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Reviewer: sdfan92 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 10
Wtf!! Way to leave me wanting more!!
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 10
Motherf#@@#$ Seriously!!! WTF?! Please please don't tell me your gonna make me wait so long to find out what happens!!! I think I might die from suspense! Wow he really is a jerk and what about Alice???? Man I don't even know what to say! Alice and Edward! I am.... I dunno whether I wanna cry or scream or punch one of them or giggle!
Reviewer: lostinthought (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 10
oohh interesting. Edward and Alice....I am interested to see wghere this is going
Reviewer: Ammage (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 10
Oh My Word! Was not expecting that AT ALL!!
Loved the update, can't wait for more! x
Reviewer: Lamb4Peace (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 10
Holy Shit.
Reviewer: Rosalice-Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 10
ending it that way was really really good!
lol i love this story :)
Reviewer: adt216 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 10
HOORAY for the update!! But WTF! Totally unexpected little cliffie there. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Reviewer: saranic (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 02:39 AM · On: Chapter 10
Aww, sweet Jasper! So, is it a J/B or E/B story? Hmmmm, can't decide.
What an ass to be making out with Alice, srsly, complete ahole.
Sad stuff about Charlie and Bella.
Reviewer: MaleficentKnits (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 02:29 AM · On: Chapter 10
Been missing you... Edward and Alice? interesting.
Reviewer: ande (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 10
What?!?! Alice and Edward are kissing? Say it ain't so!
Reviewer: hmogburn (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 10
Bella can't be mad. She has NO claim on Edward. And SHE walked away from him. Whether she meant it or not... she was pretty much saying "you mean nothing to me, i'm through with you".
If Edward had dissed and dismissed Bella like that... no one would be mad at her for getting some lip action to get over him.
Double standards are not nice : )
Reviewer: lovestinksyaya (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 10
Great story so far!!
Reviewer: bloodvixen (Anonymous) · Date: May 12, 2009 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 10
damn shit fuck! edward and alice?! update soon love. im enjoying your story!
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 10
WHAT???? you cannot leave me hanging like that! Update soon, PLEASE!
Reviewer: lavish1 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 10
Well, Edward and Alice huh? I wonder how Bella is going to take that one...I know you are busy- just update as you can.
If you think you are busy now, try being a working mom who's still married after 17 years and going to school. It's fulfilling on many levels, but free time is at a premium. That's how you can know how much I like this story. Otherwise, I would spend my free time reading something else!
Reviewer: lavish1 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 9
Just came across your story tonight-am enjoying it so far. Hope your continue writing. As a reader, my favorite thing, next to new chapters of course, is seeing the lovely word NEXT at the bottom of a chapter!
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 9
Wow that a cliffy! So I totally understand time constraints. Happy Writing. I'll be waiting patiently (maybe a little impatiently)
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 01:04 AM · On: Chapter 8
Wow! Sorry you had a hard time writing this chapter. If it makes it better to get yet another review I enjoyed the hell out of it!
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 12:51 AM · On: Chapter 7
He's totally already a hypoctrite regardless :) All to hillarious I am sad I'm nearing the end of the chapters here!
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 6
oooh I like sexin! So what the hell with Jasper (So called best friend) totally called Bella a slut! Why is he so mad? She never cock blocks on him. So not deserved of his anger. In any case. Onward!
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 5
Ha so what happened? I saw her making the connections that she actually wanted to do something other than get laid with Edward....Now that she's rejected him he's realizing there is more to her? This is highly amusing. Nothing like a little rejection to get the less arrogant wheels turning I suppose.
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 4
Wow that was quick! This is going to be interesting. IS that jealousy I'm feelin from Jasper? This is funny. They are definately normal teenagers or what passes for normal these days I guess. Your good at writing this human aspect huh?
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 3
This is gonna be good! I love Edward and Bella absolutely, but them being sex crazed teenagers has a certain flavor to it I must say. I like the Esme soccer mom idea. It fits.
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 2
Damn Bella is well... I'm not sure! They're all into the whole sex drugs and alcohol thing! Crazy. :) Yet amusing.
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 1
Ha Bella is a bad bad girl....For that matter Jasper is a bad boy... oh and by the way who cares what the bronze-haired hottie shows up as, as long as he shows up!
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