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Reviewer: Sophia (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

OH FUCKING SHIT !

Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

Great chapter! We'll miss you!

Reviewer: justinsgrl22 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

Well...I knew this was coming, but man it sucked. I AM sorry you're going to take your "indefinite" break but I am encouraged that you have a plan to finish this. Please finish it though because I hate to think that I spent all this time reading your story when I should have been cleaning my house or something and then I never find out how it ends. I WILL stick with you though because

a. This story IS really good and I love the way you write the characters

b. Because you seem to think everyone is going to jump ship and I hate to be predictable.

See you around...eventually!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

Uuuggg now I see what you mean about ending it the way you did...sigh...I guess I will just have to wait until you finish this story..but know this, I WILL wiat for the ending...It may be hard at times but I want to see this finish and believe I will be exstatic when you do decide to post again. =)

Edward will just have to stay in his fucked up state until then....

Will also be lookin for your new stuff as well..

Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

Ohman..! I really didnt expect that to happen

but i loved it

Looking foward to reading the rest, eventually i guess :]

but sersiouly i kinda like that your doing that

means fast updates once you start posting..i think?

ohwell whatever ill happily wait. because i love this story.

Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

Okay I don't even know how to respond to this posting. I'm beyond pissed that you think so little of US your fans to post something like this. We have no problems waiting but to say :

1. you are going on an indefinite leave JUST from this story is such bullshit! It's smacks in the face all of the fans that promote/pimp your story to the fandom.

2. You leave a cliffie like this - give no sort of resolution???

3. Your leave isn't from writing entirely JUST this story??? WTF

I am severely disappointed in this is how you choose to get this message out.

Author's Response:
Sorry you feel that way, but you really dissected it and made it into something that it's not. I'm not going to apologize for what I said and the way I said it. I can't please everybody, apparently. I'm ALWAYS focused on BB; I'd like to pay some attention to my other stories that I'm currently in the process of writing, and there's nothing wrong with that. I'm going to write BB at the pace I want to write it and I shouldn't be made to feel rushed. This is not unheard of, dude.

Reviewer: RMCC (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

You have horrible timing, my friend. You should have taken your hiaus a chapter soon. I was all excited at the end of that chapter. Now I'm annoyed. Not in a negative, I'm-criticizing-you kind of way, just annoyed at the timing. I have your story on alert, so I look forward to you coming back whenever you're ready, though I sincerely hope you don't keep us waiting too long. :)

Reviewer: Twi lover 21 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

I'm sad to hear about your indefinite hiatus from this story. It's one of the best fanfics I've read in a long time. Know this, I will definatly keep reading this story as soon as you post. (I couldn't just leave without seeing how all this drama turns out.)

About the chapter.....Edward! What has he done. I really wish that Emma would have just told him to ditch Adrian and run to Bella. Btw, I like this Emma charactrer, but she kinda reminds me of Alice. But, I guess it was good for Edward to talk to someone that he so close to. I think he just needed a good venting session.

As always, your writing is incredibally beautiful, and I'm sure that when you do come back from your hiatus, you'll bring us something amazing.

See you eventually! :)

Reviewer: Nightchill (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

This was a pretty harsh cliffhanger to leave the us with, But I hop that your hiatus wont last to long...I'm looking forward to see this story on the most recent list again.

Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

Yeah, Edward messed up big time. I knew he was going to get busted!

I hope you have fun on your hiatus. Hopefully you will be able to continue your mad genius writing skills and keep cranking out chapters to Breaking Bella. It's one of my fave fics and I hope that you will come back soon...because that is one evil cliffie you left us with. I can't wait to read your otehr stories!

Reviewer: dandiegoose (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

I can't wait for this story to finish. I want to know the end of the story so you don't have to worry about losing me as a reader.

I'm glad that Edward figured out that he wanted Bella, but I think that she'll try to have a thing with the airplane guy before she realizes that it was always Edward. Poor them. =]

Good luck with getting the story finished.

Reviewer: myreligioniscullenism (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

i am crying i really want to noe what happens i cant wait till sunday please if possible send it to me early i understand if u cant but i cant wait!!!

