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Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 17 (v)
Yippee! Nothing like a near death experience to catalyze the expression of feeling! So, what else did Carlisle need to talk to Charlie about?
Reviewer: subwife (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 17 (v)
What a great chapter! I like how you're not forcing Edward out of his shell so quickly that it isn't believable - good writing!
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 17 (v)
That was amazing!!! I haven't logged on in awhile but when I saw that you had updated I was sooo happy!!! Amazing chappy, you're an amazing writer and I cannot believe that you are willing to take the time to share your talent with us. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Anyways, this is amazing and I can not wait to see what you have happen next! The kiss part was so beautiful, so much better than I could've imagined!
Reviewer: choholic1155 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 17 (v)
i realy love this story and can't wait for more
choholic1155
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 17 (v)
This is a great story. I NEVER read the all human stories as I like my vampire Edward. For whatever reason, maybe b.c I just saw 3:10 to Yuma again (haha), I decided to try this. I am glad I did!
Reviewer: justareader (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 17 (v)
Yes! I love updates of much epicness! This chapter was wonderful, but I'm kind of waiting for James and the Blacks to pop up again. I feel like I should add in a Firefly quote, something about cursing sudden, but inevitable betrayal, but I think I'll leave that to the experts. I can't wait to read what happens next and I hope One Day Out West kicks ass in its categories!
Reviewer: TLee (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 17 (v)
Loving your story. Loving the healing taking place in this chapter.
Clever take on the bookstore, lost and threatened scene. Gun slinging Rosalie just perfect.
Reviewer: melizzymoo (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 17 (v)
eeeee. =] so cute. and quoting firefly isn't pretentious. just awesome. but i'm a nerd, so that might be why. haha. thanks for the update! it made my day. =]
Reviewer: twilightvamps (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 17 (v)
i think this is a very good story, and that the kiss scene was a good one. please keep writing!
Reviewer: TheEdwardYouWishYouHad (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 17 (v)
excellent chapter.
Reviewer: Sophia (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 17 (v)
hot hot .
Reviewer: kikabr (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 17 (v)
I just found this story yesterday and couldn't stop reading. I loved this last chapter. can't wait for more
Reviewer: micilyne (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 17 (v)
Nice. I can wait to see how your wrap things up witht he Blacks.
Reviewer: 1216 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 17 (v)
great chapter! Also great to include the rescue scene from the series, altered very well for the time and place setting of your story!
Reviewer: amorvincitomnia (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 17 (v)
I love Emo-Cowboy-Eddie. And hooker Rose, and totally innocent Bella. Yay you.
Reviewer: angelic_ninja (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 04:59 AM · On: Chapter 17 (v)
A fantastic chapter, loved the tension and then the end was perfect. Thank You.
Reviewer: Veronica_ (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 17 (v)
Great chapter. They finally did it! And it was perfect. You did an amazing job writing it. Definitely worth the wait. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 17 (v)
Amazing, amazing work! This chapter is so fabulous!
I'm totally going to vote for you! And I love how you included ultra-protective Edward in here! And the kiss was so great!
Please update soon!
Reviewer: femflorest5 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 12:09 AM · On: Chapter 17 (v)
I liked your intown comparison. The Kiss was perfect for the time... I really want to know alittle of the convo. of what C, C, and E had after they left B with A for the night. I really like your story!!
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 17 (v)
zomigosh! YAYAYAYAYAY! that was awesoem!
Reviewer: lomasi (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 17 (v)
This chapter was enthralling (as I've come to expect form this story).
Reviewer: furious kitten (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 17 (v)
I liked all of your parallels with canon in this chapter. And the kiss scene was amazing!
Reviewer: the_other_cullen (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 17 (v)
Oh my god... I want a kiss like this one with the rain coming down. So romantic!! Now just to find the guy to kiss in the rain....
Love this story!!
Reviewer: SarahElizabeth (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 17 (v)
This has to be the most creative and amazing version of the meadow scene I've ever read. I adore your characters. My guess is that Carlisle has to speak with Charlie about Edward courting Bella?
Reviewer: LaLa Land Lover (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 17 (v)
I love Westward *sighs*
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