Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
Great, great , GREAT chapter. I love their banter.
Reviewer: mareimbrium (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 7: Stink Bombs & Fishnet Thongs
Oh, the perfect little blurb about how awful NIN's latest work has been!
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
This chapter was so good...especially the end. He kissed her! After he danced with her! in a diner (but who cares)! I'm glad they got to spend so much time together. Now when they get back to SF, maybe they will miss each other's company and then one thing will lead to another...(hint hint) :)
Reviewer: Scorpiosue1102 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
Ooo, you evil, evil person LOL. Love how you ended it. I've been patiently waiting and you did not disappoint. Patiently waiting for part 2.
Reviewer: gillies (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH MY GOD!!!!!! Sooooo worth the wait! hahahaha I sneakly read this at work, and let out the biggest squeal after I had read it! I'm getting some strange looks now!!
Can't WAIT for the next bit!! EEEE!!
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
Oh Girlie- I sincerely hope you have plans to update! Fiendish of you to leave things in a cliffie like that...
Have tons of comments...but don't feel like sharing...just yet. A quick update would certainly spur my fingers to type as the thoughts pour out of my brain....just sayin'
Reviewer: mareimbrium (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 5: Sexy poses & Sexless eons
Love it! I like long chapters and fun characters!
Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
Yaaaaaaaaaaaay
Reviewer: laed (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
OMG Six, that was perfection!!!! Beyond sweet how it all clicked for him. <3
"All I saw was her; so completely peaceful, and jubilant, and just fucking beautiful, and she was in my arms. I had caused her current state of happiness, and suddenly everything clicked. All the subconscious urges as of late, to touch her, or have her touch me; the kisses on the head and nose...all of it made sense, as if it were leading up to this one moment."
Reviewer: haippa (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
ur seriously leaving me here?..................dat is sooooooo not fair
ita absolutely great
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
FINALLY!!!! HE KISSED HER
Reviewer: Teddy (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
about friggin time! *LOL*
Reviewer: mareimbrium (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 1: Tutors & 31's.
Thank you for some realistic pricing on clothes for once, instead of whisking whoever off for a shopping spree. I like your beginning...sounds like the tutoring office at my school.
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
UPDATE THIS MOTHER FUCKER NOW! This was the most awesome chapter....PLEASE don't make me wait too long....I love it sooooo much....
Reviewer: Sophia (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
HOLY MONKEY FUCKING SHIT !
FUUUCK !!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: dazzledbride (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
... that's all I have to say.
Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
You took the words right out of my mouth! Oh! My! God! I was soooo not expecting THAT! Here I was thinking he was just going to have a lightbulb moment BUT not enough light bulbs to light a football stadium! WOWWOWWOWWOWWOWWOWWOWWOWWOWWOW!!!!
Kat
Reviewer: Jalice (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
That was seriously the cutest thing ever! I was hoping a kiss would work itself into this chapter. I actually squealed a little bit at the end there. Oh, and I'm so glad the kiss was from EPOV.
Reviewer: beraroma (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
Giddy!
Reviewer: crimson marie (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
*sighs* I have no idea how they got to this point but really, s'okay. Cuz I beta'd this shit and I loved it then, too.
Reviewer: Fleuri-anne (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
OMGGGGGGGGGGG I am so fucking excited about this chap, it's unhealthy!!!! Fucking finally!! And six, you are so meannn for cutting it off there hahaha! Oh well, more to look forward to in the next chapter!! Shit I can't wait! Will you update next sunday? God I hope so! Yayyy, gonna read the last part again now :P xxxxxxxxx
Reviewer: erinsmommy (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
OH.MY.GOD. PERFECT!
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
oh, i looooooove sixpence none the richer. i actually have kiss me in my ipod. so i knew what was going to happen. lol. you have no idea, every time i got and eemail from twilighted.net that one of my favorite stories had updated, i got all happy until i saw it wasnt breaking bella.when i finally got the email, i had to double check to see if it was true. update soon, please
Reviewer: bchbldgrl (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
Eeeeeeee!!!! Finally a kiss! :) I enjoyed this chapter sooooo much n can't wait to see what happens next!!!
Reviewer: thomaslandon (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
yay you used our shunping convo :) Where's my thanks? lol kidding...but seriously. haha still needa read the rest. Good so far.
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