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Reviews For Breaking Bella
Reviewer: belami (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You

i waited all last night with baited breathe for this update. Once again you don't disappoint. I loved the retelling of the Mike Newton take down and also Rosile's response of "is he disabled" never suited him better. Didn't hear from any of the others in this chapter so i can only assume that thye will have a get together and things will be adressed.

Also you must make Roslie visit Forks in the summer, because her and Mike would be a blast.

Until next week...it seems so long away....can you please update sooner as sitting on edge of chair and will stay this way until update comes through.

 

Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You

I am totally addicted to this story!  I miss it so much between chapter updates - I freaking can not WAIT to see what happens next!  I am SO glad they are finally hooking up...but I have a bad feeling we haven't seen the last of professor skankenstein :(  She's going to make a hot mess, I'm guessing!  Are we at least going to get a little more sweetness like this before it all goes to hell? :]

Reviewer: doowee (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You

thi9s.is.so.good.amazing.stupendous.bravo!

Reviewer: justinsgrl22 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You

OH you are SOOOO awesome...what a perfect chapter! They are so precious and I love how they're falling in love....it's so good!

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 2: Bitches & Bear Hugs

Bella is kind of a no nonsense type of girl isn't she?  Couldn't even crack a smile for sex on legs!

Reviewer: daniellemariecullen (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You

i loved loved loved this chapter! im glad that things are finally moving along and that they are acknowledging that they like each other and i loved their little walk. the ending was amazing and i thought that it was sweet that he finally played for her!

great job as always bb. cant wait for the next chapter! :)

Reviewer: VagitarianVamp (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 2

YES finally JACOB is here!!!! can not tell you how long i waited for him to get in. lol

Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 8: Sex Changes & Eiffel 65

whaaaaaaaaaatt....

Reviewer: Simonelecochon (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You

I loved this chapter. I've read it twice now. The pace at which their relationship is progressing feels perfect. I like how they are both unsure of exactly what is happening, but are enjoying it none the less. I hope that next chapter has a little EPOV for us. This story is AWESOME!!!

Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You

Holy crow that was a good kiss! Nice build up of tension. So are they going to hide out or go public?

Reviewer: femke (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You

You're amazing!!! I've been waiting for this chapter all week and as soon as I saw it I got SOOOO excited! You didnt disappoint! This is the best twilight fic i've read (and i've read a lot of them....) Keep it coming!:)

Reviewer: fellowsandfokies (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You

YAY!!!! Bravo!!! Awesome Chapter.. can't wait to see what happens next! I get butterflies just reading about Bella's butterflies - LOL  :P

I'm loving this story. You're very talented. Keep up the good work :)

Reviewer: kms1979 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You

Yeah! More progress! I can't wait to see what the friends say about all this!

Reviewer: Bones_Rocks (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You

Awesome!

Reviewer: Azrielstar (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You

awwwwww

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 1: Tutors & 31's.

Aww, well Edward's day wasn't all that bad!  Guess we have to wait to meet his tutor!

Reviewer: dsccc (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You

Ooooohhhhh intentional kissing. Exciting! I love Angela and Rose! I am quite suprised they let Bella off so easy! 

Reviewer: ldybug1701 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You

Wow, that was intense.  I think I was holding my breath as I read it.  I can't wait to find out what you have in store for them next.

Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You

OMG I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

it is by far the best story I hav read... you want to know why? because you have done an amazing job at making this story so realistic! I can feel my self twisting and turning on the emotional rollercoaster that you have Bella and Edward on! I wish that my life  was like this. it is amazing and being patient and waiting for edward and bella to realize their feelings was the best thing ever! I would do it all over again ...

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS !!! I;m so excited :D

Reviewer: gillies (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You

AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SQUEAL!! **SQUEEZE SOMETHING CUTE!!!!!!*** EEEEEEEEEEEEE!!

 

Awesome Awesome AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You

Loved it!

Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Outtake 1: The Mission

Finally! yess! okay yess!

okayyy..so dont hate me for not reveiwing the last seven chapters..i just didnt like it that much lol..and i dont reveiw if i dont like something..because i feel bad about saying something mean.

BUT THIS! was amazing..i see it now..kinda..like where your going with this..i had no idea what the point of this was if they were just gonna hate each other..and thats the only reason i kept reading..was to find out where your goinng with this..and now i guess i kinda see it..their gonna be pushed together.. i love it!

 

Reviewer: Lilith19 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You

BEST CHAPTER EVER !!!

Reviewer: Artie (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You

Butterflies happening here too!  I love this story and that kiss was totally hot.  FINALLY they're starting to see what everyone else knew all along.

Reviewer: hmogburn (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You

Yummy :)

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