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Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
I just reread this chapter with a HUGE, happy sigh. AAAAAAHHHHHH. It was just as good the 2nd time, if not better....I zoomed thru it so quick the 1st time 'cause I couldn't wait to see if he kissed her!!
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZE hurry and write the next chappie - I have a spiritual NEED to find out Bella's reaction!!! Make her smooch him back of I'll plunge a knife into my heart. :) (drastic, I know, but c'mon! it's been 8 million chapters we've waited! haha!)
xoxo
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 11: Leg kicks & TexaAAAAAAS
Great chapter!
Reviewer: x_twi-kat_x (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
Oh my god!! Can't wait for part two now :D <3
Reviewer: Live720 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 1
Okay, let's try this AGAIN! I tired to review earlier and it wouldn't let me, so my apologies. I just didn't want you to think I'm the bitch who reads and never reviews! Anyway...
I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE this story. It's fucking hilarious. I love the little Myspace pictures and how in the HELL did you get them added into the text? Now, that takes skills, tech skills that I most certainly do not possess.
You are an awesome write! Your detail is incredible and it really brings to life the college experience. It makes me miss my college dorm and apartment days... Le sigh...
I love the chemistry between Bella and Edward and how it shifted from hostility to friendly bantering and flirting! I loved how he was such a gentleman with her when she was clearly drunk out of her mind. I also love how you capture the close friendships and interactions between ALL the main characters!
Fianlly, I think that Bella and Jacob have the cutest relationship in this story! It's SO refreshing to read something where he isn't automatically made out to be this huge jerkoff!
Thanks for writing this and I can't wait to read to find out what's next!
Reviewer: jennmo (Anonymous) · Date: August 10, 2009 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
such and anwesome chapter and such a mean cliff hanger. i hope the next part dosent take as long. is it gonna be BPOV? or are you gonna tell us what happens next?? CAN'T WAIT... BANG AND FALL IN LOVE ALREADY!!!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
OH
MY
GAWD!!!!!!
I loved it! I love them! I love YOU!
I so love Edward and Bella. I enjoy their convos, flirting, banter, jealousy, friendship, desire --- everything. You have been building this up for awhile and it was definately worth the wait!
Great job and I can't wait for Sunday!!!!
Reviewer: lastjuicykiss (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
holy sheet this is good i cannot wait for them to make sweet dirty love to each other in part 2
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
Wow, the restaurant should pay them for the entertainment to their patrons. It is about time Edward made a move, he's been wanting to for a long time now. But you did leave a cliffhanger, what will Bella's reaction be? Huh, we know she'll like it, but will her pride cause her to fake being upset. Just to keep him away from hurting her, who knows?? Only you and Alice. Update soon please. Love the story.
Reviewer: esmie3 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
Evil Evil Evil Cliffie!! Argh! LOL... Wow. Kind of a strange place for a first kiss, I think. But, whatever, it finally happened. Thanks for the update :) Waiting desperately for pt 2...
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 10: Busty & the Burro
"He slammed the door"! Wow, he really is at the end of the rope.
Reviewer: lynnarro (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh yay yay yay *jumps up and down* he kissed her he kissed her hahahahahahaha...its about damn time...this is absolutely the BEST chapter by far....LOVE IT♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ oh and I loved the "abercrombie and gay" bit ...that cracked me up!!! great job Tiff mwah!!!!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 9: Mama's & Ex's
Great story!
Reviewer: angmclure (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
I mean this in the best possible way but you suck. I loved the chapter and now I have to wait to find out how the kiss ended. That is the most toturous ending I've had I think. The chapter rocked though I'm just impatiant for the next part. I counting the days again.
Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
and you leave it there??????????? come on !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Joey Cullen (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
OMG OMG I can't believe you left it there!!!! Please PLEASE post the next chapter soon. I need to know what happens and how Bella reacts.
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
OMG!! YAY!! They Kidded!! I love what you did with that chapter!!! Great job and I cannot wait for part 2!!!!!! So glad he did not want to deal with Adrian!! SWEET!!!! Cannot wait to see how bella and edward begin to react to eachother after that kiss!!
Reviewer: Kisster (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
Wow! Swooooooooooooooooooon.
Reviewer: Simonelecochon (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
That was sooo good! I can't wait for part 2. Does she kiss him back?
Reviewer: SpaCullen (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
Argh! What a great cliffie! Can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: yanxxx (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
awww.. i love the best friend moments in there.. you b and the guys, and e and al.
Oh, Jace. I love the guy, I love him even more when he's unknowingly making E (and Jake) jealous.
mmm.. mental slips, hope E has many more mental censor slips to come. lol. i love it when he says things he didn't think through.
haha.. B's singing is hilarious, I can just hear it now... BWAHAHAHA... *guffaws* *rotfles*
YAY! He checked her out and realized she always gorgeous. like duh E, where have you been? glad you could catch up.
Adrian almost ruined my mood. but I was too happy when E lied to her (and he even didn't think of her, at all), DOUBLE YAY!
I love the UST, cuz E's not oblivous to it anymore.
bwahaha.
'allergic reaction', sigh, they're perfect together. lots of signs that he's fallin' for her. *sigh* I LOVE THIS CHAPTER.
HOW FUCKING AWESOME IS THIS?? A KISS! whooooooo. FUCKAWESOMEst CHAPTER (to date)! ENJOYED EVERTHING. love yah Tiff..
/end incoherentness
Reviewer: fiesty_pookie (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
YES! YES! YES! She better return the kiss, he's putting himself out there. And please get rid of Adrian :)
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 05:43 AM · On: Outtake 1: The Mission
Wow that was epic! Launched doesn't even describe it...wonder how drunk Bella really is. Oh well I do believe Edward may not look at the teacher agian anytime soon if he knows whats good for him...lol
Reviewer: slayerjules (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
Thanks for the great road trip! E drawing on B's face while she slept was priceless. Can't wait for part 2.
Reviewer: klim (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
tears. that was sweet.
Reviewer: lisambb (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
Ok, I'm mad at you for leaving me hanging but I really enjoyed the chapter. Hurry with the next one please!
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