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Reviews For Breaking Bella
Reviewer: JaspersBrand (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

So glad Charlie let Edward slide.  That was the perfect prank, and to get away with it too…even better!  Funny he thought it was Jake.  Wonder how him & Bella took that!


I SO can’t believe Edward told Carlisle Bella’s nickname for him!  And to bring it up while she was there and tell her he knows.  I can only imagine how red her face was.  I would have bolted from the house right then!  Now…Edward’s little tongue trick, even I can see where Bella’s mind went with that! 


Can’t wait for the car ride home.  That’s going to be a riot!  Hope exams go well so you can hurry back to writing!

Reviewer: beraroma (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

LOL!  I can't imagine telling my dad something like that!!!  They are too cute!

Reviewer: Krismarie94 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

I love you, ABSOLUTELY!

This story rocks! I started reading it yesterday, and I'm completely enthralled!

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

this chapter was soo funny! although that was really mean of edward to tell his dad about his nickname that bella made up... but i was laughing so hard through out this whole chapter!

Reviewer: eridani (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

I am looking forward to this road trip almost as much as if it were my own!

Reviewer: jewelsie (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

More!! More!! Please??

Reviewer: jasperluv (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

ooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhh I want bella to seriously or for a joke hit on Carlisle once plaezzzzzzzzzzzzzzz ..............it would be aewsome and Alice can see that future/ prediction..................imagine the look on Alice's face and her trying to stop Bella............mwahahah

Reviewer: jasperluv (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

this chapter is the reason i fell in love with this story...........not the alice -soul mate dipshit...............this chapter was hilarious..........i donot want them to return to their meddling friends ever again...........love will happen without them forcing these two.

Reviewer: hobardi (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

Ok, now what was that 'moment' Edward was having in the backyard after kissing her on the nose, hm? I'm intrigued about the road trip, too, the two of them together in an enclosed space for some time! But take your time writing the story like you want it to be. Although, I have to admit, I'm impatiently waiting here... Thanks for the heads up that the update's going to take some time!

Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

errrrrrrg....i really need for you to do the followiing:

1.  Update soooooon!!!!

and

2.  MAKE BELLA AND EDWARD KISS SO THAT THEY CAN REALIZE THEY LOOOOOVE EACH OTHERRRRRR!!

 

 



Author's Response:

lol. well 1 isn't going to happen, and when 2 happens it won't be any sort of love epiphany. sorry. :P

Reviewer: xmouth (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

I love Dr fuck me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

I freaking LOVE farm town!  This chapter was ok...kind of filler, but funny!!  I can't wait for the road trip :)

Reviewer: TheLambToHisLion (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

oh gosh

i think this is my fav chappie to date(:

i love me some bellaxcarlisle teasing.

i was seriously laughing my ass off and grining stupidly the entire chappie.



Author's Response:

Dude, when I first looked at your penname I thought it said thelambtohisLOIN, and I started laughing really hard.  And then I realized I'd misread it...which made me laugh even harder.  I'm such an idiot.  With that said, I'm glad you liked the chapter haha.  I thought it was pretty funny myself. ;)

Reviewer: TheLambToHisLion (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

oh gosh

i think this is my fav chappie to date(:

i love me some bellaxcarlisle teasing.

i was seriously laughing my ass off and grining stupidly the entire chappie.

Reviewer: mnabbott (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

I love how oblivious they are to the fact that they totally want eachother.

Reviewer: simplicity (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

I am so absolutely LOVING Bella and Edward right now and the rapport they have together.  I *love* it!  You rock completley!  Can't wait for the big huge update!  Thanks for working so hard for us!

Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

god, i effing loooooooooooooooooooooove this story. actually, i think its my fav. i get so angry when twilighted doesnt inform me that one of my favs isnt updated and i loose a chapter(like what happened to the last one).

then again, when it happens, i have two chapters to read.

well, ii cant wait for the next chapter, good luck on your finals, and you have to update asap. but no pressure.

 

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

Love this chapter!! Funny, interesting and oh so perfect.  Attacking Mike Newton's car...priceless!!  Could not believe Edward told Carlisle Bella's nickname though...that was too much!

Have to stop reviewing due to time constraints (yeah, we all have them, but I still hate them).

I will try to be patient for the ride back to school.  Somehow I think a few long conversations will push these two over the "friendship" edge into something more...

Reviewer: veggiegirl0601 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

I can't believe Edward told his dad!!!  I'd kill him, personally.  I'm glad Bella got to smack him around a bit for it.  How embarrassing!  I really loved this chapter!  Bella and Edward definitely had a few 'moments'.  Their road trip is going to be epic, I'm sure.  Good luck on your finals, I'll be here to review when you get back to us!  Xoxo

Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

i loved this chapter, it was so funny, the whole dr. fuck me scenes. and so cute how he could not control himself and kissed her nose, bet he didn't even realize that he did before she asked him about it, it was natural for him. can't wait for the epic chapter, but will wait patiently...kind of....not really lol, but is all good and for good reasons.

Reviewer: devilsgenie (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

This chapter was so freakin' hilarious!!! which is exactly why it's worth the wait every single time... *sigh* i seriously heart this story!

Reviewer: belami (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

as i read your notes at the beginning i was screaming no "shakes head side to side" that you wouldn't be updated for a while.

But i think it will mnake it so much more enjoyable the said next two chapters.

Can't wait.

 

Once again i love the go between with Edward& Bella.

 

Reviewer: SarahElizabeth (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

So they're going on a Road Trip...hmm. What do you have in store for us, dear? You scare me...really you do.

Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

iloved this chapter! i loved esme and dr fuck me! i loved the interactions btw the group. i loved the edward bella stuff ... so cue when he kissed her nose! .. i think being friends is very important in a relationship ... now i know you need time for the next chapter ... and although it will physically cause me pain to wait more than a week i will do it! because that just how much i love this story. I cant wait for the trip ... i wonder whats going to happen ... so many possibilities as to what the BIG chapter could be! i hope your finals go well and I hope the chapter works out! (hoprfully not toolong!! hehe) good luck!

Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois

love it, love it , love it

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