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Reviewer: Sarah_Edwards (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 12
at first I didn't know what to think when Alice was mentioned kissing Edward like that...I thought it was Rosalie hahaha...she is a feisty little pixie that one
and the 'i love yous' feeling between E&B are...sudden I guess...does it really happen like that in your opinion?
Reviewer: EmmettIsMyTeddyBear (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 2
"I felt like a fourteen year old girl who had just discovered masturbation." *sigh* Memoriesssss. Edward a whorebag....nice. Can't wait to see what happens at the partay.
Reviewer: EmmettIsMyTeddyBear (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 1
"Jasper Whitlock standards include: a freshly trimmed vagina. And that’s it." Hook. Line. Sinker. I like this guy already. LoL! Your Bella is a fiesty little bitch. My favorite kind. Reading on...
Reviewer: MaleficentKnits (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 12
wow.
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: December 31, 2009 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 1
Well, I am intrigued by the story. For some reason, potty mouth Bella is really funny to me, so I am sure I will love this! :)
Reviewer: saluki168 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 12
I was so excited to see an update of this story in my inbox. I was even more excited when Bella finally realized how much Edward meant to her. I can't wait to find out Edward's reaction to her declaration.
Reviewer: tigerladee (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 12
im really feeling for jasper at the moment...
Reviewer: lc1831 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 12
Ohh that was such a good chapter! I love Bella's realization that what she had been seeking for years was love and that Edward brought it to her.
Are we going to hear from Jasper anytime soon? I think his pov would be perfect for the next chapter, I'd love to see his reaction to the Alice and Edward's kiss and then Bella and Edward's right afterwards.
Can't wait for the next one!!
Reviewer: forksfan86 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 12
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Author's Response: thanks? haha
Reviewer: forksfan86 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 11
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Reviewer: forksfan86 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 10
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Reviewer: forksfan86 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 9
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Reviewer: forksfan86 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 8
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Reviewer: forksfan86 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 02:36 AM · On: Chapter 7
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Reviewer: forksfan86 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 6
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Reviewer: forksfan86 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 4
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Reviewer: forksfan86 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 3
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Reviewer: forksfan86 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 2
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Reviewer: xoTinyxo (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 11
so devilish!!!!! can't wait to find out what happens
Reviewer: samanthayh (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 11
omg, unexpected! haha,
Reviewer: samanthayh (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 10
wow, there alll a buch of whores eh! well fuck they should all have a big orgy then!! yeah that would be best ;P if it were me tho, i would be liek wtf , seeing edward and alice making out, i mean its one thing to hear, but to see that.
Reviewer: samanthayh (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 7
1maybe she's a little but more like jasper than jasper thinks? hmm. could alice brandon be just as much of a whore as bella swan? could jasper hale turn out to be a hypocrite for being pissed at bella? :: yes and yes well i hope so...
2"He’s a whore. You’re a whore. Two whores can never work" Oh silly jasper, if bella and edward are whores they will know what to expect when they do fuck eachother then one of them leaves. thats there choice..
3how convinent jasper an alice meet like that
good chapter7
Reviewer: samanthayh (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 1
saw the first 2 chapters of this on antoher site, and was hoping to read more so i googled the summary, so happy i found this one. more chapters and looks like its updated more.. :)
Reviewer: StarryStarryNight (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 11
I almost died when I saw an update from you!! And although its been forever I am sooo glad to read this chapter. As always it left me dying for more! I really hope that kiss between Alice and Edward spawned something in both Jasper and Bella...mayb a little jealousy! Always the true road to realizing your feelings lol! I can't wait to see Bella and Edward togther more.
Reviewer: mcnavy (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 11
Please don't take months to update this time
Author's Response: I won't. I promise.
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