Yes.  Defiinitely oh em gee.  I love the banter between them.  I think that is my fave part of this story.  You are doing such a good job with this fic.  Sure, I sometimes feel like it is going a bit too slow, but that is my lack of patience and has nothing to do with you.

Just fyi, and this is not meant as a criticism of any sort, in Oregon you don't pump your own gas.  Its against the law.  They have attendants, pump jockeys who do it for you.  I have family in OR and I live in WA (about 1.5 hours from Portland  and 3 from Forks), so I have spent tons of time there over the years and as many other states as I have been to, it is the only state that you aren't allowed to pump your own gas but I love getting gas there because of it.

AAAAAAAUUUUGHGHGHGH!  You tease, you!  I want Bella's take on The Kiss!

Oh you flippin suck!!!!! How awesome was this chapter!!!!!!I loved it!!!!!!!

 

I can't believe i have to wait HOW LONG for the next chapter!

 

This was EPIC and SO WORTH it

That was the most adorable scene ever written anywhere! All throughout the chapter I kept huffing and puffing that there were like almost no romantic sparks at all between these two. I was getting restless.

And then BAM! SWOON! Damn, I loved it to death!

Woo-hoo!

fin-fuck-ally.

That's all I have to say.

You evil, evil woman.

A cliffie like that? C'mon! I figured there would be a cliffie since you split the chapter in half....but still! This is pure torture! We have to wait a week to find out how she reacts! Torture, I tell you! Now I will spend all week imagining different outcomes.

I'm not gonna lie, I kinda don't want it to be perfect and all that. I want him to have to work for her a bit...But at the same time, I would love some sexin from the two of them. Eh...I guess it's a win-win situation for me either way :) Unless you have them get into a big fight or something...but I don't see that happening...(please don't do that! haha)

Great chapter!

Author's Response:

Oh, he'll have to work for her.  You should know better than to think I'd let it just be peachy keen from here on out. muahahaha ;)

AHHHH OMFG! FINALLY! ahahaha

That was AWESOME!!!!! I can't wait for the next one. Cause Hello?! You Rock Out LOUD!! Keep on writing!!

*EEK!* Finally! Still hate that you made a reference to Adrian in the story, but as long as she gets fired from the school for sexual harassment, I'll be happy :).

You're evil....evil evil evil! Ans that's ALL I'm saying!

I cannot BELIEVE that little punk told Carlisle about Dr. Fuck Me!!! what a rat bastard!! I hope Bella gives him titty twisters all the way back to campus. :)  And I'm with Bella - to get to Carlisle, I'd make out with Esme. She's sweet and pretty, what the hell? :)

Eddie's kiss on her nose was too. effin. cute!!  seriously...I can't WAIT until one of these kids grabs the other one and plants a big, juicy smacker on 'im!!  whew! They're gonna burst into some seeerious flames when that happens. :)

I am very, very sad. I've gulped down this story in the last 2 days, and now I am out of chapters!  waaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!  I've been lovin' my way thru the whole thing, and now, nothing left. :(  I hope that you update soon....I'd hate to regress emotionally and start sucking my thumb again!!  I'm sure you'll show me some love. ;)

Author's Response:

If all goes well in validation, there should be an update on Sunday. :)  I'm thrilled you like it so much, and I appreciate you reviewing every single chapter! xx

haha!! NEWTON! (said in Jerry Seinfeld's "Newman!" voice)  He's such a tool. :)  Funny thing is, the kid that played him in the movie is actually not obnoxious - he played the uber-cool younger brother on the fabulous but short-lived Joan of Arcadie on TV. I didn't recognize him at all, 'cause he was such a wanker in the movie!!  He had glasses in Joan, and was smart-hot. :) 

I know you're up for a sexual tension award, but seriously.....if one of these two don't bump into a gonad or do an accidental boob graze, there will be dire medical consequences!!! :)

I LOVE Show and Don't Tell. Uncle E makes me horny. Tanya needs to be TAKEN DOWN!!!!  You should check out Answering Bell - bet you'd like that one, too. :)

OOH, Mr. Plane Ride is texting Bella...Edward is gonna get PISSED. And now Newton is gonna try to hump her in frozen foods...Eddie better get to steppin' or she's gonna be taken!!!

I'm runnin' outta chapters and I'm gonna bawl. :(  waa!

Author's Response:

Yeees, Brit is a fucking doll and I adore her completely.

I'm hoping to have the first part of chapter 20 up on Sunday, but there's another story in my queue that's been there for fucking ten years, and still hasn't been validated, so it'll solely rely on when that shit gets posted as to when I can post the new chapter of this story.