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Reviewer: xxDevil18xx (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

Wow, how did I know this was going to happen. Its a bit cliche, but I would have yelled at you if she didn't walk in on them.

Yes, he is extremly fucked, Bella's tough shit, she isn't forgiving him any time soon. I have a feeling this is where Jace comes in, clearly Adrian's pretty much outta the picture, Edward probably doesn't want to deal with her after what happened.

I really liked this chapter definently not my favorite, but I liked it. I can't wait for the next chapter, I bet it'd be good.

I hope you update soon! I love this story so much, =( please update soon  

Reviewer: ktmac (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

i can't believe you're leaving me with that! Oh my, what a cliff hanger. I respect your decision though, and i just hope you finish the story sooner than later. Good luck with writing!

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

Holy shit! Why o why did she have to walk in? I really hope that he is able to get her back and she will really listen to him. I know what he did wasn't really right but that probably was the only way for him to figure it out. Ok, so I'm not going to hate you. I will wait patiently until you have it finished, just please finish because this story is just fuckawesome!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

Poor stupid Edward, he knew inside just didn't want to admit it to himself.  Now he is royally screwed.  I guess your readers will have to wait until you resume posting to see how he and his friends will plan how to get back into Bella's good graces and melt her now icy heart towards him again.  Really have enjoyed this story from the first chapter with the mess up about tutoring date and time.  The sexual tension and animosity between Bella and Edward from the start. Then subtle change into friendship and then into deeper feelings, neither wants to admit.  So take whatever time you need to finish the story.  I'll be here when you want to start posting additional chapters to finish the story.  Just remember you have fans out here, who have been with you for a long time, and loved the characters as you have portrayed them here as much as you do.  Take care, will hear from you whenever.

Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

What a great chapter... then to have to wait for your haitus..  Ah well... it will be that much better for the waiting.  Take all the time you need.  This is a great story and should not be rushed.

Reviewer: superfay (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

i do love a bit of angst

i am going to be selfish and say i hope it doesn't take you too long

loving the story

keep up the good work

:)

xx

Reviewer: Brits23 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

:( fucking adrian. Fucking edward, not knowing that bellas the one. Fucking fuck. :(
You take your time to finish the story. If people don't like it, fuck 'em.

Do you think theres an award for saying fuck the most times in a review?
I'm posting tomorrow and then ill meet you in the robhole. (totally think that's what we should call our hideout btw)
Excellent and fucking depressing chapter bb! :D I said it again! HA!

Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

omg! how could you leave us hanging in here?? huhuhuhuhuhu ='(

although i can see that it seems that you've already made up your mind not to post for a while..i still feel sad about it. this is one of the fics that i've been looking forward for updates especially with the recent turn of events. anyways, i'm not gonna dwell on it since i'm sure whatever we say, you still won't change your mind.

that emma person was a surprise.. and i guess her advice did make sense for someone like edward who's in denial and who can't figure out his feelings. it sucks that bella had to see that. i mean, what was she doing there anyway? she doesn't have a class there right? i wonder how will edward make up for this since bella's personality here is so stubborn and hard-headed. they were doing so well.. darn. then this shit happens. i was hoping when adrian said that she figured edward would have just forgotten about it, that edward would let it go. because from the way adrian said it, it seems it wouldn't have been that big of a deal. but edward just had to make sure.. *sigh*

i hope it won't be too long for them to patch things up. please? please? and i hope it wouldn't be 75 yrs before we hear from you. hehe..=)

Reviewer: La Jodi (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

Well, just when they were finally headed somewhere.

I have to say I think the notion that Edward would need to compare kisses is a little off.  I mean you show us his reaction to Bella, and yet he still needs to make sure that this other girl doesn't compare.  It just doesn't quite add up, for me.

I really like your writing and sense of humor which is why I have stuck with this story.  It's really frustrating to never have anything really erupt between these two.

I don't know, I'm just feeling kinda on the fence right now...

Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

oooh, excellent chapter!

Reviewer: mrsn (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

We all knew this chapter was coming didn't we......I had a bad feeling after your a/n about this chapter...to the point I almost didn't read it so I wouldn't be left with this cliffy, instead would be left with the happiness that was the last chapter.  Oh well, too late now.  This is one of my favorite stories, so I'm pissed for purely selfish reasons that you are taking a break, but I understand.  Will be eagerly waiting for the next update whenever that may be........

