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Reviewer: lilsabeth (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 2

Hey i really like this, and i super hate tanya!!i did think it was a bit weird how edward just trusted nessie so quickly with babysitting. parents seem to be very protective and only agree to stuff like that when the kid gives them references etc. but it is your story so i go along with it :D anyway keep writing because i really want to know what happens next!!


Reviewer: saracullen1234 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

I like it.


Reviewer: dihenydd (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 1

Thanks for sharing your work, I am looking forward to reading the next chapter.  It is really refreshing to read a story where James isn't a villain, but just someone with flaws, like all of us.  It is nice to see that he is responsible and loving to his daughter, I kind of hope that isn't going to change.

I think the best stories are ones where the characters come to life and we can understand and relate to them to the extent that the story flows naturally from their characters and motivations.  This shows the promise of being one of those.

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