella's body, eh? ;)

That sentence was alllll Tasha's.  She came up with all the good ones, dammit. haha

The always humiliated Bella Swan! I Love It! Charlie was the best though!

This was hilarious!!  I love that with E, B gives as good as she gets.

Looking forward to the drive back to SF.

Oh, Cheif Swan. What a typical pig. You know what's wrong with cops? They don't do their fucking job. Does Charlie want to take it in the ass from Edward Cullen, too? Edward, the badass. Stinkbombs and dick drawings? Rebeeeeellll, dude. Just doing those dirty deeds. Can't Mike just hit a girl without having petty crimes being commited on his car, you awful person. I hate cops lol. Anyways. Dude, I thought this was supposed to be the road trip chapter. I was excited. Oh, well. Still waiting for that fuck scene. I'm right here if you need help on it. Can't wait for the next chapter. Well, I can but I bet it's gonna be cool lol. Miss you, boo.

BTW, Edward would play golf.

Author's Response:

You're such a dick, Thomas.  I miss you too.

aww heart the nose kiss.  and i truely love carlise! hahaha

L O V E D   I T!!  Awesome chapter and I simply can not wait for that road trip!  :-)

Good luck on your final!

that was my favorite chapter. i like how they are together makes you remember the friends that you've had over the years. thats when you look back and decide to call them up and talk about the good old days.

Completely amazing. I just love this story and will anxiously, but patiently, wait for the next chapter.

Loved it! When he kissed her nose? Killed me. Carlisle being Dr Fuck Me and Bella's awkwardness? Total hilarity. Generally brilliant all round. If I could applaud on the internet, I would. Can't wait for the epic chapter(s); bring on the road trip, and a car filled with sarcasm, hidden desires and burnin' loins!

Ra xx

Author's Response:

You know it, baby. ;) xx

good chapter, i felt for bella when ec dropped her in it for the dr fuck me comment, lmao!!! it was hilarious though;)