Reviewer: klim (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois
awwwww. i love this.
Reviewer: klim (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 18: Dirty deeds & Dr. Fuck Me
lol. that was great.
Reviewer: SinAndShame (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
AHHHHH. Bitch. I love this. Their banter is great!
Reviewer: belami (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
Hey,
Just like to say that loved this installment and can't wait for you to post next chapter.
As usual dialogue was brilliant.
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 03:42 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
YES!!!! OMG longest prelude to a romantic kiss ever - though I'm half expecting to have the diner applause after the dancing leading up to it hehe
Hope there isn't too long to wait for "part 2" but I also know how much real-life can kick up a fuss sometimes :S
Oh, and I actually find myself hoping they're not in a hurry to take additional steps... they should spend some more time shunp-ing each other first hehe
Reviewer: valieelovesspinkiee (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
Oh.. my.. Good... God! That.. was a mean cliffie but excellent one! Yay!!! they're kissing!! Yayy! Oh, if it wasn't 2 in the AM I'd jump up and down, I swear. lol
Reviewer: JackleenHadley (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
Omg! You weren't lying when you said soon you would make something happen between them. Very smooth the way it happened too. I love thos chapter! Can't wait for part two!
Reviewer: jewelsie (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
More Please!!!????
Reviewer: doowee (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! JUST AMAZING. (=
Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 01:23 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
HOLY MOTHER OF CHRIST. I'M SQUEALING LIKE A TWO BIT WHORE ON HER KNEES! Finally. They. Kissed. Oh my god, I'm so happy about it. And you had to cut it off right there, you damn tease! I know I haven't left a proper review in forever, but I've always read your updates. You never cease to disappoint with your chapters. They honestly get better and better. I adore the way you write "Edward" it makes me wish he was a real person, you see. That's when you KNOW you're doing something right. I love you and I love this story. You always outdo yourself. Bravo, bravo...superb!
Author's Response: Eep! -takes a bow- thank you, thank you. You totally FAIL for being the 154th review though. lmao. Kiiiidding. ;) I'm so happy you liked it, though! And yes, it's been far, far too long since you've left a proper review! Shunnn. I still love you, though. :D
Reviewer: crazy4cullen (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
oh my Gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood :P
whoo!!
yayyy
wow
its so cool edward sometimes loses the filter between his brain and his mouth
he says such CHARMING things :)
i looooveed this
omg
this is all i wanted from this chap and more!
gooood job
xoxo
Reviewer: Doomed Youth (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
omg!
you leave it there.......... why!?
i loved the chapter, as usual. i think this story is awesome 'cause bella and edward didn't progress to fast.. and not too slow.
just right.
i want the same awesomess for the next chapter!
Author's Response: because I'm an evil whore. muahaha. :D
Reviewer: xmouth (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
YES!!!!!!! I so wanted for Edward to make the first move and love this chapter and looking forward to the next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 4: Attempted Murder & DDR
Damn the catastrophy that is Bella doig Dance revolution had me in stiches...dear god the tears were just rolling...I love your story it has me smiling quit a bit...
Reviewer: absmw1618 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
i really love this story, great job! i cant wait to read more :)
Reviewer: wowza (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 12:30 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
I think I've been waiting for that for about.. 20 chapters?
Haha, it was great! Great chapter!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 3: Igor & a party at the DC
LOL god that was Awesome!! The glares had me rolling...
Reviewer: delilah818 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
That was really mean to just leave it hanging there! lol But that was a great chapter and finally there feelings for each other r out in the open! Can't wait for more!!!! Update soon! :)
Reviewer: ObsessiveEdwardDisorder (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
-JUMPS UP ON DOWN SPASTICALLY- OH MY FUCKING GOD. THEY KISSED! THEY FINALLY KISSED! AHHHHHH AHHHHHHH AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! THIS SHOULD TOTALLY GO DOWN IN A WORLD HISTORY MOEMNT, BECAUSE DUDE, IT TOOK LIKE 24 FECKING CHAPTERS FOR THEM TO...-DRUMROLL-...KISS!!
I LOVEE THE BUILDUP U HAD TO IT ;] AND BAH, CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER!!!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 2: Bitches & Bear Hugs
LOL now I see the bipolar bit...can't say I blame the girl...I was a biology tutor in college and no shows annoyed the hell out of me.
Reviewer: katie_winkles (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
baaaaaah are u serious.......sweet jesus, ive been waiting a good 19-20 chapters for that!!!!!!
Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
Squeeee! Please get the next chapter out quick, you know, to keep the momentum going.
Reviewer: wandering-home (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
Dude, are you a mind reader? Just last night I looked up Breaking Bella because I was curious to see whether there had been an update that I had missed, and then I turn on my computer today to an update? Skills. ;)
Loved it. The swaps in POV were perfectly placed. They're adorable. I found Edward's acceptence of Bella's best guy friends refreshing. Normally Edward gets all angsty, regardless of whether or not he's with Bella yet, and I liked how instead of getting jealous, Edward thought about how lucky he was to be close to Alice in CA and how much he would hate not being able to see her often. And then instead of mentioning it at all, he just calls Alice to say hi. He had perspective which most guys tend to lack, and it was endearing. :P
Reviewer: RiRi (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
It is about damn time!!! :D
Reviewer: Zyla Nyx (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
OH MY GODDESS!!! SOOOOOO FANTASTIC!!! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY! AND THE KISS!!! FINALLY!!! HEHE KEEP UP THE PHENOMENAL WORK AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!
~Z
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