Reviewer: Natsu2 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

Tiff, you know we love you!! I'm not going anywhere. :)

I think you I love you more and more after every chapter I read. As soon as I read, "And I sweeeear..." I knew who you were singing!!! Oh!! Remember, So Much In Love? **reminscing** This takes me back to 9th or 10th grade!! I even got their autograph. lol Yes, I love the 90's. :)

What a way to end this chapter!! Dun dun duuuuuuuuuuuuuun. And how random is Emma? Or is it not random at all....? Hmmmm..... And why was Bella walking into THAT classroom? Was it a set-up? So many questions!!!

I can't wait for the next chapter to roll out. Take your time, chica. I'll be at the forum waiting for ya. :)

Reviewer: RiRi (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

NOOOOOOOOOOOO!

Reviewer: hobardi (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

Oh, angsty twist! I can't wait for this story to come back from hiatus! I'll keep reading when you have new chapters up, this has a serious grip on me...

Reviewer: kms1979 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

I guess I should have seen this coming. I guess I just forgot about Adrian. I can't really fault him for kissing Adrian but I do. AARGH! Cliffy!

I'm sad to hear you are going on hiatus. Please don't be too long. I adore this story and wait for it to be updated. I respect that you gotta do what you gotta do but don't forget your fans who clearly love this story. I know I'll be here waiting! :)

Reviewer: stefdeal (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

Indefinite is such a sad, sad word. Better a later, fantastic update than a quick, awful one. Thanks for the warning, at least!

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

Great chapter!

Edward screwed up big time. He's going to have to work really hard to earn her trust back.

I wonder what he'll do and if he'll go to Alice for help.

Please update soon?

Reviewer: skyblue5580 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

I knew that was going to happen, dang cliffhangers! I want to hit Edward on the head with a frying pan. Why did he have to kiss her to figure it out? And Bella, why was she even walking in the room. Grrr, plus she is so stubborn. It’s going to take her forever to listen to him.

I’m so sad you are going away for awhile, but I understand if you feel you need to. I’m sorry if you will lose readers, but I can say for sure you will not lose me. When I the story update emails for ‘Breaking Bella’ I get giddy. That will not change if it is in a week or 6 months. So write, enjoy and F all the people who don’t understand that people who are sharing their stories here are doing it at their own free will. We as reader should be nothing but supportive, not negative when an author needs to do something that’s best for them and their writing.

Reviewer: Simonelecochon (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

Do what you gotta do. I'm not going anywhere, I love this story too much to give up now. I'll wait and promise not to pester you.

Reviewer: jonjessie (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

I just discovered this story this week. I have really enjoyed it so far. I do hope you finish it, but I have faith because of Alice and her visions that Bella is his soulmate. Hopefully, we will hear from you sooner rather than later!

Reviewer: jennmo (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2009 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

you're mean...to leave a cliff hanger like this and then say "see you all eventually, I guess"!!!

Reviewer: MarathonKeyGirl (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

Adrian is such a fucking whore! "I know what I want", yeah, well how about you date someone your own age you piece of shit hag. Great chapter. And fuck Edward too, while we're at it.

Author's Response:
lmfao! just...lmfao all over this review. thank you <3

Reviewer: Tinuviel (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

Ohhh, nooo I knew it would go that way....... poor Bella and Edward's such an ass for needing to kiss Adrian to figure out his real feelings!!!

And of course I am sad, that you are not going to update for awhile, but I will just sit back and wait until you'll come back... :-)

Thank you very much for sharing your story with us and I really hope you will come back!

Sarah

PS: This chapter was still great, also you had to end it like this! ;-)

Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

Aaaaah!! Ok. Bella, you are an idiot. Edward, you are a bigger idiot. And curse you Emma for messing with Edward's head and putting the dumbass idea to kiss Adrian there in the first place!! Ugh. I am definitely upset about this. I am not going anywhere though. I will stick with this story until it is finished. I hate not knowing how a story ends and this one is just too damn good to pass up. Anyone who stops reading this because they can't wait for a few months is out of their damn minds. Yeah. Ok. Rant over now. I follow you on Twitter by the way and if you would post your progress I would so appreciate it. Y'know, just say when you finish a chapter or something so I know you haven't had Bitchella and Dumbassward abducted by brain sucking aliens or something equally as blasphemous. Thanks.

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