Reviewer: wazzgud (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You
ahhhhhhhhhh. update ive been waiiiiittttting for this for chapters on end. JEEZ. fucking update. lol. good story by the way .
Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 13: Fairy dust & Bubble butts
loveddd this!
Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You
AWWWW, so cute! Good chapter. Update soon.
Reviewer: pinkylove102 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You
awww it so adorable i was smiling the whole time
Reviewer: VagitarianVamp (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 19: Interrogations & Menage a trois
oh my gooodddd, i LOVED this chapter!!!! my fav part was when bella smelled Carlisle...damn that was funny. keep up the good work, i adore your writing
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 8: Sex Changes & Eiffel 65
Hahaha! I've got to say, Edward has excellent instincts! Sexy dancing all night long, followed by drinking too much and a not so subtle seduction. Had he taken her up on it, things would have been sooo much worse in the morning!
Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 1
Yay! you fixed it!
ahahha..omg..that picture!
Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You
Just when I thought you couldn't get any better you have to pull out a piano scene on me. I'm not going to lie to you, I totally squealed. You just bring that out of me. And you mentioned me in your authors note! I'm totally shocked you did but thank you. I'm glad you got it together and finished up your chapter. Told you that it would be fantastical no matter what. I think what I like about this story so much is how realistic you write it. You didn't have Edward and Bella hook up within ten minutes of knowing each other, you let there be a slow progression. And even know, after they kissed, you didn't throw them in bed together. All your characters, their emotions, hell even the setting is veru much... "real" life. I just love that about this story.
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You
NOOOOOOO!!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!! PLEEEEEEEEEASE!!!!!
Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Outtake 2: Operation: Stranded
I loved this!
Reviewer: twibrarian88 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You
Woo hoo! I've waited a long time to see Bella this flustered! And that he played for her......so sweet.
I'm happy every time I see an update.
Reviewer: alzzu (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You
I'm a new reader (I've got a cold and hence plenty of free time) and I read this whole thing today. Wow. I'm almost enjoying being sick.
I'm loving your Jacob-Bella and Edward-Alice relationships. Actually, I'm pretty much loving your take on all of the relationships, and all the highly entertaining banter in your story has made my day a million times better. Thank you for that!
Please, please, please ease my misery even more and let Bella and Edward take all that shameless flirting to the next step -- or maybe up an entire ladder while you're at it. Please?
Reviewer: RosalieAliceluvr (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You
Awww! what a great ending!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 7: Stink Bombs & Fishnet Thongs
Well, I bet Edward's eyes are opened a little wider now!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You
This was a great chapter. One of my faves ... so far!
I loved that they both needed to go for a walk -- and then, ran into each other. I was intersting to see Bella struggling with her feelings. I didn't anticipate that.
Rose and Bella's lunch/movie night was great. They have such a incredible friendship.
Loved that he wanted to see her and he played for her. And more kissing -- YES!!
I can't wait to see what happens next!!!
Reviewer: breaking my face (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You
toe curling! 25/10
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You
YES! Whilst I totally enjoyed the girl-bonding time Bella had with Rose, I really loved Edward setting up the piano performance for Bella after work :)
Reviewer: pixiekat (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You
*happy dance* This chapter couldn't have gone better! Edward & Bella are both moony-eyed and a bit uncertain...sooo sweet. And Edward finally played for her, and the kiss(es) This melted me on the spot:
"Does it matter?" I replied.
Say it matters.
"Yes," he said immediately, bringing one of his hands up to my face and cupping my cheek. I exhaled heavily, not realizing I was holding my breath. "But not right now."
Heaven indeed! MWAH!
Reviewer: yanxxx (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 12:14 AM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You
Tiff! This CHAPTER IS SOOOOO SQUEEEEEEEWORTHY!
*squeeeee!*
sigh.. finally! :D I'm really happy about the ending, I'd read it too many times, and it makes me squee some more...!
Thanks Tiff, you're the best! :D
Reviewer: Doomed Youth (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You
ahhhhh
love it.
as usual.
i can't waittttttttttttttt to find out what happens when rose and angela find out..
not to mention.. jake...
Reviewer: simplicity (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You
EEP! This was SO SO SO worth the wait...there have been kisses, but THIS was
"the" kiss, the one that made her toes curl...loved it...perfect! Thanks for your hard work!
Reviewer: valieelovesspinkiee (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You
AHH! I can't think of anything to say.. just.. AHHH! AHHHHH! (More screams and then Val faints.) lol Great update! Beautiful!
Reviewer: seritadawn (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You
Its about damn time those two got together....I'm dying to see what happens next!!!
Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 12: DID & D-O-G Pt. 1
I loved this but the bandwidth exceeded..so i couldnt see any of what they said.but i kinda put it together. :]
Author's Response: photobucket is a POS and likes to randomly exceed the bandwidth, even though I don't even UPLOAD anything onto that account anymore. Anyway, I changed out the links now so they work. You can go back and read if you want, or not...either way. haha. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2009 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 6: Vagina's & 2Pac
Oh, I feel cheated! I couldn't see the comments in the my space page boxes! And I know you said not to hate on Adrian, but I kinda do.
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