Reviewer: Twi lover 21 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You
I'm so glad they're getting somewhere. Good chapter. Well written. The song for it was perfect. It just fit the chapter so well when I listened to it. Great job.
Reviewer: Twi lover 21 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You
I'm so glad they're getting somewhere. Good chapter. Well written. The song for it was perfect. It just fit the chapter so well when I listened to it. Great job.
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You
I actually made a huge, happy SIGH when I finished reading!! I can picture him so clearly, playing for her...hair all a mess, eyes intense, that damned jawline of his....gah...I dream about that jawline!! And having her sit near him within kissing range was genius.!!! And playing the song she loves...hie is a romantic, courting man!! Wonder if he realizes it yet? :)
I love how Bella is keeping their new thing private from her friends. She's clutching it t her chest like she's in 4th grade, and it's a valentine from THAT boy. :)
This update was "epic win", as the kids say these days. :))))))))
Reviewer: accsmom (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You
oh hell.. yum yum yum.
Reviewer: green-eyed storywritter (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You
I want a kiss from Edward!
Reviewer: slayerjules (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You
Finally. I half thought Bella might have been walking in on Edward with the skanky teacher. Though I'm sure there will be some angst to come. Hanging for next week when you post next chapter....hopefully.
Reviewer: readeronly (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You
aaahhhh, what a sweet chapter!! looking forward to the next =)
Reviewer: 1breezybri (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You
That was SO INCREDIBLY WORTH THE WAIT!
I was holding my breath the entire piano scene until the end...and I love how they are being very mature about the whole thing and not doubting everything like most of the other fics I read.
Beautiful.
Reviewer: klw10682 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You
That was a good kiss!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter. This is one of my favorite stories on here!
Reviewer: crazyj9girl (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You
All I have to say is AMAZING>>>
Reviewer: espeinaz (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You
LOVE IT! It would have been great to see EPOV, especially when re-learning the composition.
Reviewer: tattoochic911 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You
MAN! I LOVE THIS STORY! This chapter was awesome, although they all are. I can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Melba87 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You
Beautiful.
Reviewer: candycane323 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You
So sweet. It's about time Edwella!
Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You
Eek! Yes! More kissing! This is excellent! I hope they figure out where they want to go with this soon...it's stressing both of them out. But eek! Kissing!
Reviewer: cullenbabygirl (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You
YEEEEESSSSSS!!!!!!
Reviewer: VagitarianVamp (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 2: Bitches & Bear Hugs
oh my god this is fantastic, are u really a beginer writer?
Reviewer: crazyj9girl (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 18: Dirty deeds & Dr. Fuck Me
i have never laughed so hard from a story .. I love DR FUCK ME
Reviewer: crazyj9girl (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 1
this has to be one of the funniest stories i have ever read... this is surely moving up to be one of my favorite fanfictions..
Reviewer: sol cullen (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 2
I love this history is just fantastic !!!!!!!! And your Bella is great she has attitude , hope that they realize that they are made for each other soon and thanks they finally kiss she can't never regret dat:D he is after all Edward Cullen!!!!!Great chapter i can't wait to see what happen when they have to face up to the inquisition is going to be so mach fun!!!!!!!!!!!! Sorry about my inglish is just not my lenguage but i really want review your history!
Reviewer: ldybug1701 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 2
I definitely laughed my ass off. I thought that stuff with her peeing in the woods was hilarious.
Reviewer: ldybug1701 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 1
I can't believe I forgot to add this to my favorites. I have been waiting forever for updates and it is my fault. I'm glad I decided to investigate. That was such a fabulous chapter. Edward has been so cute all through the vacation. I am loving the road trip.
Reviewer: crazyj9girl (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 12:43 AM · On: Chapter 4: Attempted Murder & DDR
great chapter.. really funny :)
Reviewer: Twi lover 21 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 20: Road Trippin' Pt. 2
I love this story. It's great. I was laughing so hard through most of it. This is beautifully written. I wish I had more to say, but I'm kinda speechless at how good this story is. (That doesn't happen often, so you should be proud.)
I absolutely love your Bella and Edward. They are so different than I any other Bella and Edward duo that I've read, and they just make me smile.
Thank you for making Bella and Jacob's relationship the way it is. I hate stories where Jacob always gets in the way, and I like that you made him and Edward have a friendly relationship.
This chapter...I think is now my favorite chapter. I mean, nothing can beat someone getting smacked in the ass by a stick in the forest in a town called Sisters. I loved that part. And this part- “Gotta piss, gotta piss,” I chanted, waddling as fast as I could into the forest. “Ohhh, shit, gotta piss.” -had me howling. There are so many others, but I can't type them all.
You are an incredible writter, and I seriously can not wait till your next update.
Reviewer: kal0797 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Outtake 1: The Mission
I love how devious the gang is!!!
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