Reviewer: absmw1618 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 2
great chapter, i really love this story!
i cant 't wait to read more :)
Reviewer: kal0797 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 4: Attempted Murder & DDR
This version of Edward and Bella is absolutely scary in a hilarious way. I'm afraid they're going to kill each other before they give each other a chance. Can't wait to see where this goes.
Reviewer: Esme76 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 2
God I'm so sad to find no new chapters I read it all fucking day lol I soooo look forward to an uipdste
Reviewer: Esme76 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 18: Dirty deeds & Dr. Fuck Me
Dr. Fuck ME mmmmhmmm YUMMY!!!!!
Reviewer: Stephy B (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 2
Loved it...and will continue to love it I am sure (I love that he tripped over her ass....priceless lol)
Thank you so much for writing and please update soon! :)
Reviewer: Esme76 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 15: Cockblocks & Perfect spots
This is pretty fuktastic and I've been reading it on my crackberry all day at work I love it!
Reviewer: pixiekat (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 2
"we just fit" That about sums it up, doesn't it? Bella & Edward's reaction to The Kiss was pretty much what I expected, slightly awkward but coming back to themselves. And I loved the boyfriend/footsie banter, no scratch that I LOVE all their banter! And Bella's "fantasy fucking playlist"...tease much(Closer is one of my favs) Even when they were fighting I knew they would work it out. When Edward said ""We're not lost, just...misplaced" I damn near fell out of my chair! How typically male of him. Snuggletime at the hotel was bliss & those feather-light kisses were to die for. *sigh*
The Hug was the perfect ending of their road trip.
Sometimes I wonder how these 2 can be so dense, but I guess neither one of them want to ruin their hard fought freindship if the feelings aren't mutual.(*snorts* little do they know)
Fantastic chapter, but you never disappoint & I <3 you! Beautifully written & pure pleasure to read! MWAH!!
Reviewer: iyaaan (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 2
duuuude you have to update soon. i have to read the next chapter!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 2
That was great! Though I'm kinda sad to be caught up cause now I have to wait for more! :)
Reviewer: lilymagilly (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 2
Okay, so i have not reviewed this story yet, although it is one of my favorites that i keep checking for updates, and i feel kinda guilty. So i wanted to let you know how much i love it!! You have such a hilarious sense of humor!! i am like constantly laughing hysterically for like 10 minutes at a time after certain scenes. I know this was kinda farther back, but after jasper started going out with alice and emmett just kept staring and shaking his head at him, i was literally like doubled over in laughter, and still chuckle if i ever think of it lol. maybe thats a little weird but whatever haha.
anyway, i love the progression between bella and edward, and how there are all these things between them that show they are meant to be together. I'm really happy with the way you made them first get to know each other, and not fall in love immidiately. Even though i dont like edward being with anyone besides bella, i liked how you included that girl adrian, same with bella and the airplane guy.
Now, about this chapter, i loved the kiss, and i love the way bella intiated the others at the hotel. i'm glad they arn't playing it off as nothing serious and ignoring the sparks, and even though they won't actually mention it now, it seems it was very significant for both of them. sooo i cant wait for an update to see how their relationship changes now! fantasticccc job so far, and i am extremely excited for the rest!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
Great!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois
Fantastic!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 18: Dirty deeds & Dr. Fuck Me
Loved it!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 17: Speedo Ads & Midnight Plans
Great!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 16: Airplane hunks & Store chumps
Another great chapter!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 15: Cockblocks & Perfect spots
Great!
Reviewer: cullenbabygirl (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 2
Funniest chapter ever!! Denial anyone? I'm just sayin'....
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 14: Grumpy, Frumpy & the Pee-Pee Police
Fantastic!
Reviewer: ilovesrpattz (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 2
Ok so I've read all of this in the last day and a half, ergo it is my first time reviewing! But I rate it 10 every time! I seriously did not like Bella in the beginning - I thought she was completely unrational! But I must say I am warming to her.. And Edward is soooo arrogant but equally cute and charming! I'm also so happy that Charlie and him get along, and that he gets along ok with Jake too!
I think your writing is excellent by the way! It's perfectly written and so humourous! Seriously, I just keep cracking up reading it with all the situation comedy and as well the with the phrases all the characters come out with! Or the way they think.. They're all so loveable!
Can't wait for the next update! Yaaaaaay! X
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 12:11 AM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown
That was great!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2009 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 13: Fairy dust & Bubble butts
Fantastic!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 09:48 PM · On: Outtake 2: Operation: Stranded
Loved it!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 2
That was SO wonderful!
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 1
Great!
Reviewer: tre621 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 2
I LOVE this story and I can't wait to see what other adventeures they go through. Keep writitng!!!
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