Reviewer: farmergirl (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 2
hillarious!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 11: Leg kicks & TexaAAAAAAS
Great chapter!
Reviewer: cmm52 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 2
OMG!! I don't think I have ever laughed so hard at a story in my life! I swear to baby Jesus next time I'm in situation where I can use the phrase, "I heard thuds and sounds of distress," I'm fucking using it. That is such an Edward Cullen thing to say. God, I loved the whole thing.
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 10: Busty & the Burro
Great!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 9: Mama's & Ex's
Wonderful!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 8: Sex Changes & Eiffel 65
Fantastic!
Reviewer: veggiegirl0601 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 2
Loved this chapter! It was made of awesome. Is Sisters a real town? I'm going to look that up just for fun now lol. Sigh. That was a contented sigh because you make me so happy! I can't believe that whole scene in the forest with Bella peeing, that was hysterical! And the little scene right before they fell asleep was really sweet. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!!! Xoxo
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Outtake 1: The Mission
That was fantastic!
Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 2
This chapter was exactly what I needed to read after a hellish weekend. I haven't laughed that hard in awhile. You write bickering really well. One problem though... you made them stay at Best Western! Nothing good ever comes out of a Best Western! They don't even give you complimentary muffins, alright! I guess if I went to sleep in a Best Westen with your hunky dory Edward then I can see how it would be a better experience and all. Regardless, your chapter was filled with excellent comedy and even better in the dark smooches. I don't know why, but that whole hotel kissy scene nearly gave me a cavity. So in conclusion, this chapter made my day and you're well.... pretty much fantastical. I'm down rambling now.
Author's Response: Dude, when you tweeted that it was a BW hotel, I TOTALLY thought to myself, "Oh, jeez...Niki will LOVE this chapter, then." hahah. Stupid hotel idiots. Did they promise complimentary muffins? Sue for false advertisement. I hope you started on that letter to the better business bureau.
On a different note, I'm happy you liked the chapter! And high 5 @ me for making you laugh after your nightmare of a vacation haha. xx
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 7: Stink Bombs & Fishnet Thongs
Great chapter! Rosalie and Jasper are twins, so why do they have different last names? Or did I read that wrong?
Reviewer: TweetieBird (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 2
i did lmao. i was at my parent's place, and my mom gave me a strange look...
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 2
GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 2
That was another crack-me-up chapter - even *I* had forgotten about the restaurant surroundings by the time B&E stepped out of their dance and kiss and "moment" hehe
The whole getting lost and neither one printing out directions etc was hilarious (been there, done that, though not quite so far off course)
Now I wonder what will happen the day after... both between B&E AND with the extended group :)
Reviewer: jennmo (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 2
funny funny shit!! love it. are they ever gonna bang and fall in love???
Author's Response: yes...but not yet
Reviewer: valieelovesspinkiee (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 2
LOVED THIS CHAPTER! omg.. i think i peed my pants. lol that was hilarious! LOVED every moment! Yeah I kinda knew Bella wouldn't go all goo-goo eyes and suddenly devloped unrequited feelings of everlasting love. Yeah. lol But it seems like things really are building up. Yay! (jumps) and this is the longest review I've ever posted. Let's end it now... lol okay, now.
Reviewer: owlpostagain (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 2
i LOVE the way bella reacted. to everything. kudos.
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 6: Vagina's & 2Pac
Great!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 5: Sexy poses & Sexless eons
Loved it!
Reviewer: jacqueline3508 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 2
that scene in the woods is just priceless and just so Bella.
Reviewer: xxashleyxx (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 2
very, very funny:)
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 2
Yep...wasn't expecting this at all. Boy do these two move SLOW! It WAS funny though..VERY funny. Just keep him away from Adrian and I promise to be patient with the tortoise like movements of our favorite pair...they are a mess, but totally adorable.
Reviewer: xxDevil18xx (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 2
Im glad Bella didn't mess this up and don't worry I laughed- I laughed so hard I almost pissed myself!!
"You're groping my ass!" Lmfao, it was to funny. I really hope you update sooner, I love this story to much to have you update every 2 weeks. Or is it one week? I dont know but it felt like a long ass time.
I love this story, you are so funny! lmao, update soon, all my love-Andrea
Reviewer: SpaCullen (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 2
I'm glad to see their relationship growing!
Reviewer: kms1979 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 2
That DID move things along nicely! Bella freaked out a bit too much for me but she totally redeemed herself there. Yeah!
Reviewer: Augustus Snodgrass (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 2
Gettting lost on roadtrips only makes them better! Cute Edward. Can't wait for the next bit...
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