Reviewer: Andip1 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

That chapter was wow! Hope to hear from you sooner rather than later. Will be looking out for your return.

Reviewer: Classical Vamp (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

I understand your need to finish before you keep posting, but for the sake of my sanity please go as fast as possible.  But not too fast so it's not good.  Just the right amount of speed that will result in a conclusion soon.

Reviewer: eanmkm1961 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

this is my favorite story!  it makes me laugh out loud as i read it. i will miss it until a new chapter comes again.

  please know you have many readers on pins and needles waiting for these two, to get together!

 

                                 thanks

Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

ah man...ending it there and then a hiatus...damn.  I'll wait but it would make me happier if you reconsidered :)

Reviewer: PositivelyDazzled (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

I hate this word 'hiatus' - I especially hate this word 'indefinite'. But I will be here when you update again... I love this story too much to not be ;)

As always, a great chapter... Not really loving the Adrian business, but it needed to be resolved, so I'll deal :)

Indefinite or not... will anxiously await an update... until then ;)

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

Well it looks like Edward has created a nice little mess for himself.  How's he going to get out of this? 

I'm not sure, but I'm sure you are, so I'll wait until you feel like writing this again...

I know you said indefinate...

Reviewer: Amillyna (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

Aww man! I totally understand you wanting to take a break...I can't imagine the pressure of real life and then all the wonderful writing you authors do for us...but couldn't you have left us on something other than the worst cliffhanger EVER! AHHH! Not fair lol. I kind of hope when you come back that Bella continued to tell him to F-off. He didn't even think about this chick for 3 weeks and then he had to kiss her again just to be sure...your Edward's an asshole and he should suffer. Good luck with life! Hope to hear from you again eventually! :)

Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

looks like Edward has gotten himself into a world of shit...lol...can you make it better for him??? Please???

Reviewer: emmabelle (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You

Oh My God, best kiss ever! I love, love, love your story! Please update again soon, I can't wait to find out how it's going to progress.

Reviewer: jpoopy (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You

loved this chapter!!  can't wait for the update on sunday

Reviewer: Maximista (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You

Jasper would not be pleased with this new development.

I, however, am - for a number of reasons, which I will list out...because...I can:

1. You captured the realistic uncertainty that comes with every relationship that's just starting out - re: Edward calling her his 'buddy' because he's not entirely sure what she is to him at this point; Bella questioning the kisses they shared while also avoiding talking about it with anyone else because she's not entirely sure about how she feels about him yet.

2. The interactions between them was sweet, in the non sickening way that makes you want to skim over and/or close the window entirely.

3. You allowed Bella to be vulnerable but not in that stupid woe is me, 'he-wouldn't-love-me' crap that is canon Bella because that shit pisses me the fuck off.

And finally, another reason why I am pleased with this chapter:

(Which has nothing to do with E/B but I am self-indulgent and therefore...) Rosalie fucking Hale is my favourite character in the entire series because she's a fierce bitch (and I'm pretty sure I've already ranted about this to you BUT...) she had so much potential for so much complexity but was forever ruined by SM's inability to properly develop her characters. And *you* wrote Rosalie like the fiece loveable bitch that she is. Therefore, extra love for that. /endRosalielovethoughnotreallybecauseIlovehersomethingfierce. (And I just realized how many different combinations I put the words 'love' and 'fierce' into - one track mind much?)

This was lovely. jsyk I won't be able to read the next chapter for another week also because of my traveling. Sad.

So there's that. I actually left a review that reviewed your story for once! /proud.

<3

Reviewer: alexis52 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You

i just read one of the comments and you said that you are GOING updating on sunday................ OMG!!!!!!!! I FUCKING LOVE YOU



Author's Response:

You probably won't after you read my A/N. lol

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You

Amazing. :D

Reviewer: Rosalie_Hale (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 21: Fallin' For You

wowo i just happen to stumble across this story when i was searching for something to read the other day and i am damn glad i found it. Its well written, the story line is great and the pair interations are awesome

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