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Reviews For Breaking Bella
Reviewer: wandering-home (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

Well congratulations on finding the absolute worst place to end a chapter.

See you whenever.



Author's Response:

yeah yeah. i know.

Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 01:32 AM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

What a cliffie! Looking forward to the rest whenever it can come

Reviewer: Defiance (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

*grabs comfy pillows, sleeping back, coffee, other essentials*

*superglues self to story*

I'll be here when you come back! I'm a shitty reviewer but I do love the story and I'm really interested to see how it goes. I hope your break is awesome, and I'll keep an eye out for your other stories!

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

Geez, Edward, how you could possibly think that was a good "test" to run, the boy has more than just Stats issues :S

guess that's the last for a while though, thank god for email alerts :)

Reviewer: Belledward (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 1: Tutors & 31's.

Hey! So I just wanted to inform you that I'm putting a link to your story on my LJ. I've listed the title and you as the author. I love this story so much that I NEED people to read it, so I'm sending them here. Hope you don't mind! If you do mind, email me at yang11@up.edu. You ROCK so hard.



Author's Response:

Of course it's not a problem, silly.  Thanks for the pimping. <3

Reviewer: Belledward (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

= O I had this dream! I swear it! It's even written down! And the pain that I felt when it happened to me was present in Bella. I felt it. You wrote this so well. So, so, so well.

Oh. My. God. I resent him. I bet Alice saw this. Fucking Edward. Fucking fuck! *sigh* I feel Bella's pain. I fucking love this. Best story fucking ever!

= [ I hope you find your peace! <3 I heart you so hard!

Reviewer: nicoleyoo (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

woww,

i actual cant get over how good this has been so far,

well done,

kudos to you

Reviewer: Kairi J (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 7: Stink Bombs & Fishnet Thongs

Quick question. Did you attend san francisco? You seem to know a lot of buildings and the area and it would be pretty difficult to know what your talking about without knowing, you know. :)

I like this. It makes me feel like less of a loser for disliking anything math related. I totally understand Bella's initial dislike for Edward, because as irrational it is, I feel the same way about Ryan Seacrest. lol

 



Author's Response:

yeeeees, I did, and I miss it like a fat kid on a diet misses cake.  I hope to get my ass back there once I finish enough units to transfer back.

LOLOL @ ryan seacrest.  how random! i love it.

Reviewer: dazzledbride (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

Of course, as much as I don't want you to go on hiatus, I understand completely. Regardless, you won't lose this reader.

Reviewer: letsgetGRAPHIC (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

Alright so obviously I have to hate where you've left this for an indefinite period of time. However, I'll still be reading whenever you come back. Good luck with your writing.

Reviewer: wytchwmn75 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

This story is so damn good, I'd wait for an eternity for you to finish if thats what you need. Of course I can't believe it ended w/that particular cliffie but it was great. Boys! Always have to make things so difficult. With that said, take care of yourself, and I for one will be here when you get back.

Reviewer: Zoey0223 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

*sigh* Men... What can you do? 

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

stupid Edward.

Reviewer: valieelovesspinkiee (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

Aww, poor Bella. I'm kinda on the fence though. I'd rather Edward be sure about being with someone, cough -Bella- cough. ...than not sure. =)

Loved Jasper's new ringtone than I recognized from that movie, which name escapes me as of right now.. Hrm. And Emmett's dream was awesome. lol Tee-hee.

Well, I respect the indefinite hiatus thing and wish you lots of luck on future chapters on this story and other stories that you'll begin. You're an amazing writer! Also, I want to re-read this fic... Love it so much =)

Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

I support whatever you do. I'm sure you know that. If you need a break to regroup and write, you go ahead and do that. If anyone gives you shit for it, let me know. I have ties to the Russian maffia, ya know. I'll wait however long it will take for you to finish the story to your liking. I just hope everything is alright and nobody pushed with negative comments to make this decision.

Reviewer: youaremyvienna (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

Oh no, of course it was Bella who walked in...I feel so bad for her.  

I am really looking forward to your other stories in the meantime!! 

Thanks for the great chapter, as always.

Reviewer: andi_girl24 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

I freaking love this story.  Your Edward and Bella are great together.  I'm hoping this all gets worked out quickly.  Please update soon!

Reviewer: Chrisstars1 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

Eddie is a dumbass!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Love the story!



Author's Response:

thanks.  hey, whatever happened with the story?  did it get validated?

Reviewer: pippyXYZ (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

I guess I understand. But you have to do what you have to. I'll look out for your other stories. I am very disppointed though. It was getting good, but I guess not for you. If you wanted to spice it up and had no idea as to how you could. All you needed was to asked us. There have been other authors who have asked for help. We are a very opinionated bunch. But would have gladly helped you. I'm guessing your bored with this and want a challenge. Don't stay away to long. We are really attached to this story. Just like it's your bb, it holds a special place in our hearts as well. We look forward to your updates. So don't leave US out in the cold waiting around forever. You owe us at least that much. We didn't have to read or review your work. We felt it was really good and wanted you to finish it. It is your choice and we can't make you do anything you don't want to. I know you will be back, but don't let it be NEXT YEAR. Now I feel very sad. Thank you to what you have given us. And I hope that those other stories can fulfill you. But a warning: DON'T END YOUR OTHER STORIES LIKE THIS or YOU COULD GET A BAD NAME FOR YOURSELF. No one likes it when authors stop midway writing their stories. I know real life takes over sometimes, but you have loyal readers who take time out of their schedules to read your story.

Just my thoughts and feelings. GOODBYE, FOR NOW....  



Author's Response:

...are you kidding me right now?  Okay, I have a lot I could say to this, but I'm choosing to bite my tongue because apparently almost anything I say to anybody will bite me in the ass.  However, let me just say that you should not assume why I'm doing what I'm doing.  If you truly want an explanation, go over to the thread, page 116; my entire explanation as to why I'm going on hiatus is there.  But don't you dare sit there and try to tell ME what I should have done and blippity bloop when that is a completely irrelevant assumption; one you are not even .0000000000001% correct in making.  I'm not ending the goddamn story, I'm going away so I can FINISH it--and NOT because I don't have ideas, because trust me, I know exactly what I want to do and ideas are swarming through my head; I just don't want other people telling me what should happen in my story.

The end.

Reviewer: doowee (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

hmmm i hope it woulod be SOONER

Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

Shit, I knew he would be in trouble. Just didn't have any idea how effed up it would be. Bella would freeze like the arctic. Took her a long time to warm up to him just bec of some scheduling mix up n this one is just well, dumb move for Wardo. What would it take to break her? N how far would he go to make her believe him? I wish you didn't have a life so you could update like before, lol, but since you do, I wish you all the best. Hope you come back soon:) last two chaps are my fave!

Reviewer: slayerjules (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

OMG. I can't believe where you have left the story. Brilliant chapter by the way, and as you have promised to eventually finish it, I will watch and wait. I've enjoyed this story too much to give up on it and hope you feel the same.

 

Reviewer: nowayjose (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

i freakin love this storyyyyyy!!! gah! this ff is getting me through one hell of a rough week! thanks!

 

- ly

Reviewer: factor (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

Ahhh!!! Torture!!! What a place to leave it!! I hope it gets cleared up soon. Your story is soooo good, and I cant wait till you get back to posting, dont go into hiding for too long :) Good luck with everything.

Reviewer: IANticipate (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2009 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 22: Completely Fucked

WOW, what a place to leave the story!

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